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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: lovely7010

The cover pic is awesome...

Thanx a lot dear !! 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: loveukriyaansh

plzzz pm me! i hav added u as a buddy!


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: IndianBollywood

short update but its good and please can you pm me when you update :D


Thanx a lot !!
And ya, for sure !! 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
when r u gonna update??😭😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
just read your ff its awesome, superb...loved it very much
please pm me for the next update please
i am sending you buddy request please accept it
and continue soon waiting eagerly for the next part
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: achuAR

when r u gonna update??😭😭

Right now !! 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: luv_arsha

just read your ff its awesome, superb...loved it very much

please pm me for the next update please
i am sending you buddy request please accept it
and continue soon waiting eagerly for the next part


Thanx a lot dear !!
Yes, sure !!
Done !!
Yes, next part - updating right now !!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Recap : Everyone is at Swayam's home.

Episode 14 : *Planning*-
Sharon - Hum sabko yahaan kyun bulaya hai ?
Rey : I'll tell you that.
Rinni : Arey koi bhi batado, but at least batao toh.
Rey : Actually na guys, wo na - woh main yeh keh raha tha ki ..
Vishakha : Is everything fine na ?
Rey : Ya Ya..
Vishakha : Then why the hell are you stammering ?
Amar : Exactly dude.
Rey : Fine, it's about Kria guys.
Everyone : Kria ??
Nilesh - K-k-k-Kria ? (Lost in her dreams) [ You know Nilesh Na - Koi hot ladki dikhi nahi aur woh toh gaya - Lattoo]
Both Rey and Simmi get irritated by this response of Nilesh.
Bharat : Control dude.
Simmi : Urgh ! Exactly ! Shut up Nilesh.
Nilesh : (Returning back to the real) What maine kya kiya ?
Simmi : (Shocked) Kya kiya ? Well Well Mr. STML you should ask kya nahi kiya ! Lunatic !!
Nilesh : Oh, give it a break !!
Rinni : Wait, what's STML ?
Simmi, Vishakha and Neha : Short Term Memory Loss !!!!
Simmi : Idiot !!!
This angered Rey more.
Rey : Cut it out guys !
Swayam walk up to Rey who is still standing near the window. He holds him by the shoulder coz he could see that Rey was angry. He then turns and looks at the others.
Swayam : Exactly guys. Anyways, just promise us that you would not freak out when we tell you the truth.
Everyone: Of course.
Sharon : Yeah, but tum batao toh baat kya hai ? What's wrong guys ? And Kria ? What happened to her ? Woh theek toh hai na ? I mean..
Rey (lost) : I wish.
Sharon : What do you mean ? Guys, what's wrong ? Why are you behaving so different ? Kuch hua hai kya ? Look Swayam you tell, kya hua Kria ko ? Guys, kuch bologe bhi tum.
Swayam to himself : Wow, kitni cute lagti hai meri Siron hyper mode mein. Aw, look at that face. But I can't see her like this. She looks the best with a smile.
Whereas Sharon was expecting an answer.
Sharon : That's it ! I'm gonna call her and talk directly to her.
This woke Swayam from his dream. He looked up at Sharon who was dialing a number. He realised she was calling Kria. He went forward and held her in order to stop her.
Sharon looked up at Swayam who was staring at her. She then looked at his hands which held hands. Sharon looked back at him and then begun the great LOOK LOOK HAWA HAWA. Sharon came back to her senses and she pulled her hand back. Swayam also came back to his senses with this action of hers.
He smoothened his expressions and spoke (in a dreamy way )
Swayam : Sharon, woh baat kuch aisi hai ki ...
Sharon : Haan bolo Swayam.
Swayam tells everyone what they saw in the rehersal hall today. Whereas all the while Rey was looking out the window. He was not able to concentrate.
Rey to himself : Why was baatcutter doin a sad dance ? I can't see her like this. Usne meri koi baat nahi kaati. I mean how is this possible. There is something wrong. And yes, how can I forget !! All that calls and crying ? And whose this Muffin ? What did that mean ?
