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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing update...
loved it😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Thanks for your love and support dear friends.

I am aware that majority of u want an update of DMG as the next update has the SR of Maaneet well guys I want some time to write that update as I want it to make really romantic so the update might get delayed but I promise whenever i would post the next update it would be a big one and really worth the wait.Wo kehte haina sabr ka phal meetha hotha hai 😳

Here is the next part of TJP I hope each one of u would enjoy reading it

love-Piya

PART 33

Geet selected a simple yet elegant red color salwaar suit for their first date

She did not use any makeup and preferred to leave her hair open

Geet: Maan main taiyaar hoon [Maan I am ready]

Maan turned to face Geet; all of a sudden his smile faded as he was totally mesmerized by her looks

Geet: Kya hua Maan kya main achhi nahi lag rahi?[What happened Maan am I not looking good?]

Maan started walking towards Geet

Maan:

"Ek chaand taaro k dil mein palkar aaj zameen par utar raha hai

Uski dilkashi subah ko sunehra aur raat ko shabnami bana raha hai

Khwaish hai iss dil mein k ek din uski chandni meri kismat par dastak de

Mujhe apnakar meri zindagi ko ek naya maksad de de

Eh khuda ek inayat karde apne bande par

Beker de iss phool ki mehek meri jhooli par

Tarashunga ek johri ki tarah teri amanat ko

Markar bhi na bhoolunga apni takdeer ki roshni ko"



[A moon bloomed among the hearts of the stars and is slowly coming to the earth

Her beauty is giving a golden touch to the sun and making the nights intoxicating

There is a dream in my heart that one day the light of this moon knocks the door of my destiny

By accepting me she will give a new direction to my life

Bless me in such a way O lord that the fragrance of this flower gets embedded in my folds permanently

I will sculpt ur belonging as a jeweler and even after death I will cherish the light of my destiny]


Geet had tears in her eyes

Maan kissed her eyes and took her in his embrace

Maan: Shehzadi apne anmol khazaane inn motiyon ko samalkar rakho kyunki main tumhe jaha lekar jaa raha hoon waha tumhe shayad iski zarurat pade [ Save these priceless pearls for sometime Princess coz u would be needing them at the place where I am taking u]

Geet: Aap mujhe humare date par rulane wale ho? [ U r going to make me cry on our first date?]

Maan: Hmm... waise rulane ka nahi kuch aur hi karne ka irada hai[Not really infact I have much better plans]

Maan whispered these words huskily in her ear and bit her earlobe

Geet moaned his name

Maan: Geet agar itne pyar se mera naam lethi rahogi toh hum date par kaise jaayenge? [ Geet if u continue to take my name so lovingly then how will we go for our date?]

Geet: Maan ab agar aapne yaha kuch badmashi ki toh mujhse bura koi nahi hoga [Maan if u do any more mischief over here then it won't be good for u]

Maan: Yaha nahi kar sakta par waha tum mujhe rokh nahi paayogi[Okay I won't do anything over here but u won't be able to stop me when we go over there]

Geet: Waha kaha Maan? [Where Maan?]

Maan: Jald hi pata chal jaayega chale? [U will get to know about it very soon so shall we leave?]

Maan placed his hand on her waist and Geet rested her head on his shoulder

Both of them started walking towards the car

After some time Maan stopped his car

This place was far away from the main city; there was a strange peaceful sensation in the environment

Geet could feel a connection with this place. Maan opened the door for his princess and like a true gentleman he helped her to come out of the car

He did not tell her anything infact he stood there holding her hand

It was Geet who started walking Maan just followed her

Her eyes were reflecting immense happiness

Her smile was as innocent as a blooming flower

Her heart was desperately searching something she knew this was the same place but the journey was a bit long as her eyes had not yet met her destination

Geet tightened her hold on Maan's hand as she reached a particular place

Her eyes started shining with contentment and all of a sudden she started running like a maniac in a particular direction

Maan followed her silently

Geet sat on the ground and touched the sand lovingly

Maan: Bahut khush lag rahi ho Geet kuch yaad aa gaya kya? [ U look very excited did u remember something?]

