M&G FF ' TISHNAGI' ' part 16@86 23/02/2013 - Page 28

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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks Seher for clarifying...do update soon
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Originally posted by: ritzy09

Thanks Seher for clarifying...do update soon

i will try dear

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update..
hmm all is going to get well...
continue soon
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WHO WAS THE FRIEND WHO DESTROYED GEET'S FAMILY AND LEFT A SCAR ON HER
SHE IS TRYING TO DISTANCE HERSELF FROM MAAN
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice part...

they r close yet so far...

continue soon...
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" Tishnagi "
Teaser
She always want to ask GOD that why he gave this power to only one man . A power that can sooth her bleeding hear , a power that give her more energy more strength to fight back with life. She always become most vulnerable person in front of this man who never felt anything for her and her whole existence just want to be with him at any cost . Only she know how she control herself for not coming in dehli and now Maan's closeness just create havoc inside her . She try hard not to look in his eyes because she knew he can read her eyes like an open book .

On other hand maan is looking at her intently todat he want his answer at any cost . He is tired with this hide and seek . Moreover Geet'sdifrent behavioure driving him crazy . Till now no one dare to play with him like this butthis girl is playing with him from the time she come in his life in one way or other way and today he is not going to leave her that easily.


Maan kept coming close to geet after caging her in his string arms


will be updating at night

Edited by love4all - 12 years ago
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awesome teaser di loved it
waiting for update
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" updating "
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" Tishnagi "
" PART 11 "

15 days pass like this . Both stay like far poles having no connection with each other . They talk to everyone in normal way but with each other nothing much but some angry glares are enough for them .


Its a normal day like other days but something is gonna change all are present on breakfast table ready to have their breakfast . When a chirpy voice stop everyone all looked at the person as they see some alien .


There is standing geet all fresh and happy with a big smile that is big shock itself . Good Morning guys " Geet said little loud bring them back from shock . This is the first time geet is present on dining table and moreover her smile is big indication to gang is something different is gonna happen today . All wish her back . Savetri devi ask her to have seat which is actually beside maan . Maan first think she will refuse to sit near him as she did not start talking to him yet . But to his utter shock geet sit beside maan and also wish him in her own way .


Hi SARRU Good Morning " Maan choked in his food and start coughing All looked at maan with concern kiran give him water with a teasing smile on which Maan just glare him . He looked at geet in disbelieve but she did not give him chance to speak and she start her food . The breakfast table is no more silent space geet start talking with everyone and soon everyone is having fun pulling each other leg and mostly maan become their target . Maan try to show his anger but geet dismiss it with wave of her hand , dadi also sport geet and annie . Maan is getting shock after shock he cant believe that she is same geet who did not talk to him till yesterday . He is very keen to know what happen in one night that change geet so much . He made his mind that he will get his answers from geet today .



As breakfast come to end and before anyone leave the table annie speak surprising all . Hy guys as today Geet di is all fresh and absoloutly fine should not their be a party and lot's of fun . All become excited and agree with annei " So what is the plan "aske sidh eveyone looked at annei but she made a face telling she have no idea " Mujhy to pehly hi pta tha she will do this " Arjun said to irritate annie on which she made a baby face to geet but she shrug her shoulder saying she fed up with their silly fights . I think for to night disc is best " Armaan give his suggestion all looked at him in disbieve they cant imagine that armaan can say something like that Karan and maan give him angry glares but gang jump in excitement . Yeah that is the best idea we will enjoye so much uff after a long time . Annie said in excitement without thinking what she is saying . Two pair of eyes looking at her with pain . Annei close her eyes in happiness but then something hit her mind how can she forgot that . She immediately open her eyes and looked at geet with sorry but geet did not let her say anything Geet ruffle her hair and said " Be ready @8:00pm " with that she leave for her room leaving almost everyone shock . They cant believe geet is ready to go in disc . Its something no one can think Geet and disc two difrent things man .



First one is sid to react on this He fall on chair with a thud " I am telling you guys something big is gonna happen . Someone really going to die . I mean first she come for breakfast that to in very good mood and now she will go with us " Sid shake his head in disbelieve and all are agree with him . " Koi baat to hai " Armaan also thinking on this lines . But no one have any right answer so they sighed and leave for their work biding bye with each other .




