NEW MAANEET FF TUJHKO JO PAAYA THD4 Link Thrd #5 - Page 10

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Posted: 13 years ago
#91
Superb uptate dear... 😊
loved it ...
Thanks .
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Posted: 13 years ago
#92
awesome update
just loved it
the best part was when they made promises to each other.

continue soon n thanx for the pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#93
Heyyy piyaaa 1st of all a big sryyy 4 nt commenting on ur ff... actually i ws having my xams so couldnt get tym sryyy
Loved aal d parts...
Loved d way of maans confession...didnt expect dat Geet will answer him lyk dis...But loved d twist...Loved wat ws written in d letter...poor felt sad 4 both Geet nd Maan...Loved d song sequence Very much
I want to kill dat person who did sumthing lyk dis with Geet😡😡😡😡
CONGRATS 4 D NEW THREAD
Loved part 27...
awesome update...loved deir convo nd promise...
plzzz cont soon...:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#94
Sorry for the delay friends I had some important work yesterday so couldn't update the next part
I am updating Part 28 right now😃
love-Piya
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Posted: 13 years ago
#95
Thanks for your love and support dear friends. I dedicate this part to my darling friend Waheeda.
love-Piya
PART 28

Maan took Geet in his embrace and Geet completely submits herself to his love

"Yuhi barkarar rahegi masumiyat humare pyar ki

Zindagi bhar bhikri rahegi khushiyaan ye bahar ki

Mushkile aaye tab bhi jalti rahegi diye ye wafadaari ki

Hum rahe na rahe mehka karengi gulistaan humare mohabbat ki"

[The innocence of our love would continue to live forever

The spring of happiness would be present throughout our life

In times of crisis the lamp of loyalty would continue burning

Regardless of if we exist or not the world would remain fragrant with the garden of our love]

PLS LISTEN TO THIS SONG https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vMPnj77a12M

Music

Maan whispered in her ear: I love u Geet

Geet: I love u too Maan

She placed a kiss on his cheek

Oh dil se dil ka rishta juda pal do pal mein mitta nahi

Maan scooped her in his arms and started walking towards the washroom

Bandhan dilo ka tutta nahi bandhan dilo ka tutta nahi

He made her stand beneath the shower and hugged her from behind

Tere dil ka mere dil se rishta purana hai

He started singing and gently started running his fingers on her arm as if making her realize that she belongs only to him

Inn aakhon se har aasu mujhko churana hai

This simple gesture of his touched her soul there was a smile on her face and a tear drop rolled down her cheeks

Mujhko churana hai'mujhko churana hai

He turned her and lifted her face by holding her chin

Both of them were completely wet yet he knew his Geet very well he licked the tear from her face and promised her that from now onwards their life would be full of happiness

Tere dil ka mere dil se Rishta purana hai

Geet touched his face lovingly and expressed her happiness

Inn aakhon se har aasu mujhko churana hai

He took her hand in his and looked directly into her eyes. They were pouring their emotions through this eyelock

Mujhko churana hai'mujhko churana hai

Geet could not bear any further distance between them she hugged him with utmost love. Maan hugged her back. The water was giving them a serene feeling and was healing all their pains

Tere dil ka mere dil se Rishta purana hai

They remained in that position for quite a while finally Maan broke the hug and kissed her eyes.

Music

Without breaking the eye contact he started taking steps in a backward direction

He closed the door of the washroom and comes outside. He removes one of his shirts and keeps it on the bed. He writes a note and keeps it besides the shirt and goes from there

Geet comes outside after a while and notices the letter and the shirt. She starts reading the note

Note: "Geet I have gone to get some clothes for u till then u wear this shirt.

Love u"

Geet kissed the note and wears his shirt she feels as if Maan's fragrance was getting mixed with her soul

She started exploring the house she entered a room and found a strange connection with that room.

She had tears in her eyes but there was a smile on her face as well

The room was full of toys and these not ordinary toys but the ones with which Maan and Geet used to play in their childhood. She goes and picks up one of the toys and placed it close to her heart

Teri bechani ka teri tanhayi ka ehsaas hai mujhko sunn

A childhood photo of Maaneet was present on the table she touched the photo lovingly

By that time Maan comes back he had seen Geet entering the room he comes and stands in front of her and caressed her face lovingly and told her that I am aware of your loneliness

Main jo saath tere hoon phir tujhe hai kaisa gum dard baat lenge hum sun

He takes her hand in his and looks directly into her eyes and promises her that he will always be there with her irrespective of the circumstances and from now onwards they will share every happiness and very grief together

O o oh o o oh

Geet started smiling

She encircled her arms around Maan's neck and looked at him lovingly

Inn palko mein khushiyoon ka sapna sajana hai

Maan removed his hand from her waist and showed her the dress that he had brought for her

Tere dil ka mere dil se rishta purana hai

Geet opened the box and she signaled with her hand that your choice is not that bad both of them started laughing

Music

Geet goes to change her outfit whereas Maan comes to the kitchen to prepare the breakfast

He starts working in the kitchen

By that time Geet also arrives she was looking very pretty in the dress that Maan had got for her. Maan keeps on admiring Geet

Geet started blushing

She decides to help Maan with the breakfast she takes some vegetables and starts chopping them

Maan was still admiring his Geet and unknowingly he inserted his hand in the hot vessel

She took Maan's hand in hers and starts blowing air from her mouth she was crying as she could not see her Maan in any kind of pain

Kaise main batau k tera iss tarah rona dekha nahi jaata hai sunn

Maan's heart started bleeding he could never tolerate tears in the eyes of his princess

Geet was trying her level best to sooth his pain

Shaam jab dhalthi hai subah muskurathi hai khushbuye lutathi hai sunn

She got up to get the medicine but Maan stops her and takes her in his embrace and tells her that I don't need any medicine your mere presence is enough to sooth my pain

O o oh o o oh'

Both of them touched each other's forehead and promised each other that they will always be together

After few minutes they separated and continued preparing the breakfast. The breakfast was ready.

