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adden it was beautiful plz update soon cant wait to read nxt part n plzz do pm me:)
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Heyy Everyone 😃 How are you all? Hope everything is good. 😉 Anyways, I truely apologise for the delay ... I was busy with a lot of school work 😳 Thankyou soo much for the lovely comments, I read each and every one of them, and I absolutely love the fact that you all are really enjoying my work, Thankyou Soo Much 😃 Keep Commenting for this encourages me to write more 😉 Without any Further ado ...
:.Chapter 5.:
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She didn't know where to go or what to do, she was pinned against the wall by him ... She was growing soo uncomfortable with the proximity between them, and yet he kept making advances, coming closer and closer. It's winter season in Mumbai, and she was feeling soo hot, her body temperature rising every second, and the heat coming from his body was not helping the warmth in the atmosphere either. She couldn't help stare at his face, that smirk of his was worth drooling, she would've slapped herself at the thought but too bad, her hands were pinned ... But she could feel his grip on her hands losen, and his hands coming to hold her face, because he knew that she isn't going to move anymore, she was stilled or more like frozen there at spot.
Manyata was completely lost into his dark black pupils, as if those pair of eyes had hipnotised her, halted all her movement. Uday's face came closer ... and as it did she closed her eyes, he came closer ... till he was only a breath away, she could feel the warmth of his minty breath on her lips, she felt chills going down her spine. He felt desire brew into him, he wanted more ... he wanted to seal his lips with her's ... but yet he moved a step back ... Manyata not aware of him moving back, still had her eyes closed ... he looked at her innocent face, looking all the more angelic with those beautiful, large, restless eyes ... peacefully closed, and her face tensed ... waiting for him to kiss her ... the thought of her wanting his kiss brought a smile across his face, and he knew somewhere he did have an utter amount of affect on her, he soo wanted her badly especially after she was dressed in the beautiful pink net sari, that exposed her beautiful belly as the short tight blouse gave her the slim look, though she wasn't the slimmest thing alive, she was still attractive and beautiful in her own physique, her pink and silver jewelry high-lighting her fair skin tone, her lose straightened-hair complementing her features.
Manyata wondered what was happening, she couldn't feel the heat from his body anymore, she couldn't feel him too close to her, it has been 2 mins ever since and he still ... wait why was she waiting for him to come closer??? Have you gone mad Manyata?? she thought and instantly opened her eyes to find Uday standing about a feet away from her, smirking. She felt embarrassed and she knew she probably was pink at the cheeks by now. Uday walked upto her and guided his face towards her ears.
Uday: Not Now princess, abhi aap hamari wife nahi hein ... thora to intazaar kerein ... waisay aap blush kerti hui ek dum raapchik lagti hein, Haan Nahi To. (You're not my wife yet, have some patience, btw you look all the more beautiful while blushing) he said in a husky tone, with his official naughty smirk, pulling her leg.
Manyata was more than surprised at his antics, first he puts her in such an awkward position from which she had no way out, and then he hipnotises her and now he's making her feel like it was her who wanted that? She thought as her jaw dropped, and her eye-brows creased as her eyes went narrower, she lead her finger to his chest and pushed him back ...
Manyata: Aik to chori, uppar se seena zori ... UdayVeer too na zada bak bak matt ker ... (You're at fault and you're blaming me ... UV don't blabber too much) she said looking away from him angrily folding her hands.
Uday: Sorry Princess, hum to mazak ker rahe thay... aap to serious ho gayi ... (Sorry princess , I was only joking but seems like you took it seriously.) he said with a smile.
Manyata: Ohh teri ... Sorry se yaad aya ... Mujhe maaf kerde UdayVeer, mujhe tere saath aisa bartauv nahi kerna chahiye tha (OMG, Sorry reminded me ... Forgive me UV, I shouldn't have behaved with you so rudely).. she said with an apologetic look, and guilt simmering all over her face.
Uday never realised that the word "sorry" could ever bring him soo much ease within, and the feeling was over-whelming, not because someone apologised to him ... many people have done that before, but her ... when she said it, it felt so pure and warm ...