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When geet leave breakfast table leaving everyone in shock . Maan also leave behind her silently . He is going insane dealing with geet's different behavior till yesterday she is not ready to even looked at him and today she is just keep hitting on him in any way she even called him with that name " SARRU " Oh GOD he hate this name to the core but when ever geet want to irritate him she will call him only with this name and both always end up with a fight and then maan have to manofy his pagli . Maan shook his head with a smile thinking about those days .



Maan saw geet alone in corridor he took fast steps and stop her in her track . Geet looked at him with little anger and rais her brrows asking him why he stop her .


" I want to ask something " Maan said looking in her eyes crossing his arms on chest . " What you want to ask now " Geet spoke holding same expression like maan . " What you think about me " Geet looked at him little confuse and annoyed she did not get his que " What do you mean " She ask all confuse " I mean what you think about me hmm jub tumhara dil chahy ga tum mujh se baat kro gi or jub mood nahi ho ga to tm meri tarf dekho gi b nahi " Maan said taking dangerous step towards her with anger filed eyes . Geet looked once at him then at his steps . With his each step she took a step back and slowly she hit wall that bring her sense back geet looked at maan and try to leave but maan caught her between him and wall . " Maan leave my way mujhy jana hai " Geet try to ascape but maan put his both hands on other side caging her " Pehlt mujy jwab do " . Geet try not to loose her sense but maan's closeness did not helping her . The solace she feel in his closeness making her numb her heart and mind want peace for sometime . They are begging to her . Begging her to not to push maan not now please . Her burning soul is asking crying to be in peace just for sometime please for sometime . Geet close her eyes she give up on the pleads she let her whole existence to relax to refresh for next tiring job . The peace the solace her whole existence want GOD just give this peace to one person MAAN .

She always want to ask GOD that why he gave this power to only one man . A power that can sooth her bleeding hear , a power that give her more energy more strength to fight back with life. She always become most vulnerable person in front of this man who never felt anything for her and her whole existence just want to be with him at any cost . Only she know how she control herself for not coming in dehli and now Maan's closeness just create havoc inside her . She try hard not to look in his eyes because she knew he can read her eyes like an open book .

On other hand maan is looking at her intently todat he want his answer at any cost . He is tired with this hide and seek . Moreover Geet'sdifrent behavioure driving him crazy . Till now no one dare to play with him like this but this girl is playing with him from the time she come in his life in one way or other way and today he is not going to leave her that easily.


Maan kept coming close to geet after caging her in his strong arms . Geet closed her eyes loosing her sense completly in Maan . Maan kept looking at her srene face the calmness he is seeing on her face her never see before . Its something so diffrent so pure like first ray of sun . One time he just wish that this calmness is remain like this always on Geet's face . The atrection he feels towards geet is getting stronger day by day . His whole day pass in thinking about geet and her weired behavioure toward him and today he just want to end his meisry . He think if he know real reason of geet's behaviour then he can control his own thoughts . Not getting any answer from geet maan again cell her .


" Jwab do geet kio kr rahi ho ye sab " Maan's angry voice bring geet back in her sense . She open her eyes and see their closeness she abruptly push maan with all her strength . Maan looked at her with anger How dare she push him like this . He turn towards geet with full anger but stop in mid listning geet answer .


" I think ab tak to app ko aqal a gai ho gi but you are still dumb sarru " Geet speak with most innocent face . Listning her answer maan step towards geet in anger " Geeet " he again warn her on that geet again told him " Or nahi to kya mujhy laga u will understand but naa " maan is not getting her answer " What are you speaking Geet come to the point " He gritted his teath controling his anger on her silly answers " Ok sarru " Geet again call him sarru on which maan give her an icy glare " Ok ok ghusa kio ho rahy . see when i come here first 15 days you did not talk to me and after that 15 days i did not talk to you . Hissab brabr . Now 15 days are complete so i start talking to you . Got it " with that geet leave from there leaving a confuse maan behind . First maan did not got what she said but when he got her meaning he looked at her retearing figure and shook his head in disbelieve remembering its her normal way of taking revenge . Oh GOD he cant believe she is still same . But he forgot and how can he forgot his PAGLI who can never change . Maan smile full heartily thinking about his own foolish assumption that he thought about her weird behavior . Maan again look at the direction where she disappear and left from there saying PAGLI



