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Posted: 13 years ago
prem is a nice guy..
Bt hamari Geet ke dil me to alrdy Maan ki tasveer basi hui hai...
N Adi ki actress to Geet hogi m sure...
Bt actor kon hoga... Maan??

Waitin eagerly..
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Posted: 13 years ago
prem has already fallen for her...

continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks for your love and support dear friends. Here is the next part I hope each one of u would enjoy reading it.
Very soon I would be introducing some twists in this FF.The twists might be beautiful but very soon it will take an emotional turn. I would just like to say one thing START PREPARING YOURSELF TO HATE MAAN
love- Piya
PART 6
Maan: Samjhtha kya hai wo apne aap ko? [What does he think about himself?]
Geet: Tum kiski baat kar rahe ho Maan? [Who r u referring to Maan?]
Maan: Woh useless Director mujhe MSK ko 5 minute ka role de raha tha uski khud ki aukaad nahi hai aur mujhe apni aukaad bata raha tha [That useless Director was offering me a role of 5 minutes he does not stand a chance to stand in front of me and he was trying to show me my status]
Geet: Chodo na Maan filhaal hum struggling actors hai kuch time toh lagegana khud ko establish karne k liye [Forget it Maan right now we are struggling actors it will take us some time to proove ourselves]
Maan: (angry) Struggling actor main nahi tum ho Geet kum se kum maine ek movie ki hai bhale hi wo movie flop ho gayi ho phir bhi mujhe tum se zyada experience hai tum toh har din bus thokre khathi rehti ho aaj tak tumhe kisisne koi mauka nahi diya par maine khud ko ek baar prove kar diya hai [I am not a struggling actor Geet let me remind u I have already done one movie; it is true that the movie was a flop but I feel that I have already proven my worth. I am much more experienced than u; it might be a daily routine for u to get rejected as no one has given u a single chance till date but this is not the case with me]
Maan: Tumhe shayad aise chothe mothe role suit hothe honge par mera naam superstars k category mein hi achha lagta hai waise bhi Geet tum mein wo baat nahi jo ek achhi actress mein honi chahiye iss liye galti se bhi khud ko mere acting capabilities k saath compare mat karna tum ek struggling actress ho sakthi aur shayad umr bhar struggle karti bhi raho mujhe isse koi farak nahi padtha par dubara kabhi bhi MSK ko ek struggling actor bulane ki galti mat karna warna main ye bhool jaayunga k tum meri best friend ho aur shayad mere muh se tumhare khilaf kuch galat nikal jaaye jisse shayad tumhe bura feel ho [Such ordinary roles might suit u Geet but MSK's name sounds good only in the category of superstars; to be frank personally I don't think that u have the quality to b a successful actress and hence u can't compare my acting capabilities with the ordinary acting skills of yours. U may be a struggling actress and it is quite possible that u continue to struggle throughout ur life that's none of my buisness but next time if u dare to call MSK a struggling actor then I might forget that u r my best friend I might utter some harsh words which may break ur heart]
Geet: (thinking) Ab aur kehne ko baaki bacha bhi kya hai Maan sab kuch toh tumne keh diya [What else do u want to say Maan u have told everything today]
Maan: Kya soch rahi ho? Itna bhi mat socho jab main ek established actor bun jaayunga toh tumhe bhi koi chotha motha role dilwadunga waise bhi tumhare liye koi humare ghar tak chalkar toh aanewala hai nahi iss liye dua karo k mera career chal pade [There is no need to think so much Geet don't worry once I get famous I will surely try and grab some small roles for u as it is no one is going to come to ur doorstep to offer u the role of the leading actress of a film so just pray to God that my career reaches its peak very soon]
Maan was removing his frustration on Geet but he was not caring about the feelings of his best friend
Geet could do anything for his happiness but she was not immune; her heart was extremely sensitive and today knowingly or unknowingly Maan had stabbed her innocent heart with his harsh and extremely rude words
He had openly confessed that she would no longer be a part of his life once he gets established as a star
Geet was already aware of this fact but she felt bad not because Maan would go away from her oneday but the actual reason for her grief was that Maan had termed her a REJECTED GIRL and he was sure that she will never taste success in her life
Maan gets up and goes to the kitchen; he didn't even think twice that he had broken her heart in the process of removing his frustration
Geet was still lost in her own world; Maan's words were haunting her but God had different plans for Geet
Geet goes to the washroom to wash her face as she was sure that this time she won't be able to control her emotions
Maan comes out with and exactly at that point of time the door bell rings
Maan opens the door and he was surprised to see his college friend Adi standing in front of his eyes
Adi was about to hug Maan when Maan forwarded his right hand in front of him
Maan thought that Adi was also struggling to make his mark and he did not like to be with any ordinary person
Maan: Are Adi tu yaha Mumbai mein kya kar raha hai? [Aditya what r u doing in Mumbai?]
Adi did not expect this question from Maan after all they were meeting after such a long time
Maan: (thinking) I hope ye Adi yaha ghar dhungne ya kaam maange k liye nahi aaya hai main khud ka intezaam abhi tak nahi kar paaya toh iski madat kaise karu. mujhe jald hi isse yaha se bhagana hoga [I hope Adi is not looking for some house or some job; it is getting difficult for me to establish myself why should I help someone else unnecessarily I need to get rid of him soon]
Geet: Aditya what a pleasant surprise
She immediately goes and hugs him
Maan: Ye Geet bhina isse bhi abhi aana tha? [What a bad timing of Geet]
Maan goes and sits on the sofa
Adi: Kaisi hai meri cute si behen? [How r u my sweet little sis?]
Geet: Ye baat tum andar aakar bhi puch sakthe ho [ U can ask this question after coming inside]
Adi: Tum nahi bhi bolti tab bhi poore haq se tere ghar mein dhaakil ho jaata [I would have entered ur house even without ur invitation I do have this right]
Maan takes a newspaper and pretends reading it
Maan: (thinking) Zabardasti gale padne ki koshish kar raha hai chahe jobhi ho main toh Adi se saaf saaf keh dunga k wo Pune wapas chala jaaye main uski koi madat nahi kar saktha[ He is unnecesarilly trying to get close whatever the case I will tell me straightaway that I can't help him and it's better if he goes back to Pune]
Geet was about to close the door
Adi: Geet darwaza band mat kar mera ek dost bhi hain mere saath wo bus apni gaadi park karke aatha hi hoga [Geet don't close the door my friend would be coming within few minutes after parking his vehicle]
Maan: (thinking) Toh strugglers ki fauz lekar aaya hai [It seems that he has got a whole army of strugglers with him]
Geet: Kaun hai wo? Kya main usse janti hoon [ Who is your friend do I know him?]
Maan: (thinking) Hoga koi aira gaira [Might be some useless fellow]
Aditya: Tumhara toh pata nahi par duniya k liye wo India ka sabse bada buisness tycoon hai Prem Singhania [I m not sure about u but the world knows him as the most successful business tycoon of India he is Prem Singhania]
Maan keeps the newspaper on the chair; he was surprised to hear Prem's name from Aditya's mouth
Prem: Main duniya ko toh nahi jaanta par Geet ko kabhi bhula nahi paayunga [I don't want to know about this world but I will never be able to forget Geet]
Maan gets up from his chair and goes to greet Prem
Maan: Hi Prem main MSK Aditya k college ka dost [ Hi Prem this is MSK college friend of Aditya]
Geet: Aap? [U?]
Prem: Aaj agar khuda se kuch aur bhi maang letha toh shayad meri saari tamanna aaj puri ho jaati [If I had wished for something else today then maybe God would have blessed me by fulfilling all those wishes]
Adi: Tu Geet ko pehchanta hai? [Do u know Geet?]
Prem: Jo ek baar inn aakhon ko dekh le wo kabhi bhi uss malikka ko bhul nahi paayega jo inn aakhon ki maalikin hai [There is not a single person in this world who will forget the owner of these beautiful eyes]
Maan: Aisi kya khaas baat hai Geet ki aakhon mein; kitni saadaran hia iski aakhein [There is nothing special in her eyes they r so ordinary]
Geet felt hurt by his words; Maan had once again rejected her and that too in front of a stranger
Prem looks at Maan for a second and then he moves his gaze back to the magical eyes of Geet
Prem: Main batatha hoon k mujhe inki aakhon mein kya nazar aa raha hai [I will tell u what can I read in her eyes]
PRECAP 1: Prem defines the beauty of Geet's eyes
PRECAP 2: Aditya offers Maan and Geet the movie
Okay guys I know it was a super short update but I will update this FF on Sunday again and tomorrow I would update my remaining FFs
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Love-Piya
Edited by piya- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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o god why did u do that maan ko itna selfish kyu dikha dia yar...
actually he hurt geet badly yr..but hats off vo phir bhi MSK ke saath hai
so adi is a mutual friend of prem and maan
waiting to know how story proceeds now...

