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Posted: 13 years ago

#231

this is the best yet!!! love the dance and every ounce of connection and word in that dance. heartwarming. i'm glad arnav is ready to support khushi, but i hope when he finds out he will remain by her side.

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Rehanna aka Parri

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Posted: 13 years ago

#232

the song and feeling tht come across are so nicely putted ...so romantic love it love it love it...and akash and payal eye lock scene ...lolzzz

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Shobhana

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Posted: 13 years ago

#233

You've planned on making me cry buckets havent you ??
How amazing it was written...The words woven so neatly..the chapter had an amazing flow and I could feel myself floating with it.,...
the dance...It literally made me cry ...
And I just love the way you engulfed the song into the story...
Their feelings...Especially the way Arnav begs Khushi to share it with him
And the ending...where Khushi feels weightless...I guess you'd feel that when your heart breaks...
loved it yaara
Thanx for the PM
waiting for the next part sooner

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Glimmer

@Glimmer

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#234

That was a superb update !!!!!!
The dance sequence was beautiful !!!!
The way you described their emotions according to to the lines and the eye conversation which they were having was simply WOWW !!!!!!
Very interesting precap !!!! He finally asked payal !!!!
Can't wait to read more !!!! Thnx for the pm !!! Update soon !!

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Water

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Posted: 13 years ago

#235

OMG

Beautiful yet painful

Happiness was there, yet so far away

Serenity and peace present yet unable to reach

The snake and his ever present aura😡, such a %&*, I hate the snake

Cannot wait for the next part though...

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Tanu

@ytanuja

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#236

Awesome, u have put up their emotions towards each other so well, wonderful job.

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tina_1234

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Posted: 13 years ago

#237

very nyc emotional part..loved it !!

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ChocoBloc_12

@ChocoBloc_12

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Posted: 13 years ago

#238

What a beautiful and emotional update...whilst reading it, it felt so real...i love how they both understand each other... and the way they talk through their eyes... honestly the way you describe their emotions is phenomenal :) Thanks for the PM... can't wait for the next update... hopefully Khushi tells Arnav everything :)

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meenaluma

@meenaluma

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#239

great part liked a lot pls continue soon

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dumas

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Posted: 13 years ago

#240

awesome update loved it that was perfect and beautiful written the song was just right finally payal realized that arnav would do anything for khushi ,he knows something is wrong he know his wife and he knows how much she loves him and know from her eyes and her body movement that this snake is involve some how and thank god he is smart and caring of he feeling and thrusting her to tell him and finally she has realize that this will do anything for her that he will walk through hell for her all she has to do speak up loved how they expressed their feeling with out saying a word loved it that was perfect and heartfelt sweet beautiful and well written thank you so much for a fantastic update loved it and thanks for the pm

Edited by dumas - 13 years ago