Uday: It's Okay Princess, Hum ne aap ko maaf kiya ... (I forgive you) he said while patting her right cheek with his hand and giving her a smile.
Manyata felt so relaxed, like her life depended on Uday forgiving her ... she couldn't explain how much of a burden was removed from her heart.
Manyata: Chal mere saath, mujhe tujhe kuch dena hai ... (Come with me, I need to give you somethign) She said, holding his hand and literally dragging him out of the room towards the living room in the pent house.
Uday wondered what she was soo eager to gift him, oh how he hoped it wasn't one of those everyday pricey branded gifts, he had soo many and he was sick and tired of them. Manyata looked around the room curiously, wondering where she left that crest with her sword in it ... she looked around and then her eyes settled on an antique type crest kept on the leather couch. She walked upto it with a smile, and dragged Uday along.
Uday: Princess...
Manyata interrupted him, and put her finger on her lip, signalling him to be quiet. And then she made him sit on the couch, and whilst holding the crest in her hands, she to sat down next to him eagerly.
Manyata: Uday, Thankyou uss tofey ke liye ... tum ne mujhe mera bachpan lotaya, thankyou ... (Thanks for that gift, you returned me my childhood, thankyou) she said with a gentle smile.
Uday simply smiled back, gesturing her a "you're welcome", but before he could say another thing, Manyata placed the crest in his lap ... he looked confusely at her ...
Manyata: Aise kya dekh raha hai? ye tere liye gift, meri taraf se ... ab khol isse ...(What are you looking at? this is a gift for you from me, now open it) ...
Uday: Likin Princess, iss me hai kya? (But princess what's in it?)
Manyata: Uffo, zyada sawaak matt pooch, jaldi se khol isse ... (Oh gosh, don't ask soo many questions, open it quick) ...
Uday carefully unlocked the crest and as he did, he was surprised to see what was in it ... it automatically brought a smile across his face, he didn't even realise the 100 watt smile that shone from his left to the right ear ... and all he cared was to touch the plastic sword gently as if touching it slowly was bringing all the memories back, all those moments he spent as an innocent, sweet and lovely little boy, with no worries of his own and in a happy world that seemed to be so vague now. He felt like a little boy again, and as he held the sword in his hand, he swung it in a sword-fight manner like he used to when he was a kid. He felt like he was back. Manyata was not the only person missing for 16 years, someone else went missing to, someone else was kidnapped that day to, but no one bothered to look for that person, no one heeded any attention to his where abouts, and happily accepted to live life without him, yes that person was none other than the little, innocent, fun loving child Uday ... for whom life was like a flower, colourful and full of sweet fragrance ... he went missing along with Manyata and now life for him was like a political book.
Manyata stared at Uday as he glee-fully looked at the sword, he had been looking at it for the last 5 minutes, and she had been carefully studying his reaction, she knew that this was the perfect gift for him, she knew that he had a strong memory linked to it ... he then carefully moved his fingures across the name carved on the swords handle in English, it said "Manyata" ... and he smiled as he turned to look at an amused Manyata who watched him enjoy her gift.
Uday: Manyata, ye to tumhari hai ... (this is yours). he said giving her a questioning yet happy look.
Manyata: Jaanti hoon, aur ye bhi jaanti hoon ke tumne apni talwar tor di thi ... wo be isliye kyunke uss talwar se mujhe bachpan me chote ayi thi ... aur tum bohut roye the ... (I know, I also know the fact that you broke your own sword just because it caused me to be wounded, and you also cried a lot) ...
Uday looked away sadly, he still felt guilty about it ...
Uday: I'm sorry Manyata, mai tumhe dard nahi dena chahta tha ... likin ... (I'm sorry manyata, I didn't mean to hurt you but...) he said trying to explain his 15 year old mistake ...
Manyata: Dekh UdayVeer, mai jaanti hoon ke tune galti se kiya, tou uss sub ke bare me soch ker dukhi na ho ... isliye to mai tumhe apni talwar gift ker rahi houn, tera thankyou kerne ke liye ... (UV, I know you weren't at fault, don't feel guilty about it ... that is why I have brought my sword to gift it to u, as a thankyou gift.) she said with a smile.