Geet:

" Raat k ratth pe chal pade the hum tumne neend ka ras barsa diya

Aakhon mein basa tha ek soya hua sapna aaj tumne uss sapne ko phir se muskurana sikaka diya

Shambnami thi fiza dhundla pad gaya tha mera aasman

Apne pyar ki mitti se milakar aaj tumne mujhe mera jaha lauta diya"


[I was travelling in a chariot of night u blessed me with the shower of sleep

There was a dream residing in my eyes u showed my dreams the way to smile

The breeze was full of dew my sky was getting blurred

U gifted me my whole world by showing me the soil of our love]


Geet got up and hugged Maan

Geet: Maan aap jaante nahi aaj aapne mujhe kitni badi khushi di hai [Maan u won't understand how much happiness have u given me today]

Maan: Yahi khushi dekhne k liye main tumhe yaha laya tha Geet [I wanted to see this happiness in ur eyes hence I brought u here]

Geet: Maan aapko yaad hai hum bachpan mein yaha mitti ka ghar banaya karte the aur wo ghar humesha tooth jaata tha par hum har roz ek naya ghar banathe the yaha issi jagah [Maan do u remember we used to make a house out of this sand everyday during our childhood right at this place but everyday it used to collapse]

Maan: Par ab ye ghar humesha buland rahega Geet [But now this house will always stand tall Geet]

Geet: Achha wo kaise? [Oh really but how?]

Maan: Mujhpar bharosa hai? [Do u trust me?]

Geet:

"Dil mein utar kar dekh lijiye aap hi ki tasveer hai

Aapke naam k motiyon se sajayi maine apni takdeer hai

Humari mohabbat ko samale khadi ek bharose ki zangeer hai

Khuda pe nahi itna yakeen jitna yakeen aapki wafhayon ki jaagir mein hai"


[ Enter my heart and u can see ur photo in it

I have decorated my destiny with the pearls of ur name

The strings of trust are holding the bond of our love carefully

I don't trust the almighty to that extent as much as I trust the treasure of loyalty of ur love]

Maan kissed her forehead and blindfolded Geet with his right hand

He took her hand in his left hand and started walking in a particular direction

After few minutes he removed his hand from her eyes and kissed her magical mirrors and requested Geet to open them

Geet opened her eyes and a magical sight welcomed her


PRECAP 1 : " Tu mile dil khile aur jeene ko kya chahiye"

PRECAP 2: Maaneet's first kiss and a sweet challenge followed by ahem ahem ahem😳😳😳


Okay guys don't throw tomatoes and rotten eggs on me from now onwards u would be getting small updates everyday I won't make you'll wait till the weekend and yes next update the kiss will finally happen

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Love-Piya

Edited by piya- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved it... Loved it... Loved it...!!!!

Hayeee bahaut acha update tha piya...!!!!

Specially the shayari wala part of both maan and geet...!!!

It was just osum...!!!!

And Update was tooo gud...!!!!

Uff u again kept us on cliff Hanger...!!!!

Not fair... But I guess waiting will be worth... U knw.. 😉

Luv ya sooo much...!!!!!!

Hugs and Kisses u...!!!!!
Edited by mishtiritu - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update loved it
waiting for thei first kiss
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Posted: 13 years ago


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***edit***
jaisa ki maine guess kar liya tha d update was truly magical...
d poem maan said describing geet's beauty n his wish dat she becomes his n his promise of being there for her forever...amazing poem sweetu...
u made me fall for maan all over again lol...
d convo between maaneet before leaving was supera duper cute...
geet's reaction feeling d connection wid d place, her immense happiness seeing d place was perfectly penned bya u sweetu...
her search for deir spot was so touching...
oh sweetu geet's poetry so perfectly reflected her emotions...
n den i luved d way maan said ab ye ghar hamesha buland rahega...
n geet's answer to his question dat does she trust him was so touchinga...just amazing...
sight to dikha diya hota sweetu...:(
but beautiful sweet n cute update...superb job dne...
luvya sweetu...
Edited by crazydevil87 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
beautiful awesome update that was so cute loved it maan is so sweet and a gentleman who will go to the extreme to make his lady love happy thank you so much for the update and the pm loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome
it was lovable update

waiting for the first kiss and ahem ahem ahem...


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Posted: 13 years ago
wow piya such a beautiful update...it was mind blowing
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Posted: 13 years ago
VERY NICE UPDATE !! DO CONTINUE SOON!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the update Piya...
Maan took her to their childhood place. to ake new memories where there all old memories are burried
loved it completely. I wonder what is his surprise...a beach house?
as usual your poems are very good...I can just read the update to read your poems...they r so beautiful...

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