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riya

@Riyaa16

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Posted: 13 years ago

#521

Originally posted by: ridzzi
awesome update...👏
liked veers surprise very much...n finally he proposed her officially...😛
n neha...good...thoda pareshan toh karne ka haq hai...don't confess it so soon...let him be restless...😉

''...veer placed his hand on her waist for a dance..then suddenly music start from somewhere..she shocked n turned to saw..but veer pulled her towards him and start dance...both of them looked at each other..smiled...and she shyly lowered her eyes..he still gazed at her beautiful eyes...''

Ek Din Aap Yoon Humko Mil Jayenge
Phool Hi Phool Raahon Mein Khil Jayenge
Maine Socha Na Tha
Ek Din Aap Yoon Humko Mil Jayenge
Phool Hi Phool Raahon Mein Khil Jayenge
Maine Socha Na Tha

''...she smiled and looked all over again...veer blithe to saw her happy...''

Ek Din Zindagi Itni Hogi Haseen
Jhoomega Aasmaan Gaayegi Ye Zameen
Ek Din Zindagi Itni Hogi Haseen
Jhoomega Aasmaan Gaayegi Ye Zameen
Maine Socha Na Tha

''...she gazed at him lovingly...veer embraced her...she lost in his arms both of them hugged each other...''

Dil Ki Daali Pe Kaliyaan Si Khilne Lagin
Jab Nigaahein Nigaahon Se Milne Lagin
Dil Ki Daali Pe Kaliyaan Si Khilne Lagin
Jab Nigaahein Nigaahon Se Milne Lagin

''...he caressed her hairs...and moved his finger on her hand...she pulled him back..but he grasped her again...and smell her fragrance and lost in her features ...kissed on her ears n then on cheek...she turned to saw him..veer looked at her passionately...she shyly turned her face..veer looked at her lips and moved more closer...''

Ek Din Is Tarah Hosh Kho Jayenge
Paas Aaye To Madhosh Ho Jayenge
Maine Socha Na Tha
Ek Din Aap Yoon Humko Mil Jayenge
Phool Hi Phool Raahon Mein Khil Jayenge
Maine Socha Na Tha

''...suddenly it brightened up with different lights...this was the beautiful place she ever see...''

Jagamagati Hui Jaagti Raat Hai
Raat Hai Ya Sitaaron Ki Barsaat Hai
Jagamagati Hui Jaagti Raat Hai
Raat Hai Ya Sitaaron Ki Barsaat Hai

''...this place sparkled by many lights...she gazed all over surprisingly with widened eyes...and saw at ground which have a small path to reach the table is completely covered with flowers...she was completely surprised to saw the heaven in front of her...''

Ek Din Dil Ki Raahon Mein Apne Liye
Jal Uthenge Mohabbat Ke Itne Diye
Maine Socha Na Tha
Ek Din Zindagi Itni Hogi Haseen
Jhoomega Aasmaan Gaayegi Ye Zameen
Maine Socha Na Tha

''...he bend his knee in front of her...and extended his hand with a flower-''neha i love u..i love u...i can't live without u...''

Ek Din Aap Yoon Humko Mil Jayenge
Phool Hi Phool Raahon Mein Khil Jayenge
Maine Socha Na Tha

''... she took the flower and put her hand into his hand...he stand up and wore her a diamond ring in ring finger..she shocked to see the ring in her finger...she felt very happy and blithe...he kissed her hand...and then her forehead-''i love u''she felt as she was on top of the world...she didn't believed on herself...is it true...he purposed her...''

Maine Socha Na Tha
Maine Socha Na Tha .
Maine Socha Na Tha
Maine Socha Na Tha ...😍

update soon...
luv u...😊

thanks dear for ur lovely comment and for a beautiful song i loved it very much😉😃😃
ur choice of songs is very gud😛
this song is so perfect na😊
i loved it😛
will update soon😛
luv u too😆😛

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riya

@Riyaa16

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#522

Originally posted by: sanyogitaprc
aaawww...superb dear 👏...