An unexpected, intense fury made his hands clench into fists. Whose it ? The pain was more than anything He'd felt before. Any other human would have to be on the point of death to feel this pain - any other human would not live through it. He din't understand his emotion - it was such a tangle of pain and rage and desire and despair. He had never felt it before. He couldn't put a name to it. But he ignored it. He wanted know about it. He was lost deep in himself and his "Kria world". He decided nothing was more important right now than Kria and her pain.
Neha (interrupting Rey's self talk and breaking the silence) : How is this possible ? I mean Kria ne mujhe toh iss bare mein kuch bhi nahi bataya. I can't believe this ! Rey Swayam, are you both sure ? I mean it was Kria only na, and not someone else ?
Rey : I am a 110% sure. It was my baat...
Swayam (loudly) : Haan Haan guys, it was Kria only.
He shot Rey a "are you out of your mind" look to which all Rey replied was "I don't know anything" look.
Rey : So the thing is that, we have to do something. Do something to get Kria into "The Louians". Think Guys, think something.
They all move here and there thinking.
Neha : Idea and then makes a sad face, disagreeing with her idea herself before other could even ask about it.
Nilesh also kept on moving in all the directions saying "Kuch toh karna padega, Kuch toh karna padega" !
Suddenly Sharon starts jumping up and down happily and excitted. Swayam comes to her and -
Swayam : Kya hua Sharon ?
Sharon : Guys I have a brilliant idea.
Vishakha : How are you so sure that it's brilliant huh ? Woh toh hum decide kareinge.
Sharon : I know guys. So wanna listen ?
Swayam : Sure, bolo ?
Sharon tells her idea to everyone.
Neha : Wow what an idea Sharon. Thank you so so so much.
Swayam takes Sharon into an unexpected hug. (Background tune - Pehla Nasha Instumental) Sharon is shocked from this move of swayam but she hugs him back.
Swayam : Thanx a lot Sharon. I love you so much for doing this. You are the best. Thank you so much. You're too good a friend. I pray sabko tum jaisi dost mile. Thanx a lot Siron.
Sharon is shocked at these words of Swayam. She was even more shocked when he said that he loved her. Her heart reacted to it. Her heartbeat sped. But she doesn't want to spoil this moment. So she hugs him tighter and -
Sharon : It's OK Swayam. It's absolutely fine. I mean it was my duty. Woh kehte hain na a friend in need is a friend in deed.
Swayam : Fir bhi ..
But Sharon pulls herself back so that she could see his face. She keeps her finger on his lips and -
Sharon : Shhh !! Chup-bilkul. Kaha na it's OK.
Saying that she hugs him back.
Both of them come back to their senses after a long time and notice that everyone around was looking at them shocked with a "What is this happening" expression. They are not able to meet each other's eyes and feel awkward. Rey understands it. All this while he was smiling to see that finally Swaron track aagey badh raha hai.
Rey : So Sharon what's the first step of your plan ? (moving towards her)
Swayam is really grateful to Rey for changing the topic. She looks at him with a "Thanx a lot" expression, to which Rey just winks and looks back at Sharon.
Sharon : Well guys, you just wait and watch. It's gonna be fun and I think ki our plan's gonna work. Else, fingers crossed.
Rey : Then go ahead Sharon.
Sharon : Sure Rey !! She turns, takes out her phone and calls someone.

That's all for now guys. Hope you all like it. Don't forget to hit the like button and comment. Guys it was a long-sa-update, so I wish to see long long comments as well. Thanx a lot !!

Precap : Kria enters the college in her car and is surprised.
Edited by Angelic_Aditi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
PM's Later !! 😊
Edited by Angelic_Aditi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
its awesome part...loved it very much👏
and nilesh kabhi bhi nai sudar sakta har hot ladki par line marta hai🤣
and swaron romance was awesome ...loved it❤️
and reyam chemistry is superb they are always there for each other rescue 😉
continue soon waiting eagerly for the next part😍

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