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dramebaaz.af

@dramebaaz.af

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#181

That was one amazing update Hayley!

I loved the last line of the last update. Left a sticky smile on my face.

I just hope that something like that happens in the show as well but then there shouldn't be any high hopes.

thanks for the email though!

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Chhaya

@arhi-fan

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#182

Hey hayley !
Sry for commenting so late but was really busy with clg work. The os was just awesome. U described the whole situation so nicely. Just loved reading it all but pls do give us a concluding part.

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tina

@cpervaiz

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#183

AWSOME ff ...just finished it in one go and very thanx for the pm:)

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bmtdluver

@bmtdluver

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#184

Great ff! I just read it through and i really like it! Hope arnav confesses soon

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karisma

@karisma

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#185

tx a lot 4 the pm.i ddnt get the email update 4 the last few .wd shortly send ya another email request

well that was beautiful

it was pure t. o. r. t. u. r. e the way the last chapter began with" Arnav walked back slowly, .."

while i was silently urging him to hurry up!!!

"His heart throttled, threatening to suffocate him when he remembered all the times he had told her she didn't matter to him, that it didn't make a difference to him if she was there or not, if she existed or not. Had she really believed him? He had said all those things so it was easier for himself to deny what he felt. He had never dreamed that she would think of it to be true."

that made me pause n wonder abt what does khushi really make of the "can't be bothered" comments.what if she really thinks arnav means them? what if it's (nearly) too late 4 arnav if khushi acts upon his comments? what can such stinging remarks lead her to do?

what was interesting was the thought u triggered of khushi willing to risk some harm to herself because she believed/s arnav when he said that her being there or not doesn't matter to him . Would she be desperate??

u ddnt really make her despair though.in fact u made her out to be courageous. i like how she tried to fight against the venom spreading n still think of reaching the hospital, n that too without worrying anyone.she's so sweet!

she even smiled in the end..what an angel!arnav's angel..☺️

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zafi

@zafi

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#186

Awesome update.⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

Loved Arnav's realisations.

Continue soon. Thanks.😊

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.Saraa.

@.Saraa.

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#187

loved it all..it was fab piece of work..

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Glimmer

@Glimmer

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#188

Just read all the six parts now and I must say that they all were simply amazing !!!!! especially the 6th part !!!! The way Arnav was ready to admit his feelings and how he was worried about her was the best thing !!!!
Thnx for the pm !!!

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TimelessBeautyy

@TimelessBeautyy

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#189

I finally finished reading this. I've been reading it since yesterday - I know, I know, it took me ages to read because I read the whole thing properly. And this was amazing. Khushi was more concerned about wanting to know Arnav's feelings than being bitten. Putting Arnav's reactions and feelings into words isn't an easy thing, for he is a complicated character, but I liked it how you did it. Cannot wait to read your other works.