loved the update on the whole
continue asap
Edited by minnie_tweetie - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Tooo Goood Lovedd ittt



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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update...

yes piya...u told d right thing...i started hating maan...he deserves a slap but more dan a slap...i want geet in d top n he should struggle all his life...

iss maan ko hum nehi jante hai...itna over confidence bhi sahi nehi hai...maan abhi hawan mein udd raha hai...jab zameen pad girega tab bahut der ho jayega...tab usse pata chalega usne kya khoya hai...usne toh heera samajhkar kanch ko apne daman pad bandhne ja raha hai aur asli heera ko kanch samajh kar door kar raha hai...isse bada bewukulf koi ho sakta hai...

its really amazing...

really loved it...

thank u sooo much fr such a lovely update...

continue nxt prt soon plz...

waiting...
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Posted: 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago
Ossum dear
really msk spoke so harsh words dear
wow a movie
waiting for the next psrt dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update..
maan was a lil too harsh n rude towards geet..
poor her..
wow nice precap..
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
beautiful update Piya di..!!

Maan ne to bohot buri tarah Geet ko hurt kia...
Geet bechari ko pehle hi pta tha ki Maan use bhul jaega.. Bt Maan ne apne words se use shatter hi kr dia..
Itna patthar dil dikha dia aapne Maan ko Piya di.. 😔 bt kya karen dats d concept of ur story.. Bt na Maan ko aise padhke bada dukh hta h..

Khair.. Maan ne Adi k sath bhi bada bura behave kia.. Use andar aane ko bhi nhi pucha.. N Prem ka naam sunte hi uth khada hua.. Huh... Selfish...

Umm.. M excitin to read he Prem wud describe Geet's beautiful eyes...
N Adi i knew ki Geet ko to puchega hi.. Bt Maan ko to puchna hi nhi chahie tha.. Huh..

Waitin eagerly for d nxt update.. 😊

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