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Posted: 13 years ago
Awsome prts di...
dev desreve much horrible punishmnt dan dis n me sure u will make him suffer more whn he return
luvd d lovely moments btw maaneet...
oh god di box m kya h dikha b do...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update.
Pls continue soon..
Want to know whats inside the box.
Thanx for pm dear.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Thanks for your love and support dear friends

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Edited by piya- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks for your love and support dear friends. I have modified this part a little as I couldn't get proper pics that I wanted to use during Maaneet's first date so the date would be in the next part
I dedicate this update to my small sis on IF Pooja (mandymore) All the best for ur practical exams darling
love-Piya
PART 32
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Both of them had tears in their eyes and a smile on their face as soon as they saw their priceless possession

Maan: " Mausam badal jaayenge par tum na badalna kabhi [Seasons will change but you remain as u r]

Geet: Patchad zindagi mein dastak denge par pyar ka phool murjaane na dena kabhi [Autumn might knock in our life but we will ensure that the flowers of our love will never die away]

Maan: Aakhon ki sadayon se bayan kar dena sarghoshiyon ko par chup na rehna kabhi [Speak to me through the whispers of your eyes but never hide anything from me]

Geet: Duniya bale hi thukrade par apni baho mein simatne se hume rokhna na tum kabhi" [I may get rejected by this cruel world but never stop me from winding myself in your embrace]

Maan: Geet Shahjahan ne ek tajmahal apne pyar k liye banaya tha jise aaj bhi puri duniya pyar ka sabse bada nazrana samajkar salami dethi hai [Shahjahan made the Tajmahal in the memory of his love and it is regarded as the biggest epitome of love till date]

Geet: Hoga wo sabse bada nazrana Maan par humare liye toh humara Tajmahal hi humare pyar ka aashiyaan hai kyunki ye humne tab banaya tha jab hume pyar k sahi maaiyne bhi nahi pata the [It might be the biggest gift of love Maan but for us the Tajmahal that we have made is the most precious shelter and nest of our love as we made it during that time when both of us didn't even knew the true meaning of love]

Maan and Geet had made a toy Tajmahal with the help of matchsticks during their childhood and had written "Forever Yours" in it

This is how it appeared

Maan: Shahjahan ka Tajmahal toh puri duniya dekthi hai par humara Tajmahal sirf hum dono k liye hi hai kisi teessre ko yaha aane ki izazat nahi hai [The Tajmahal of Shahjahah is open for the whole world but our Tajmahal is meant only for the two of us there is no place for any third person in it]

Geet: Sahi kaha aapne waise Maan aapko mere dimag ki daadth deni hogi aakhirkaar matchstick se Tajmahal banane ka idea toh mera hi tha [U r right by the way u have to praise my brains as it was my idea to make a Tajmahal out of matchsticks]

Maan: Geet waise toh ye idea mera tha par agar tum credit lena hi chahti ho toh le sakthi ho [Geet this idea came out from my mind but if u want to take the credit then u can surely go ahead I have absolutely no problem]

Geet: Dekhiye Maan mujhse behes karne ki koshish mat kijiye warna main naaraz ho jaayungi [Maan it would be better if u stop arguing with me or else I won't talk to u]

Maan: Tum maut ko bhi gale lagane k liye keh doh main wo bhi karlunga Geet tumhari khushi se badkar mere liye aur kuch nahi [If u tell me to embrace death I would definitely go ahead with it as I can do anything for your happiness]

Geet covered his mouth with her palm

Geet: Khabardaar agar kuch bhi anap chanap kaha toh mere Maan ko mujhse koi alag nahi kar saktha maut bhi nahi samjhe aap [Dare if u speak any wrong words in front of me no one can take away my Maan from me not even death did u get that?]

Geet: Ab kuch bolthe kyun nahi? [Now why r u not speaking anything?]

