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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update..
though i want dev to be punished i'm happy with his temporary exit.
we'll have more maneet moments..
thanks for the update and pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome
love the way Geet torture him
Precap is exciting
Cont soon
Luv
TC
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the update...
next time i want himto b punished by maaneet
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Posted: 13 years ago
love the strong geet .. who knows how to take her revenge ..
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow love ur update, please make sure tht the 2nd punishment must be much worst than this one.
update soon.

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Posted: 13 years ago

Thanks for your love and support dear friends

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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks for your love and support dear friends. I am sorry for the delay there was a power cut in Pune so couldn't post the update on time
I dedicate this update to my Shehzadi (Zahra), Pari (Abgina) and my Falak (Abreshmina) guys I got the card today and ur one card made an ordinary girl like me feel so special your messages and the letter it touched my heart I am really lucky to have found each one of u. Thanks a ton for making me feel so special. I love u all
Love-Piya
PART 31

Geet returns to college and attends all her lectures sincerely

Maan keeps himself busy at the office

After the lectures Geet hangs out with Adi and Meera for some time and then returns to her house

Geet enters her room

Geet: Maan ki yaad aa rahi hai kya unhe phone karu? [I am missing Maan so much should I call him?]

Geet: Nahi Geet wo busy honge tu kyun khamakha unhe disturb kar rahi hai [No Geet he might be busy why r u disturbing him unnecessarily]

Maan: Maan k liye Geet se zyada important aur kuch bhi nahi hai toh tumne ye soch bhi kaise liya k main tumhare call se disturb ho jaayunga? [Geet is the topmost priority for Maan so how could u think that I would get disturbed by your phone call?]

Geet was surprised to see Maan she goes and hugs him immediately

Geet: Maan aap yaha? [Maan u here?]

Maan: Ab tumne itne pyar se mujhe yaad kiya toh mujhe yaha aana hi pada [U were remembering me so keenly that I had to come over here]

Geet: Achhaji toh ab aapko office mein baitkar khabar ho gayi k Geet aapko yaad kar rahi hai [O really so u got to know that Geet was remembering u just by sitting in your office]

Maan: Ab kya kare MSK ka jadu hi kuch aisa hai k chaubeeso ghante uska jaadu Geet k zehen mein chaya rehtha hai [Now what to do MSK's charm is such that 24 hours Geet is under his spell]

Geet: Main kisi MSK ko nahi jaanti hatiye [Leave me I don't know any MSK]

She turns her face to the other side. Maan was enjoying her childish behaviour he rested his chin on her shoulder and kissed her sensually on the nape of her neck

Geet: Maan...

Maan: Abhi toh tum keh rahi thi k tum kisi Maan ko nahi jaanti aur ab dekho kitne pyar se uska naam le rahi ho [Right now u were telling me that u don't know any Maan and now u r taking his name with so much love]

Geet started blushing

Geet: Maine MSK ko pehchane se inkaar kiya tha apne Maan ko nahi unhe toh main kabhi bhul hi nahi paayi thi wo toh humesha hi mere dil mein majood the aur aage bhi rahenge [I had disagreed to recognize MSK not my Maan, Maan was always there in my heart I had never forgotten him]

Maan was very happy

Maan: Geet mujhe bhi apne Maan k baare mein kuch batauna [Tell me also something about your Maan]

Geet: Nahi bataungi pehle aap ye bataiye k office ka kaam chodkar aap yaha kya kar rahe ho?[ No I am not going to tell u anything first answer my question what r u doing here u should be in the office right now]

Maan: Geet tum bhi ajeeb ho main yaha tumse milne aaya hoon aur tum ho k wajah k peeche padi ho [Geet u r strange I came to meet u and u r trying to find out the reason behind it]

Geet: Ab aap batayenge ya nahi? [R u going to tell me?]

Maan: Wo darasal uncle ka phone aaya tha unhe aur aunty ko kisi kaam ki wajah se bahar jaana tha toh unhone kaha k tum ghar par akeli rahogi to hiss liye tumhara khayal rakhne ki zimedari meri hai [Uncle had informed me that u would be alone in the house today since due to some urgent work both uncle and sunty had to go out so it becomes my responsibility to take care of u]

Geet: Oh toh iska matlab hai k aap yah ape apni responsibility puri karne aaye ho? [So that means u have come here to fulfill your duties?]

