FF-Where there's a will, there's a way[CH11; PG35]

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livelaughlove78

@livelaughlove78

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

dude where is the LOVE BUTTON ❤️

you should so continue writing, you can even write your own version of the DEK script like seriously that will be used for DEK season 2

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livelaughlove78

@livelaughlove78

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Swetha27
Hi Adden.I am also a ManVeer fan.Ur OS is so fab.Please do continue...Even I am eager to know what is the gift Uday gave to Manyata?As u described it as a CD,may be their childhood memories?Just a guess😉 and BTW I always love Uday but in this OS I am loving him more...😳

I also love UDAYYY

I think the gift is a CD of Akash's birthday party

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Dikshita

@Dikshi92

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Wow!!!
Awesome and wonderful os adden. Liked the way both of them felt something for each other.. That spark, that nervousness, that raw attraction is what we want to see in case of manveer.. 😍
Plz.. Plz do continue it.. 😊

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ArHiluv

@ArHiluv

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

she lands into the Prince's manly arms ... Her pink phone is almost going to drop, but she manages to hold onto it. As the fall her head rests on his shoulder and her back on his elbow, her waist in his hand, and her free hand in his other hand... her eyes in his eyes ... and her weight entirely on him.

I REALLY HOPE DIS HAPPEN SOON IN DEK😍😍

Plz continue soon...

My LIKE BUTTON is not working!!!!plz PM me!!!

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--ANGEL--

@--ANGEL--

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

awesome part...loved the romantic manveer moment...update soon...pm me

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ForeverForU

@ForeverForU

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

wow that was something dear...I am so dead😳...
PLZZZ continue this one and dont forget to PM me...I will be waiting for the next part to come😊

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atop

@atop

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Adden, it was just great. Loved every bit of it.

It is interesting to see the sparks flying but both feigning ignorance and would surely love to know what's in that CD case, maybe some videos of their childhood? or something with both of them which would send M into a state of deja vu. So looking forward for the next part, please continue soon.

Luv Atop