OS: The Fated Silver Lining (ArHi) last-part page2 - Page 3

Originally posted by: anchal2

I'm doing great!! How about you?🤗 Wow, it's been so long...good to 'see' you, too.
yea, it does sound much better in Hindi, and kinda meaningless in English😆
I'm not watching any desi soap right now, so there's really no point of visiting IF. Well, I kinda watch Dance India Dance, though just the auditions (those are super fun😆), I have yet to watch the actual episodes. So just came to this section to find something good to read.

Firstly, I can't possibly tell you how much I dislike this couple/show. Oh god I should fear for my life with so many fangirls around. 😆 But I still wanted to read it because I absolutely love you as a writer, I always have (what I would give for you to continue Mistrusted Trust, you have no idea). Well, and it's not like I have to imagine the same two characters from the show or the same actors as I read it.

I've just read the first part so far. I love the way you've described emotions and Khushi's feeling and the overall detailed description, which is imperative in a piece of writing and what connects with the reader as it gives a visual and more tangible imagination...I kinda lost the track of what I wanted to say😕 Basically, I don't really like it when it's just a bunch of dialogues/lines back and forth between characters.
I really likes how you've depicted Khushi, how she roots for freedom rather than commitment (unlike typical desi heroines).


Are you watching anything else besides this show?...I really wanna watch at least one desi show.

Originally posted by: --ania--

First off, I apologize for the late reply...got a little caught up with work.

Heyyy, I watch Dance India Dance...really liked most of season1 and a few of season2 contestants! I've been following this season too...it's okay so far, lacks in quick connection to the dancers/performance that I felt with DID2. 😕

Aww, tis' okaysss! :P I only recently watched alot of the main couple's scenes! They had some good chemistry...I don't really know what's going on the storyline cuz I don't watch the whole show. 😳 So, yeah, no desi shows on my plate from a long time... However, I'm watching this other show which ain't hindi :P

Ahh, yes, I miss writing Mistrusted Trust too...that was one of my better works...very close to me heart 😳 I may just continue it when I think I'm ready to write it again and finish it this time.

And thank you for such nice praises for this one...uff, what more can I ask for. You make me blush jee 😳 😆. Basically, I wrote this in 2011, a couple of months back and it was based on totally fictional characters, not from any show...(they were named Armaan and Aarzoo 😳 You see they both had a similar meaning to their names so that was intentional... ).

But then, I did some editing and fitted this shows characters into it...looking at the scarce response, it didn't seem to go well with the show fans since the characters are totally a 360 turn from what they are in the show. 🤔

So, fata-fat read the next part at your leisure...😆

I "talk" too much!

take care 🤗

ooh, I watched the first season of DID and I've seen some of the performances from season 2. I also watched Dance ke superstar or something, can't remember the name😕 it was a competition between season 1 and 2 contestants.
Lol, you think they have good...any chemistry at all. Then I should reserve my comments.😳

Anyways...This part was definitely much more interesting and intriguing. I would love for you to continue writing this just because there's so much scope to explore their relationship, with the history they share. Really there's so much you could write about with these two characters...and I am really liking the character of Khushi.
Oh, I love those names, Armaan and Arzoo! Now I wish you would've kept those names, but then I can completely understand...the general public wouldn't be willing to read it. Which really baffles me, because isn't it really about the writing and content. At the end of the day, you have the liberty to imagine whoever you want as those characters.

PS: I am really sorry for the lateness of this reply...
PSS: oh, just remembered, you mentioned that you're watching some other shows as well...were you referring to Asian dramas. If so can you recommend me some good ones, though I haven't watched Asian dramas in ages...but might give it a try if there's any good ones.