Uday smiled at her, she returned him something that he had once immensly missed as a child, she had satisfied him and freed him off his guilt, he felt soo happy, he literally hurled his arms around Manyata and hugged her tightly, his eyes closed and a smile across his face ...
Uday: Thankyou sooo much Princess, aap ne humme itna acha tofa diya ... (You gave me such a precious gift) ... I love it. He said while hugging her.
The hug had jolted Manyata a bit, but she didn't mind giving him a friendly hug back, for she to felt like she had found her child-hood friend, the one who didn't flirt with her or remind her of the fact that she was soon to be his wife .. and all that crap. She smiled as he pulled away from the hug, and told Uday that it was getting late and she ought to leave now, and on her way out she bumped into Unnati who just made her way in. She gave Unnati a quick hug and left. Unnati watched as Manyata left, and she was happy that things went well between her Dada and her friend. She walked upto where Uday sat, still starring at the tiny sword in his hand, smilling and lost in a world of his own ... Uday noticed his sister walk upto him, but he was too busy to pay any attention to her ... Unnati walked behind the couch, bended a little and whispered into his ears.
Unnati: You're in love Dada ...
With that said, she made her way to her room, while Uday turned to look at Unnati leave, and blushed at her words as they hovered and echoed in his ears.
At Akash's house, his mother was growing impatient waiting for her son to return from his job hunt, just when the doorbell rang, she walked to the door and saw a sulky Akash stand there exhausted from yet another unsuccessful day of being jobless ... She let her son in, and from the look of his expressive emotions, and almost tears in his eyes, she knew that he made no improvement in finding himself a job. She has had enough of it, she isn't going to let her son and more importantly her and her husband suffer any longer, she isn't going to let her 2 penny worth reputation and self-respect go down the drain, she and her husband have to now put the plan that they soo well planned the other day, in action or else they could bid their so called "middle-class luxurious life" a goodbye and return to that takky Chawl. She is so slef-centred and money hungry, she didn't even care to ask her son if he was alright or not, instead she walked to the room, more like storming ... Akash felt his eyes tear up as his own mother turned her back on him ... he felt like a "good-for nothing useless begger" going around from street to street searching for a job, he was soo desperate to find one, he was ready to work as a watchman, but he failed at that to, some other less-educated guy was chosen instead of him for that job, such a failure...he thought as tears made their way down his face.
Akash: Tang aa gaya houn mai iss lachari ki zindagi se, Moniya se pyaar kerke mai to sarak pe he aa gaya ... nikamma ho gaya houn mai ... Koi be kaam kerne ko tayar houn mai, bass paise delwa de bhagwaan ... aur ye bak wale be loan ke peeche pere hue hein ... (I'm fed of this life unemployed, Lovign moniya has got me to lose my job, I'm good for nothing, I'm ready to do anything for money, just give me a job God, and these bankers, they're behind my back for the loan installments) he said desperately starring at the ceiling while crying.
As he looked infront of him, he saw his two parents looking at him with a constructive look, he knew something was up their slieves, yet if it was anything that could help him, he was up for it.
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Fingers Crossed 😕 Hoping this wasn't too bad 😳 Sorry for a short update, will be updating soon, I promise 😃 For now I'll have to stop here, as I'm seriously having a bad head ache. Hope you don't mind 😊 Please do leave comments and don't forget to hit 'Like' if you liked this chapter 😊 Any constructive criticism, welcomed with a smile 😉 Thankyou For Reading. 😃
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Edited by Adden123 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome...i loved the update..just too good...nice...continue soon..😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved it...the almost kiss was superb😍
awww...manyata gave UV her sword and finally the Hug😳

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Adden, that was beautiful!
Thanks for update dear, I'll be waiting!
Sure it was short but it was something that I enjoyed reading!
Just loved it. 😊
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that was so good yet again... really liked it... thanx for the pm again 😊
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Awesomeee update
Really lovely
Amazing
Pleasee continue soon
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Im loving your story ...please please add me to your pm list . Eagerly awaiting the next part!!!!!

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