Arhi OS/SS :The Shart...Part 3 updated !!! - Page 4

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Posted: 13 years ago
#31


Thanks tinsel 😊

Originally posted by: GayuArnav

Aww very beautiful. I so wish that even in the show khushi gets stung by the scorpion when she protects arnav from the scorpion bite then that will be the first step to realize his love for her 😍


thanku GayuArnav ... 😊
Bechari Khushi huh ... everyone wants her to get stung 😆😆


Thankyou Mollycoddle !! 😊

Originally posted by: MsCeylon

Loved it

super awesome



Thankyou MsCeylon !! 😊

Originally posted by: sweetygirl28

Good one nishi!!! loved it!!!



Thankyou Sweetygirl28!! 😊


Thankyou Pri!! 😊



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Posted: 13 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: Zeee

read this again. loved it. arnav frightened for khushi and the shart was too sweet.

love the diologues
xxx



awww ... that was extremely sweet of you Zeee ...🤗
Glad you liked it soo much 😳


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Posted: 13 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: SiRul

That was amazinggg


Thanks a lot Sirul 😛

Originally posted by: tina_1234

nyc os..very realistic


Thanks a lot tina_1234😛

Originally posted by: desisweetheart9

Thanks for the PM. Really liked the OS.


Thanks a lot desisweetheart9😛

Originally posted by: KaushalyaFan

Great OS. Very well written.

KF


Thanks a lot KF ... am glad you liked it 😊😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: ccuteaangel

your style of writing is very good, I enjoyed reading this OS very much, it was wonderful and well put together and very realistic. I like how you kept it true to the show and the characters

xx


Thanks a lot Hayley 😊
Am glad you like my way of writing ...and even more glad that you enjoyed the OS 😊




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Posted: 13 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: Yazzy91

Great OS! Loved how arnav was so caring and worried for khushi! x



Thanks Yazzy91 ... 😛 ... ofcourse he would be worried for her 😉😉

Originally posted by: anita_21492

I loved this OS!!!!

i wish this happens
thanks a ton for the pm



Thanks a lot anita 😊
Am glad you like it ... and looks like Khushi needs well wishers like u 😉😆

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Posted: 13 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: dumas

awesome os loved how they were fight and then she saved his life and how arnav responded to her getting hurt loved it thank for the pm



Obviously he would fight dear ... any Male do ... its a trademark of their species ... watever you do ... you(a girl) shd not help them without their consent ....😕... Men and their big fat egos ...

Originally posted by: kdkumar

Loved it!!! Agree...increased font and spaces between paragraphs will make it more easier to read and less strain on eyes!!



thanks a lot dear !!!
am really sorry for the font size ... didn realize when posted 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: littlemoi

Amazing update!!

Seriously... I loved it!!
Thank you so much for the pm!!



Thanks a lot Littlemoi ... Am glad you liked it 😊

Originally posted by: Angel-Girl

Interesting && Thankyou for the PM 😊


Thank you Angel-Girl 😊

Originally posted by: Angels11

i thought he w'd say NEVER EVER LEAVE ME!


Well Frankly ... I was inspired by Harry Potter's last line to Dobby in Chamber of Secrets 😳... he tells Dobby,"dont try to save my life again" , and Dobby just gingerly shrugs and smiles at Harry . Even here , Arnav tells that to her , knowing very well , she cannot resist it ...shart or not .😉

Originally posted by: Vsc94

Nice.


Now can u continue?

Want to know where the Dagabaaz snake is!



Well ... I do have an idea dear ... but am not so sure if I could post it as a continuation ...But I shall take a chance and post it anyways ... if you guys like it , I will convert this to a SS ,else a separate SS is on the way ...
n sorry ... no snaky update ... unless absolutely necessary ... 😉😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38
OK guys !!! ...
I had this idea pop - up in my brain while travelling ( yeah ... you never know when your batti jalafies rite ???😆😆 )
Well ... I donno if it could be a continuation of this story , or should be a separate SS ... but I am posting it here anyways ... (handling multiple threads makes me lazy ...😳) ...
Plzzz be generous in your LIKES and Comments !!!


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PS:
Oh btw ... this situation is 'long After' the scorpio bite ... n no snaky ... he is been quarantined by ASR once the truth is out ...