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Its 7:55pm all ready to leave for disc but the person for whome this party is held no where to be seen . " I think wo phir hum ko ditch kr dy gi like always " Armaan speak getting impetient " Ary yaar shub shub bol i hope she will come " Sid answer him still his eyes on stairs praying that she will come . " Per kab " Spoke little louder its his chance also to enjoye in disc after a long time so he can't wait more .


Or ab " A voice come and all heads turn towards the voice and they cant believe that its geet . Maan who is talking to someone on phone also turn and got lost in her serene beauty Geet left her hair open and on the name of make up she just used kajal to dark her eyes and pink lip glose on her lips and he gulp hard when his eyes travel down to her face .


There is geet stand in skiny black jeans and red fitted top looking extra hot and sexy . But maan's eyes struck on her top . She porposely choose this top for tonight . Its a simple red top with written " Don't Dare Me ;) " on it in shimary black color and the word DARE is written right above her chest .


Boys give her angry glares but she just wink them back . Geet come down and whisper in Maan's ear who is still in same position lost in Geet " Let's go Sarru " Maan got embarress on his own act and quikly left from there .



All come out and sit in their respective car's Yash have his bike so he sit on bike and geet sit behind him Karan try to ask geet to come with him and maan but geet refuse him saying she want a bike ride today . So all left one by one with 3 cars of gaurds .


When all left Geet ask yash to start . She check all security of mention once again and then she ask about disc security to yash on which he infom her everything is under control . Its first time after that attack that maan is going out and not only maan but annei and other's also so Geet don't want to take any risk .


After some time Yash cross all cars and they both are going on front . Geet is feeling so bore she choose bike ride to have some fun but yash made her wear helmet on start she deny but yash threaten her that he will leave her at home and seeing yash's expression geet know he is damn serious . So with out any other argue she wore helmet and they start their ride . But now its becoming unbearable for geet to wear helmet for even a second so she quietly open her helmet and remove it . The cool wind touch her face making her more crazy . Bike ride is her craze that to without helmet . Geet look at her sides to find a suitable place where she can throw her helmet that to without letting yash know and soon she fond a road side dustbin and she she throw her helmet . The helmet disapear with little voice but who cares now . Now geet is free she let her hairs dance in cool wind .


Maan and karan's car is behind them and when they see geet removing her helmet and then throwing in dustbin they both could not able to control their laughter . The way Geet is behaving on bike its reminding them their past from begning when geet get comfortable with them and most impotently with maan . She use to do what she want in any way but no one can stop her and here too when she got chance she remove her helmet and now she is enjoying her bike ride . Watching geet again like this maan remember morning incident that he did not told karan yet . So he start telling karan the reason of geet weird behavior and both laugh again full heartily .


But soon Maan's breath caught in his lungs seeing geet who is standing now behind yash and her hands are wide open . " Karan stop her look what she is doing its dangerous " Maan spoke in panic seeing geet like this his heart beating so fast with a thought if something happen to her then what will he do . He roll down his side and shout to geet " Geet are u mad wht are you doing sit back " in his panic state he did not realize what he is doing . Maan again ask karan to stop geet although karan know that its a normal for geet but looking at maan's state he could not argue so he simple ask yash to stop geet . But the look on Maan's face is telling him another story he know Maan is very caring about geet from beginning but the fear the tension the panic he is watching now its first time he ever seen on maan's face . Its a fear of loosing someone very close to heart and when Maan see geet sitting back and she held yash he let out a sigh breath that he is holding from the time when he notice geet standing on speedy bike . Maan close his eyes in peace breathing normally but now karan is no where in peace . he want to find out every thing soon .



PRE-CAP :- Maan is jealous

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Edited by love4all - 12 years ago
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awesome update
geet n her ways of tking revenge...

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