NEER scenes r so cute😊...& he finally proposed her 😳...loved it...

thanks dear😛for ur lovely comment😛😛

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riya

@Riyaa16

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#523

Originally posted by: sweetnandu
awww.. so sweet...😳

thanks dear 4 liking😛😛

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riya

@Riyaa16

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#524

Originally posted by: prahelika
lovely update dear😳...
loved the NEER scenes...😳
veer is really a romantic bf and husband(in future😆)...
the surprise was so beautiful...😛
but now neha showing attitude😉...
i luv u toh use bolni padegi😳...naughty girl(not more than e and rashu😆)
hamare already confused veer ko aur kitna zyada confused kar diya😆...
dhruv and pooja so cute...😳
at least inke kahani toh right track pe a gayi...
i always hate tanya part🤢...
pz update soon dear...though u do it always😃

thanks dear 4 ur comment😛
will update very soon😛

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riya

@Riyaa16

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#525

Originally posted by: SonaliDhone
very Nice part 👏 👏

Veer proposed Neha

That's greate

Loved their scene😛

Poor Veer didn't get... 😆

Neha , veer ko ita bhi mat satao 😉

update soon dear⭐️

thanks dear 4 ur comment😛
will update soon😊

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riya

@Riyaa16

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#526

Edited by tejjo - 13 years ago

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shruja

@shruja

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#527

thanks for updates n pms
sorry for late reply
loved all updates
liked very making balance between two ladies
and all hum saath saath hai get together for movie
loved veer surprise to neha!!

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riya

@Riyaa16

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#528

Originally posted by: shruja
thanks for updates n pms
sorry for late reply
loved all updates
liked very making balance between two ladies
and all hum saath saath hai get together for movie
loved veer surprise to neha!!

thanks dear for ur sweet comment😛😛😛
im miss u and ur comment😊
well thanks dear😊

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riya

@Riyaa16

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#529

part 26

next morning(HOLI SPECIAL)

veer was still sleeping...its almost 9 am...when diya entered in his room having colours in hand...she went slowly towards his bed and sit beside him...he was in deep sleep ...so she carefully made moustache and beard on his face...after that she leave from the room while laughing...and joining other family member on breakfast table

diya-''happy holi maa papa and bhai''

all of them wished her back...but shushma little angry with veer's behavior so she nodded slightly

sushma to nivi...veer abhi tak so rha h ?tumhe pta h na ki hume ye sab pasand nhi h..aaj holi h or aaj bhi wahi roj ka drama''she was really angry

nivi silently listen her -''didi hum abhi jaakar use uthate h''

as she moved shushma stopped her and said -''koi jarurat nhi h use sone do..aaj use breakfast mat dena kal apne aap time se uth jayega''she angrily went to her room.

diya made a sad face and said-''aaj ke din ki shuruwaat itni buri hui h to poora din hi bura jayega''and looked at dhruv-''bhai kya is holi pe bhi hume har baar ki tarah holika ki kahani sunni padegi pura din...wo kahani mujhe acche se yaad ho gyi ...agar uska exam hua na to mein hi first aayungi''

dhruv smiled and said-''diya har baar hota h to is baar bhi hoga hi ''rudra-''dhruv mujhe yahan is jagran mein nhi baithna mujhe holi khelni h dosto ke sath or sapna ke saath''

dhruv-''rudra maa ne ghar mein poja rakhwayi h to tum holi khelne bahar kaise jaa sakte ho...''

rudra-''to kya har saal ki tarah bhi hum bina holi khele hi reh jayenge''rudra n diya made a sad face and leave for their room

after sometime

veer's phone rang...he annoyingly turned on other side...but his phone ranged continuously ...he stretched his hand and picked up the phone lazily without opening eyes...soon his eyes opened completely to hear her voice

neha-''happy holi veer''

he smiled and said-''i love u too''

she was surprised and said-''veer meine haapy holi bola h wo nhi bola''

veer smiled smirkly and said-''accha kya nhi bola tumne''

neha-''wo jo tumne bola''

veer-''han...han bolo na kya bola meine''

neha-''arey wahi i lov''and she suddenly stopped and said arrogantly -''kyun bolun mein meine tumhe holi wish karne ke liye phone kiya tha...bye''

veer smiled faded-''ok ok phone mat katna...happy holi waise mujhe yaad nhi tha ki aaj holi h...''