Maan takes a piece and offers it to her Geet also does the same thing

Udasi k lamho mein hume muskurana hai

The food was horrible both of them look at each other and burst out laughing

Tere dil ka mere dil se rishta purana hai

None of them realized when both of them got comfortable in each other's arms

Inn aakhon se har aasu mujhko churana hai

All of a sudden their eyes meet and both of them could see a huge ocean of love in each other's eyes

O o oh o o oh' o o oh'

Maan kissed her eyes and Geet places her head on his chest

Maan: Geet ab hume ghar chalna chahiye sab humare liye pareshan ho rahe honge [Geet we should leave for our house now our family would be tensed for us]

Geet: Aap thik keh rahe ho Maan par [U r right Maan but]

Maan: Geet main jaanta hoon tum kya soch rahi ho par main bus itna hi kahunga k tunhe jo thik lage wohi karna bus itna yaad rakhna k tumhare har faisle mein main tumhare saath hoon [Geet I know what u might be thinking but I would suggest do what u feel is right but always remember that in every decision of yours I would be with u]

Geet: Aap bahut ache ho Maan najaane maine aapko samajne mein itnawaqt kyun laga diya [U r really nice Maan I wonder what took me such a long time to understand u]

Maan: Har rishta waqt k saath gehra hotha hai Geet aur ab ye saari baate chodo jaldi se ghar chalthe hai warna aaj raat ko bhi hume khaana naseeb nahi hoga [Every relationship grows with time Geet and now we won't discuss these serious issues any more let us quickly go back to our house otherwise today we won't be getting proper food to eat]

Geet started smiling

Both of them leave the farmhouse

Khurana Mansion

Dadima, Mohinder and Rano were extremely worried. Adi was smart he did not tell the elders about the incident that had taken place during the prom night as he felt that this was a personal issue between Maaneet and its better if they themselves sort out their problems

Maan and Geet enter the Mansion. The elders were happy to see both of them but Adi was a bit surprised

Dadima :Maan bete aap kaha chale gaye the jaante hai hum sab aap dono ko lekar kitne pareshan the [Maan where were u? All of u were so worried for both of u]

Maan: Wo darasal prom night se aate waqt humari car kharab ho gayi thi aur issliye hum dono farm house par rukh gaye the [There was some problem with our car and hence we had to wait on our farmhouse]

Rano: Geet bete aap thik toh haina [Geet my child r u alright?]

Geet: Maan jab Geet k saath ho tab Geet ko kuch nahi ho saktha [As long as Maan is there with Geet nothing can happen to her]

Adi was surprised but at the same time he was extremely happy

Rano: Geet bete ghar chalte hai humne aaj aapka favourite khana banaya hai [Geet let's go to our house I have made your favourite dish today]

Maan: Aunty bhook toh mujhe bhi lagi hai toh kya aap apne bete ko invite nahi karengi? [Aunty even I am feeling hungry won't u invite your son?]

Mohinder: Wo ghar bhi toh tumhara hi hai Maan jab ji jee chahe aa jau tumhe invitation ki kya zarurat hai [It's your house too Maan u can come anything u don't require any invitation]

Maan: Main baadmein aayunga uncle [I will come sometime later uncle]

Rano: Chalo bete chalte hai [Come Geet let's go]

Geet: Bye Maan

Maan: Bye Geet

The Handas go to their house

Maan: Dadima main fresh hokar aata hoon [Dadima I will freshen up and come]

Dadima: Thik hai bete [Alright son]

As soon as Maan enters his room Adi comes to talk to him

Adi: Bro ye ho kya raha tha I mean wo party k waqt aapke aur Geet k beech jo hua.. [Bro what was all this I mean after that party incident..]

Maan: Bus itna samajlo Adi k aaj se meri aur Geet ki zindagi ki nayi shuruwat hui hai ab hum purani baato ka zikr nahi karenge par apne aanewale dino ko khushiyoon se bhar denge [Just remember one thing Adi that from today onwards both of us have started a new life we won't be living in our past any longer from now onwards we would make our present and our future beautiful]

Adi: Mujhe aur kuch janna bhi nahi hai Bro aapki khushi se badkar mere liye aur kuch nahi hai [I don't need any other information all that matters to me is your happiness]

Maan hugs Adi

Maan : Thanks Adi

At the same time Maan gets a message from Geet on his mobile which brought a smile on his face

The message was: I love u Maan

PRECAP 1: Geet: "Rasika Dev kaha hai? [Where is Dev Rasika?]

PRECAP 2: Geet: "Aaj main tumhe batathi hoon k Maan ki aihmeyat Geet ki zindagi mein kya hai" [Today I will tell u what importance does Maan holds in Geet's life]

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Edited by piya- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#96
awesome update
loved it

why i hink that dev is not the guy that has done this it might be arjun
continue soon dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
#97
awesome update
loved it
i think vicky is the rapist
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Posted: 13 years ago
#98
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Posted: 13 years ago
#99
the pictures made this emotional update really nice
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awsome!!!more nd more mind blowing wid pics!!!!!!
Muahhh 😳

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