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Part 2 :

"Khushi ……. Khushi !!! ……. Its ok !!! Relax ……. Just stay with me ……. Ok ok …… here …… hold my hands ….. its going to be alright !!! ",said a panicky Arnav .He was holding Khushi gingerly , as if she was a fragile crystal doll and would shatter if he held her tightly. He tried wiping away the beads of sweat that had formed on her forehead with his bare hands and was failing at it. What was worse was , he himself was sweating profusely and his hands instead of helping her get rid of the sweat was making her forehead more wet ,thanks to his sweaty palms.

Aakash ,who was driving the car wondered when was the last time he saw his elder brother sweat like a pig!!! . He was startled by Arnav's voice,"Cant you drive faster Aakash ?? …… cant you see ?? ….. she needs to get to the hospital on time !!". "Bhai !!! I am trying …… but the traffic !!",replied Aakash. HE knew the gravity of the situation and decided not to talk much lest his angry and nervous brother kill him."I don't care !!! just go faster !!",barked Arnav . "Bhai !!! …… it's a car ….. and it cant fly !!! …… why don't you drive if you could drive any faster",replied Aakash . "Well ….. I am kind of pre-occupied" replied Arnav, who was supporting Khushi . One look at Khushi and Aakash became even more nervous and drove as fast as possible almost screeching near the parking lot of the hospital. Since Arnav and Aakash were in their suits ,and their nervousness wasn't helping the scorching heat, Arnav got rid of his ivory blazer in the car, while he still had his waistcoat and tie on.

Arnav rushed Khushi into the hospital , running along the side of her stretcher , still holding hands, "It's ok Khushi !! ….. you will be fine ….. don't worry …… I am there ….. ",huffed Arnav, while she was rushed to her doctor.

After a while :

Arnav – WHAT ???????? ………. Wha ……. Whaatt do you mean by that ??? ……

The doctor just kept a assuring hand on his slumped shoulder . "It's OK Mr.Raizaada , it's a general occurrence…… its just a false alarm ….. you could take her back home now …. ",he replied.

Arnav – home ?? ……. No !!! NO NO NO …… cant you just admit her here ?? …. I mean …… this was a false alarm …… but …… next time what if we cannot bring her on time ?? …..

Doctor – but ……

Arnav – no buts doctor !!! …… you ARE admitting her here ……. If not for REAL alarm …… atleast for my peace of mind !! …..

Doctor – OK ……. If you say so …… (timidly . He was more worried abt ASR than the patient ) …. Mr. Raizaada , can you give her this news ?? …… I have an emergency patient to attend ….. (and left even before Arnav could protest)

Arnav slumped on the chair next to Aakash ,with his face in his hands .

Aakash – bhai ……… its going to be OK ….. (I he tried re-assuring his brother) ….

Arnav – (really surprised ) …… HOW ??? ……. I need to give her this news (he made a grimace ,making a face of a person who was sentenced to live with a man-eater …. Oh no …. Not just a man-eater …… but a family of man-eaters ……… very very hungry man-eaters ) ……. (he gulped) …… No Aakash ……. I …. I cant do this …… (he stuttered and looked at Aakash with hope) …

Aakash – (noticing the hopeful look, Kick started his defensive mechanism) …. Oh ….. no no ……. No bhai !!! anything but this ……… see …….. bhai ……. You can do this !!! …. After all you are Arnav Singh Raizaada ….. everyone fears you ……. And you don't fear anyone ……. Remember ??

Arnav – (making a face of a kid who lost his pebbles) ….. right !!! ……. But …..(and both brothers looked up at Khushi's ward …… )

Arnav remembered the last time he had rushed her like this to the hospital .It was almost like his life depended on her being fine and it was the same situation now. Last time, he had gotten rid of the snake . He had a niggling thought about his "Jijaji" for long time , and his doubts were cleared once he set detective on Shyaam. With concrete evidence he had gotten rid of him from his ,Khushi's, Anjali's and family's life once and for all !!! He could blame Shyaam for that fiasco. But now the only difference was ,he was the reason she was here . Well ,only he could not be blamed , but no one else could be blamed or punished this time.

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End of Part 2 ...

Oh ... I know I am very very veryyy evil ...
But the next part will be out based on the reviews ... 😉😉


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Posted: 13 years ago
#39
by chance is she pregnant here i mean false alarm only one think comes to mind
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Posted: 13 years ago
#40

so a scorping sting her ??? is she and arnav together ???

Loved this update
Edited by SiRul - 13 years ago

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