OS - hai kya ye jo tere mere darmiyan hai(pt2 pg9)

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Zuzana

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

Hey Monsi, as I read through the post it didnt look like Monsiji's post at all ..I didnt feel the bone tickle which ususally happens when I read ur posts...but bang on it had it all in the end🤣...I wont be surprised if the same thing happens and he utters the same dialogues. Hai..how can these two go back to being normal after that hawt dance...

Wonderful write up..now that my comments are out your second part must be on the way!😳

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zafi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

Awesome.⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️👏👏👏👏👏

Loved it. Continue soon. Thanks.😊

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rumu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#33

I also feel that his gonna answer the same in the show..

this is really awesome dear...loved it... please continue sooon...

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monsi08

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Posted: 13 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: JRSN
Hey..The os was great... Pls continue and make it fast..
LOved it!!!

Hey thanks 😊

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monsi08

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Posted: 13 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: appy2011
very very nice mon jaan..really enjoyed it...may be CVs are also thinking like you..or may be not 😆

🤗 appy

aur part 2 zaroor likna...me waiting 😊

Hey Appy... thanks so much ...
@bold... me trying to write part 2... but it's difficult yaar... u know na how much I suck at writing romantic or intense stuff 😆 I dont want it to become a funny situation altogether 😛

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monsi08

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Posted: 13 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: UltimateBarun
Grrreat monsi,,,I loved it,, hosakta hai, great possibilty.,,,ke aisa hi ho!!!

I love Arnav with his dialouges and their tit for tat convo!

O yeah me too like their tit for tat... 😳 If they become too mushy mushy lovers... it wont have that charm.. they have to remain like this .. outdoing each other everywhere including the bedroom 😉😆
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monsi08

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Posted: 13 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: meenaluma
nice os loved it

Thanks Meenaluma 😊

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monsi08

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Posted: 13 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: -_-harsh42
Monsiji!!! *Imagine the Dharmendra style in Sholay* 😆 😆 😆

You're right!!

Romantic mood buster tho aap ho hi!!!

Lekin iss story ko continue zarroor kijiyega!!!

Thanks for the PM. . . . 😃

Hee heee... 😛 thanks Harshita...
Weekend going too hectic now... just not able to concentrate... and I cant write like you yaar ... writing romantic stuff is not my cup of tea after all 😆

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monsi08

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Posted: 13 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: vampire_girl
monsi you gotta continue this 😳.. and if possible then pm me too 😳

Thanks so much .😊. will surely PM if I succeed in writing the 2nd part 😛

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monsi08

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Posted: 13 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: lwfw
monsi dear typical ASR OS 👏
i feel you kept ASR much calmer
i am more worried will kushi wont ask him if she asks him
for sure he will bark at her.
but the question is will they reach that stage or she will faint in his arms .
i would rather prefer her faint in his arms

Thanks Sharu...😊

Not sure if the scorpion has bitten her already ... seems unlikely to me .. !