Maan simply covered her lips with his palm Geet understood that he was not replying as she too had covered his mouth with her hand

Geet could not stop herself from kissing Maan's palm

She placed a small peck on his palm and was going to get up when Maan pulled her back

Maan: (with mischievious glint in his eyes) Ye toh galat baat hai Geet tumhe jo karna tha wo toh tumne kar diya ab meri baari [This is not fair Geet u did what u wanted to do now it is my turn]

He pulled her closer her curves touched his hard chest sending shivers throughout her body

Geet closed her eyes in anticipation Maan lifted her kurti slightly and placed his hand on her bare waist and started making patterns with his fingers

Geet encircled her arms around his neck she was not at all cautious infact she wanted to submit herself completely to Maan's love

Maan was observing every expression of hers intently

Her trembling lips were inviting him but Maan disappointed her and moved towards the hollow of her collarbone and started placing small pecks over there

Geet clutched his hair as he moved further down

He was trying to open the first button of her kurti with his teeth Geet started breathing heavily as she was getting excited due to their proximity

Maan was taking his own time to remove her button and Geet had to tolerate his sweet torture

She adjusted herself properly on his lap as if trying to convey her desires to him Maan opened the button of her shirt and by that time his hand that was enjoying the soft skin of her waist moved on to the hook of her bra

He unclasped her bra without removing her kurti and Geet let out a moan

Maan started moving his hand around her back shamelessly as his teeth were busy opening the second button of her shirt

As Maan successfully opened her second button he moved his hand that was present inside her kurti to the side of her curve and he started squeezing it gently

Geet: Oh Maan'.

Maan started smiling as he was sure that he was giving Geet immense pleasure

The bulge of her curves were now visible as Maan had opened the first two buttons of her kurti

He started tracing the bulge of her curve with his tongue Geet pulled him closer demanding for more

He left his mark where both the bulge of her curves met by giving her a love bite Geet never realized the pain as this pain was nothing in front of Maan's love and right now she was completely drowned in his love

He removed her bra from one of her curve and touched her ni***e with his finger and started tickling it

He was showering her with his love without crossing his limit her kurti was the final barrier between them but Maan did not remove it

As his finger was busy playing with the tip of one curve he bit the tip of her second curve with his teeth as he didn't want to leave Geet unsatisfied

Geet: Maan please kiss me

Maan moved his attention to her lips and slowly started reducing the distance

Geet could feel his breath she parted her lips immediately as she did not want Maan to hold himself for any reason

She was all his and this was the biggest truth of her life

Maan squeezed her curve one last time and bit the nape of her neck

Geet: Maan

Maan (whispered huskily): Tumhe jo chahiye wo main tumhe yaha nahi kahi aur dunga jaldi se taiyaar ho jau Geet hum humare pehle date par jaa rahe hai aur ye mera vaada raha k waha tumhe har wo cheez milegi jiski tum apne Maan se paane ki chah rakthi ho [U would b getting the gift that u want from me somewhere else Geet get ready fast we r going on our first date and I promise u I would b fulfilling all your desires on our first date]

He removed his hand from her kurti and kissed her eyes lovingly

He placed her on the sofa and went out of her room

PRECAP 1: Maaneet's first date, Maan's surprise and Maaneet's first kiss

PRECAP 2: A red saree, a challenge and ahem ahem ahem☺️☺️☺️

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Love-Piya

Once again I am extremely sorry for not including the date in this chapter but as I said I was not getting proper pics I would try and update 2 more FFs if I come back early from my root canal therapy session
Edited by piya- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
hi kya dreamy update that... lllooovvveeeddd it


looking forward to their first date...

and yes meee came first by chance at your post... loved it

waiting for next update asap...
Edited by maansee - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
WOW!!!!!!!!... its lovely dear...
Very romantic and howtty...
Maaneet's first date... hhuummm...
Thanks dear... love u...

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Posted: 13 years ago
Luvd their teasng session...
omg what a gift dey hav in deir box...
matchstick ka taj,so beautiful...
aww dis prt 4 me thnku di...luv u so much...<3
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsem update maneet tajmahal and romance



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Posted: 13 years ago
wonderful update
beautiful tejmahal
loved it
waiting for precap
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks for pm...lovely update...eagerly waiting for their first date...but u mentioned about challenge in precap whats that??????????

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