OS: The Fated Silver Lining (ArHi) last-part page2 - Page 2

*clears throat*
hello Aniajee!

will come back with my comments once I get a chance to read it...but I just had to drop by when I saw your name...

very emotionally written . great piece of work

Hey I know it's an OS but I love your writing why don't you make it an SS or even an FF and continue with the story. I am sorry for being so pushy it's just that I love this story and I am sure if you continue people will love it. Like me! Lol. Thanks for a great read! I doubt anyone will criticise it it was way too good.

I loved your OS ...it's a really emotional and interesting read. And thanx for the pm, hun!

Originally posted by: anchal2

*clears throat*
hello Aniajee!

will come back with my comments once I get a chance to read it...but I just had to drop by when I saw your name...

Superb!! Brilliant work. Thnks alot 4 d pm

Originally posted by: --ania--

Anchalll 🤗

Haila, how ijj you??? Where did the sun rise from today? (Goodness, it sounds much better in hindi 😆) Where have you been, missy?

So good to see you!

Aap read karo ya na karo, apka iss thread mai ana hi bohat upkaar hai (darnitt! why does it sound so weird? I'm too lazy to look for reasons right now) 😆

I'm doing great!! How about you?🤗 Wow, it's been so long...good to 'see' you, too.
yea, it does sound much better in Hindi, and kinda meaningless in English😆
I'm not watching any desi soap right now, so there's really no point of visiting IF. Well, I kinda watch Dance India Dance, though just the auditions (those are super fun😆), I have yet to watch the actual episodes. So just came to this section to find something good to read.

Firstly, I can't possibly tell you how much I dislike this couple/show. Oh god I should fear for my life with so many fangirls around. 😆 But I still wanted to read it because I absolutely love you as a writer, I always have (what I would give for you to continue Mistrusted Trust, you have no idea). Well, and it's not like I have to imagine the same two characters from the show or the same actors as I read it.

I've just read the first part so far. I love the way you've described emotions and Khushi's feeling and the overall detailed description, which is imperative in a piece of writing and what connects with the reader as it gives a visual and more tangible imagination...I kinda lost the track of what I wanted to say😕 Basically, I don't really like it when it's just a bunch of dialogues/lines back and forth between characters.
I really likes how you've depicted Khushi, how she roots for freedom rather than commitment (unlike typical desi heroines).


Are you watching anything else besides this show?...I really wanna watch at least one desi show.

Originally posted by: stars1234

Hey I know it's an OS but I love your writing why don't you make it an SS or even an FF and continue with the story. I am sorry for being so pushy it's just that I love this story and I am sure if you continue people will love it. Like me! Lol. Thanks for a great read! I doubt anyone will criticise it it was way too good.