FF-Where there's a will, there's a way[CH11; PG35]

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WinterFire

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Posted: 13 years ago

#41

aww.. very nice.. the first one was really good as well as the second chapter 😊

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Sarah

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Posted: 13 years ago

#42

it was beautiful part filled wid alott of emotions thnkx for such a beautiful update!

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shivu124

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Posted: 13 years ago

#43

hey loved it please pm me wen u write again

add me to ur buddy list

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Posted: 13 years ago

#44

Aww, that was so beautiful! Are you going to turn this into a FF? Please do, loved Chapter 2 the bond between mother and daughter. And well Chapter 1? That was HAWT! Hayyyeee Rabba! If you continue please PM me!

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dumas

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Posted: 13 years ago

#45

awesome loved it and you should change it to ss or ff love the emotions it was well written and heart felt it was so perfect please pm and put english translation loved the update please update soon can't wait to read how she is going to make it up to uday

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Adden

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Posted: 13 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: Dikshi92
Ohh, adden i can't tell u how much i liked the update.. It was a great idea to gift manyata the CD. Both mother and daughter became so emotional.. Manyata was really touched.. The roka scene was really very cute.. And in the last scene i even had tears in my eyes.. I hope manyata will understand uday's love for her.. Uday deserves an hearty apology from manyata (or may be a kiss as a gift 😉 )

Thanks Sweety, I'm glad you liked the Update 😃 ... Aww. So nice of you hun xxx

Well we'll have to see what the Manyata Brain comes up with 😉

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Adden

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Posted: 13 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: pri01
Hi Adden first of all am sorry for coming late ...just caught sight of ur wonderful OS and read both chapters at one go. They are fabulous and beautifully written. Feel for UV that he is hurt due to Manyata rude behaviour but also happy that Manyata realised her mistake and appreciated Uv gift. Hope Akash will soon be out of the pic guess I can trust u for that😉😆

Plzzz do continue soon and add me in ur pm list.

Thxs for these beautiful OS🤗

Awh! It's Okay darling ... 😃

Thankyou Soo Much ... So Sweet of you.

Akash🤢 well I hate him just as much as you do, and I'm trying my best to think up of an idea to kick him out soon 😉

Thanks again, and I surely will PM you. 😃

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Adden

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Posted: 13 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: Kajpreet
Aww, that was so beautiful! Are you going to turn this into a FF? Please do, loved Chapter 2 the bond between mother and daughter. And well Chapter 1? That was HAWT! Hayyyeee Rabba! If you continue please PM me!

Hey, Thankyou Soo Much 😃

I'm thinking of changing it into a FF or a SS ... but I'm not sure yet, but I think I shoud 😕😆

Thanks Sweety, I'm glad you liked it 😃

I surely will PM you 😃

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Adden

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Posted: 13 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: dumas
awesome loved it and you should change it to ss or ff love the emotions it was well written and heart felt it was so perfect please pm and put english translation loved the update please update soon can't wait to read how she is going to make it up to uday

Heyy Sweety, its nice to see you on this forum too 😃 ...

Thankyou soo much, I'm greatful you liked it 😃

yes, I'm thinking of transforming this into a SS or FF ... let's see 😳

Thanks a ton xx