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arshia

@ashvez

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#151

@Cute...that was very contended and relieving update attest he realised and she has acknowledged with that smile.Phew!!!

Have a good day at school :-))

Ash.

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Addie07

@Addie07

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+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#152

read part 5 and 6.. omg hayley i loved this one totally...

he didnt wanna tell her how he really felt only to decide to tell her when it was late..

glad everything was fine

love the way u leave an open ending... i still remember the ending of holding on letting go.. awesome

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--Siva--

@--Siva--

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#153

Aww!! Hayley!! I forgot to check my mails.. I missed 6 beautiful parts!!

To say the truth, you write the inner voice part so beautifully!! When ever I get a PM(Now a mail) I feel that I'm gonna hear their thoughts!!

The ending.. Aww..! Pearls..! SO cute!

Thanks for the mails 😉

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LyssaPie

@LyssaPie

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#154

aww so he finally realised!!

and is he really going to confess 😛

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HaRul-lover

@HaRul-lover

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#155

OMGG THAT WAS AMAZINGGG LOVED THE LAST PARTT

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fareeha

@pinkpearlz

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#156

Just read all parts. Its really good. Must say you did amazing job of Arnav dodging the question. I wish you had written the scene too where he will tell her, but its ok.
BTW have you ever been bitten by a scorpion? To have described so explicitly? Reminded me of when I was, though it wasn't lethal thank God but painful oh yes.
Great job.

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Flame.

@Flame.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#157

Awww it ended.

The end was so beautiful Hayley! I loved it. Poor thing. How he must have felt when he saw that she was dying and right when he was going to tell her everything.

It was lovely girl. Truly awesome. xxx