neha-''kya tumhe pta nhi tha ki aaj holi h ...kitne bhulakkad ho tum ...or abhi tak so rhe ho sharm nhi aati itne bade ho gye ho phir bhi itni der tak sote ho''

veer -''to kya jo bade ho jaate h wo der tak nhi so sakte''

neha-''nhi..chalo utho jaldi se or sabko wish karo..jaldi''

veer-''ok ok abhi jaata hun..waise tum aaj kya kar ri ho''while smiling

neha-''mein kahin nhi...waise mein holi nhi khelti hun to aaj pura din ghar mein hi rahungi''

veer frowned-''kya...tum holi nhi khelti ho''she smiled and said-''nhi baba''

veer-''to mere sath bhi nhi khelogi''and made a childish face''

neha-''kisike saath nhi khelungi..ab jao jaakar tyaar ho jao ..bye''

he saw at her photo and said to himself-''this is not fair yeh hmaari pehli holi h or tum mere saath holi nhi khelogi..''and hugged the pillow

then he went downstairs and hugged dhruv from behind-''happy holi dhruv''

dhruv surprisingly -''veer tumhe yaad tha ki aaj holi h...strange''

veer frowned and sit in front of him-''to tumhe kya laga tha ki mein bhul gya hun mujhe sab yaad tha''dhruv rudra and diya burst into laughter to see his face...

he was confused and said-''tun sab aise kyun has rhe ho jaise mujhe pehli baar dekha h''

nivi came downstairs and saw his face and said-''veer yeh sab kya h beta'
he hugged his mother and said-''dekho naa maa yeh sab mujhe dekh ke has rhe h''

nevi also laughed and said-''hasenge nhi to kya karenge...subah uthte hi rang laga liya''he quickly touched his face and saw colour

he frowned at diya...andshe ran from it...veer-''diya tujhe chodunga nhi mein''

she went upstairs and veer ran behimd her but his mother stopped him and said-''veer chod use or jaldi se fresh ho jaa...aaj ghar me pooja h ma''

he contracted his forehead and said-'aaj bhi pooja oh no...maa har saal to hoti h pooja..phir baar karaane ka kya matlab h';

his mother smiled and said-''beta badi maa ne tum sab ke liye hi pooja rakhwaayi h to jao jaldi se tyaar ho jao''

veer-''baad me ho jayunga tyaar pehle mujhe khaana h bhot jor se bhukh lagi h kal raat se kuch nhi khaaya meine''

aaj tumhe breakfast nhi milega''a strict female voice strike into his ears..he turned to looked at her...shushma saw him angrily-''yeh kya waqt h tumhaare uthne ka or breakfast karne ka''

veer silently saw her but didn't speak anything

sushma-''aaj tumhe breakfast nhi milega...or kal bhi der se uthoge to kal bhi nhi milega samjhe tum''
he nodded silently and looked at nivi...

nivi-''pooja ke baad kha lena thik h ...ab jao jaldi se jaakar fresh ho jao humne tumhaare kapde bed par rakh diye wahi pehan lena''

he went upstairs sadly...

after sometime everyone ready for pooja...the house decorated with flowers and lights...soon priests also arrived for pooja and sat on his place comfortably...everyone gathered on that place and sat behind him...but veer was not there...he was still in his room...sushma looked at nivi angrily...nivi pat diya and said to call him..she quickly went upstairs and came after few seconds and said to her mother -''maa bhai bas aa rhe h''and then veer came downstairs..in his black kurta and looked more handsome as always

nivi looked at him and smiled...he sat next to dhruv and whispered in his ears-''yeh pooja kab khatam hogi''

dhruv-''pehle shuru to hone do''rudra came nearer to veer and said-''yeh holika kitne baje tak maregi''

veer frowned and said-''yeh holika kaun h''rudra and dhruv pat his forehead together and said-''jiski kahani hum har saal sunte h ...tumhe kaise pta hoga tum to abroad me the na...itne saal humne jhela h usko''

veer-''to kya hum holi nhi khelenge''dhruv-''nhi kahani sunenge raat ka khaana khaakar so jayenge..thats it''

he made a very sad face and said-''oh no''

after sometime
pooja was finished and everyone took blessings of priest...veer came nearer and touched his feet..priest looked at him and smiled at him-''khush rho beta...''veer smiled back

priest about to move when nivi stopped him and said-''aap apna saaman bhulgye pandit ji''

