Arhi OS/SS :The Shart...Part 3 updated !!!

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.Saraa.

@.Saraa.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

wow..it was really amazing..loved it..loved arnie's dialogue true to his ASR character

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Addie07

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

nishi ,luv, u had me totally glued to the screen...

fab fab fab work...

i just loved Arnavs dialogues and he was even suspicious abt shyam...

u have described the hospital scene well...

loved it

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603840

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

aww this was sweet. loved the emotons

xxx

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Zeba

@FebruaryFlower

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Nice one Nishi!

Beautifully written hun.

⭐️

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Gayathri

@GayuArnav

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Aww very beautiful. I so wish that even in the show khushi gets stung by the scorpion when she protects arnav from the scorpion bite then that will be the first step to realize his love for her 😍

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sweetygirl28

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Good one nishi!!! loved it!!!

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603840

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Posted: 13 years ago

#17

read this again. loved it. arnav frightened for khushi and the shart was too sweet.

love the diologues

xxx

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desisweetheart9

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Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Thanks for the PM. Really liked the OS.

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Writer42

@Writer42

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Posted: 13 years ago

#19

Great OS. Very well written.

KF

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Posted: 13 years ago

#20

your style of writing is very good, I enjoyed reading this OS very much, it was wonderful and well put together and very realistic. I like how you kept it true to the show and the characters