Maan: Nahi bilkul bhi nahi main toh yaha apni jaan se milne aaya hoon par wo hai k mujhse pyar bhari baatein karne k bajaye faltu k sawal jawabo mein lagi hui hai [No not at all I am here to meet my life but instead of engaging in some love filled talks with me she is busy asking silly questions]

Geet: Aapne mere sawalo ko faltu kaha jaayiye main aapse baat nahi karti [U think that I am asking silly questions go I won't talk to u]

Maan: Soch lo Geet agar mujhe baat nahi karogi toh mujhe apna formula use karna hoga tumhe baat karne par majboor karne k liye [Think again Geet if u r not going to talk to me then I have to use my formula to make u speak]

Geet did not say anything

Maan: Jaise tumhari marzi shehzadi [ As u wish my princess]

Maan started tickling Geet

Geet started laughing and tried to free herself from Maan's grip

Geet: Maan chodiyena mujhe [Maan pls leave me]

Maan: Kaha thana Geet mujhe apna formula use karne par majboor mat karo par tumne meri baat nahi suni ab toh saza bhugathni hi padegi [I told u Geet don't force me to use my formula but u did not listen to me now u have to pay the cost]

He went on tickling her and Geet continued laughing both of them were enjoying each other's company

Geet was trying to move away whereas Maan was busy punishing her in this process they collided with the edge of the bed and landed on it

Maan was on top of Geet

As their eyes met a strange desire started becoming dominant in their hearts

They wanted to feel each other more closely

Geet's angelic face was getting partially covered by the locks of her hair. Maan blew air from his mouth and tried to move her hair away from her face

With his long finger he traced the path from her forehead to her chin stopping for few minutes at her lips

As his warm finger touched her trembling lips their desires rose to its highest point

Maan caressed her face lovingly and slowly started reducing the distance between their lips

Geet closed her eyes. She could feel his breath on her lips she was waiting for him to mark it with his love

Maan lifted his eyes to see Geet's response her eyes were closed she was breathing heavily but Maan was not sure if Geet really wanted him to kiss her or was she doing this to make him happy

He wanted their first kiss to be special and he wanted to know Geet's wish before kissing her

He kissed her forehead and got up from the bed

Geet opened her eyes as she felt incomplete due to Maan's sudden withdrawal

Maan: I am sorry Geet main tumhari marzi jaane bina hi tumhe.. [I am sorry Geet without asking your permission I was about to..]

Geet hugged him from behind

Geet: Geet toh humesha se hi aapki hai Maan aapka mujhpar puara haq hai [Geet is all yours Maan u have complete authority on me]

He turned around and took her in his embrace

Maan: Geet mere paas tumhare liye ek surprise hai par uske pehle tumhe mujhe kuch dena hoga [Geet I have a surprise for u but before that u need to give me something]

Geet started blushing

Maan: Ab Geet ek cup coffee maang raha hoon usmein itni sharmanewali baat kya hai [Geet I am just asking for a cup of coffee why r u blushing so much]

Geet: Kya Coffee aap coffee maangne waale the? [What coffee? U just wanted a coffee?]

Maan: (with mischievous glint in his eyes) Toh tumhe kya laga? [So what did u think?]

Geet: Kuch nahi aap se toh koi umeed karna hi bekaar hai ek number k buddu ho aap [Nothing it is not good to keep expectations from u as u can never understand ]

She pushes him and goes to the kitchen

Maan: Achhiwali coffee banakar lana [Make a good coffee Geet]

He starts laughing and starts exploring her room

He noticed a box there was a strange kind of magnetic power in that box which was attracting Maan towards itself

He goes and stands in front of the box

Maan: Kya ye wahi box hai? [Is this the same box?]

Geet: Haan ye wahi box hai [Yes it is]

She keeps the coffee on the table and walks towards Maan

Maan placed his hand on her waist whereas Geet rested her head on his shoulder

Geet: Aapko yaad hai Maan k iss box mein hum dono ne kya rakha tha? [Do u remember Maan what had we kept in this box?]