priest smiled and said-''dhanyawaad..khush rho beti..''he turned again and said-'tumhaara beta bhot aage tak jayega nivi...uski aankhon mein meine ek chamak dekhi h nivi wo tumhaara naam jarur roshan karega ek din...mera aashirwaad hmesha uske saath h''

nivi touched his feet and smiled

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(SHARMA HOUSE)

pooja was busy in kitchen to help her mother and neha sat on couch when aditya came with colour and about to colour her when she rushed quickly into her room,,,then he went ointo kitchen and colour hir sister and naina

aditya-''happy holi kaki''

naina smiled and said-''happy holi beta chal baith ja kuch khaa le subah se gayab tha thak gya hoga''

aditya-''nhi kaaki abhi mujhe bhukh nhi h pehle mein neha ko colour laga deta hun phir khaana khaayunga''

naina-''phir to rehne hi de aaj tak kabhi holi kheli h usne jo aaj khelegi...use rehne de beta tu jaakar fresh ho ja''he nodded and went upstairs

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rudra lying on couch and dhruv read a file..rudra constantly staring at him ...veer looked both of them while enjoying sip of coffee...

rudra-''dhruv tumhe pta h aaj kya h''dhruv said-''haan aaj sunday h or holi bhi h''without looked at him

then he said angrily-''to phir is file me sar dal ke kyun baithe ho..
suddenly his phone rang..he picked up the call

sapna-''happy holi rudra...accha suno aaj tum sab ko humaare ghar aana h ...ghar par ek choti si party h''

rudra quickly said-''thikh h hum sab ayenge''

then disconnect the phone..and said-''hum sab ko sapna ke ghar jaana h uske ghar holi ki paarty h jaldi se tyaar ho jao''

dhruv-''rudra...maa permission nhi dengi''then he made a sad face

veer-''to ab kya karenge''diya and nivi came with some snacks..

rudra-''chotimaa hum sabko sapna ke ghar jaana h wahan holi ki paarty to kya hum jaa sakte h''

nivi-''accha thik h jao''

diya-''mujhe bhi jaana h bhaai''dhruv-''sapna ne hum sabko bulaya h diya..to yeh koi kehne ki baat h ...par maa ko kya kahenge''

nivi-''uski chinya tum mat karo hum unhe samjha denge ab jaldi jaakar tyaar ho jao
all of them happy and went to get ready

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sapna dialed neha's number and invite her and her sister for holi party

after sometime
all were gathered at shinghaniya house...sapna welcomed everyone...and tanya wait for veer...and continouously looked at doors...suddenly veer entered in house tanya welcomed him with broad smile and rudra smiled at sapna

after sometime neha and pooja also reached at house...and sapna welcomed them happily

to be continue

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Radhika Sharma

@ridzzi

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#530

awesome update...👏

oh this badi maa...😡...holi bhi nahi khelne deti...hufff...holi khelne ke liye hoti hai...somebody tell her...ki pooja ke baad holi kheli jaati hai...ghar main chupa nahi jaata...

''...dhruv-''pehle shuru to hone do''rudra came nearer to veer and said-''yeh holika kitne baje tak maregi''

veer frowned and said-''yeh holika kaun h...''😲

veer u don't know...let me tell u...holika is ur neighbour...now u get it...ok...🤣

''...neha-''happy holi veer''

he smiled and said-''i love u too''

she was surprised and said-''veer meine haapy holi bola h wo nhi bola''

veer smiled smirkly and said-''accha kya nhi bola tumne''

neha-''wo jo tumne bola''

veer-''han...han bolo na kya bola meine''

neha-''arey wahi i lov''and she suddenly stopped and said arrogantly -''kyun bolun mein meine tumhe holi wish karne ke liye phone kiya tha...bye...''😆

n poor veer kitni koshish kar raha hai...neha se i luv u kehelwane k liye...but our neha is neha how can she say it so easy...veer put some more efforts...i m sure one day u will succeed...hum honge kamyab......😆

n wow...everyone is at sapna place...for holi party...n neha too...😛

ab maza ayega...😊

riya i really want veer to get talli in the party...n say loud n clear infront of all that he loves neha...n let tanya know that she is only a chipku material...n nothing more than that...😡

update soon...

luv u...😊

Edited by ridzzi - 13 years ago

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