ArSh OS - Page 2

Originally posted by: raghba

The OS was amazing. I love it. You are great writer. Please do write more on ArSh.

Beautiful story, thank you for the pm!

your so creative hun, please continue writing your just amazing!<333

OMG!!!where were u all these years womaaan?u should have made fanaa instead of kohli, and casted kash there...this is brilliant...i loved the description of the snow storm...but the simplicity of the love story was superb...loved the last part where arsh confess...plz write more of them nd cont ur ff asap

i simply loved this OS...ArSh were so cute...so glad they confessed😳

Awsum job haffu😛

heyya haff,
sowwy i m late in commenting:(
first of all THANK U SO MUCH FOR INCLUDING OUR NAMES there,it really meant a lot...wonderful gift for our new friendship...u r a sweet heart:)
coming to the os...its absolutely superb!!!!
simple n yet beautifull.
i loved d concept n characterisation...armaan a naughty college boy to a an army officer n shilpa a simple college girl to a novelist.
u know before even reading d last note about movie ,while reading os itself,i was thinking about fanna...i have always loved dat movie*excluding its one song* n i want to thank u for writing this os like dat.
wow u r an awesome writer...its clear from
d way u have described each n everything in detail...from d scene where armaan is struggling for his life n where shilpa is nursing him.
no need to say that what i loved d most was d romance part...it made me sure dat u can surely fulfill my wish for hot parts in d future..LOL.
i totally enjoyd this work of urs!!!!
thnx for making itcon arsh.
keep up d good work!!
LOVE U LOADS:))

PS- waiting for ur another os.

PSS- u can erase sam's name from there
...no need to give that nautanki baaz so much bhaav...ROFL.
now lemme run before she eats away my bheja:P

Aww so romantic beautiful OS I like it thanks for pM.

nice os dear