Maan: Kaise bhool sakta hoon Geet bhale hi duniya k liye wo ek mamuli cheez hai par hum dono k liye toh wo anmol haina aakhir humare pyar ka pehla nazrana hai ye [how can I forget Geet it might be a simple thing for this world but for both of us it is a priceless and precious possession as it was the first gift of our love for each other]

Geet: Hum dono ne khud milkar banayatha isse [Both of us had made it together]

Maan: Jab pocket money bachakar hum bazaar gaye the isse khareedne tab hum wo khareed nahi paaye the kyunki humari pocket money bhi humari tarah chothi thi [We had saved our pocket money to get this gift but when we went to the shop to get it we couldn't purchase it since our pocket money was also small like us]

Geet: Hum kisi aur se bhi paise maang nahi paaye kyunki ye humdono ka secret gift tha ek dusre k liye [We could not ask our elders for the money since we wanted to keep it a secret]

Maan: Par aisa kabhi ho saktha hai k Maan ki Geet ko kuch pasand aaye aur Maan uske khwaisho ko pura na kare issliye toh maine itna brilliant idea nikala [But can it happen that Maan's Geet wants something and Maan won't fulfill her wish and look I came up with such an amazing idea]

Geet: Ye aadat aapki abhi tak nahi gayi khud ki taaref karte rehthe hai wo idea mera tha aur waise bhi Geet k bagair Maan kuch nahi kar sakthe sach toh ye hai k aapko bachpan se hi meri aadat hai [U will never stop praising yourself by the way let me remind u that the idea was mine as it is Maan cannot do anything without Geet I was always your habit right from the childhood]

Maan: Ye toh sach hai Geet tumhare bagair main kuch bhi nahi aur ye baat mujhe yaad dilane k liye thank you [This is the truth Geet I am nothing without u thanks for helping me in recollecting this]

He kissed her cheek

Her cheeks turned a shade of pink due to Maan's kiss

Maan: Ab agar aapka sharmaane ka program khatm ho gaya ho toh kya hum box kholkar dekhe? [If u r done with your blushing program then can we open the box?]

Geet: Kaise kholenge mere paas toh ek hi chabi hai? [How r we supposed to open this I have only one key]

Maan pulled Geet towards himself their lips were very close

Maan: Tumhari har yaad ko seene se lagaye baitha hoon Geet [ I have cherished each memory of yours in my heart Geet]

He shows her the key which was present in his chain. He placed it in between their lips and kissed the key

Geet hugged him as Maan's small act had made her feel extremely special

Maan: Shehzadi ab box khole? [Princess shall we open the box now?]

Geet nodded her head in approval

Geet opens a drawer and removes the key

She was going to open the box but then Maan stopped her

Maan: Aise nahi Shehzadi [Not like this princess]

He scooped Geet in his arms and signaled her to pick up the box

Geet takes the box and Maan goes and sits on a chair and makes Geet comfortable on his lap

He kissed her forehead

Maan: Humare pyar ko iss box se bahar nikalo Geet [Remove our love from this box]

Geet opens the lock there was another box inside the big box which had a second lock

Geet: Maan ab aap iss dusre taale ko kholiye [Maan now open the second lock]

Maan: Meri zindagi ki har ek chothi badi khushi ki shuruwat tumhi se hogi Geet ye toh humare bachpan ki khushi thi iss taale ko bhi tum hi khologi [Every small and big happiness of mine is related to u Geet and this box has our childhood memory in it so I want u to open this box]

Geet kissed Maan's chest and removed his chain and opened the box

Both of them had tears in their eyes and a beautiful smile on their face as soon as they saw their priceless possession

PRECAP 1: Maaneet's priceless posession

PRECAP 2: Maan's surprise for Geet on their first date

PRECAP 3: Maaneet's first kiss

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Edited by piya- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
but i m angry on u the thing inside box should have been shown here
but u didnt showed t😭😭😭😭😭
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome part dear
loved it
thanks 4 pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
fantastic update loved it that was so sweet loved it thanks for the pm

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