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Posted: 19 years ago
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arrey update fast pls
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Posted: 19 years ago
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yeah was gr8... plz continue...
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RECAP:Josh's entry. angad takes sujal's help to pato kripa. angad jelous of josh

TODAY"S UPDATE:

They all went to the television room. It was a dark room having an appearance of a cinema. It was a comfortable room with cushions at the back to shrink into them. All of them grabbed their seats. Angad wanted to sit next to Kripa but Josh quickly grabbed that seat. He quietly came & sat next to Josh.
They stared the CD with remote in Josh's hand to prove his point. It hand all the rituals of a marriage from haldi to actual marriage. Angad noticed that in all the rituals all 4 of them i.e. Sujal, Adi, Kripa & Josh were near each other. All of them were engrossed in the movie except for Angad whose eyes were glued on Kripa. Josh suddenly paused the cd at the mehendi ceremony when every1 started shouting at him.
Josh: just say here is the part where I have proposed Kripa.
Every1 started looking deeply at this especially Angad.

CD
All the girls r putting Mehendi on there hands. Adi & Kripa ar also doing it when Josh & Sujal come in.
Girls: hey no boys r allowed here.
Sujal: hey I am the groom. So I have the right to come.
Josh: & I am the bride's brother so even I have the right to come.
Kripa: nothing doing. Get out.
Adi: good work Kripa. Mohini throw them out.
As Mohini & the other girls moved to throw them out Josh stopped them.
Josh: v will go out on 1 condition.
Kripa: & what is that?
Sujal: u will have to make us loose in the dance function.
Adi: but the dance will be on marriage songs no rock & roll.
Josh: that's not fair.
Kripa: that is fair if u agree u may proceed.
Adi: y r u scared dear brother?
Boys: no way. V will do it.
Adi: Mohini put the music.
Mohini had put the song Bole Chudiya from the movie K3g. Josh danced with Kripa while Sujal with Adi.
As the song ended Josh paused the Cd.
Josh: see I proposed her.
Sujal: I never saw it.
Adi: I support u Sujal.
Josh: well that song is there for proposing a girl. I danced with Kripa. Hence I proposed her.
Hearing this he ran out of the room with Adi, Sujal & Kripa behind him. after some running Adi started to fell pain in her stomach.
Adi: SUJAL…SUJAL
Sujal: what happened? What's wrong?
Adi was now on floor with the pain & every1 was surrounding her.
Kripa: I will call Sheetal.
Angad: I will get the car. I think she needs to be taken to the hospital.
Josh: come on sister.
Josh & Sujal carried her to the car while Angad got the car started. Meanwhile Kripa called up Sheetal to be prepared for Adi.
They reached the hospital quickly as Angad had drove very fast. By this time Adi had gone unconscious. She was rushed inside while the others were waiting outside.
Sujal couldn't see his wife like this. He just lost control & started crying. Angad looked at this. He gestured Kripa to comfort Sujal. Angad was not sure what he had to say to comfort Sujal.
KRIPA: come on Sujal. Please don't cry. U got to be strong.
SUJAL: I have just lost my control Kripa. She is every thing I have. I have never been so close to any1 in my family except 4 my mother. She is the person who has been close to me more that my mother.
KRIPA: I know. That is y I am telling u to be strong 4 her. U cant let her look at u in this stage.
SUJAL: I just can't do it Kripa. She is all I have. If any thing happens to her I will die. I cant imagine my life without her.
Kripa: u have to stop crying Sujal. She has given us guts everything v need. V have to be strong 4 her now.
SUJAL: I just cant… I just cant. If any thing happens to her I will die.
KRIPA: nothing will happen to her. V all r there 4 her. She cant leave us & go like this.
Angad was touched seeing all this. He had never seen friendship so deep. They both were afraid to loose there best friend but wanted to fight it. He wanted to see what Josh was doing so he left the place to find him. he had not seen Josh from the time Adi was take in.
SUJAL: I will do any thing but plz she should be alright. I can't live without her.
KRIPA: nothing will happen to her Sujal. Sheetal is taking care of her.
At this point Sujal hugged her.
KRIPA: relax Sujal nothing will happen. Everything will be alright.
Voice: yes even I think so.
Both of them turned to see who it was. It was no 1 other than Swyam.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey good going
cont soon 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#65
awesome part plz do continue very senti
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Posted: 19 years ago
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gr8 going
plz dont let anything happen to Adi.
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RECAP:group watches Sujal & Adi's marriage video. Adi is admitted to hospital as she faints.

TODAY"S UPDATE:

SUJAL: what r u doing here Swyam?
Swyam: I just cam to see a friend. But I never expected to see a love story here.
Kripa: what do u mean Swyam?
Swyam: well the world believes that Sujal loves Adi & u love ur husband Angad. But from the starting I knew that there was something fishy about u 2.
Kripa: speak up clearly Swyam.
Swyam: what can I say? U guys r good pretenders. U both r cheating on ur partners & still no shame.
Sujal: just shut up Swyam & leave. I am in no mood to talk to u or to listen to ur imaginations.
Swyam: well then in what mood r u Sujal|? Let me guess… romancing with Kripa.
At this point Kripa just slapped him. Swyam was shocked at her reaction.
Swyam: u will have to pay 4 it Kripa. I will make u guys loose today's contract at least.
Sujal: take it. As it is I am not coming there. Do what ever u want.
Swyam: I will.
Saying this Swyam left. Angad had been a silent spectator to this episode. he didn't knew what to say. He just went there with Josh.
Angad: y was Swyam here?
Sujal: he was just trying to mock us. He was saying that he will not let us win today's contract.
Josh: which contract?
Sujal: the Chico's contract.
Josh: what? It is the most prestigious contract. Adi has been winning it from past 3 years.
Sujal: I know that. She is not well today to go 4 it. I will also not leave her & go
Kripa: so what? I will not let Swyam take it away from her. I will go 4 it.
Sujal: but u don't know any thing about it. U haven't done business for some time now.
Kripa: so what? I can still do it. U r forgetting that I have made Swyam loose every time he has been against us. I will do it again. He will pay 4 what he has done.
Angad: I will go with u, incase u need some help.
Sujal: I will tell Mr. Manhotara to mail u the details. U go home & get ready. The meeting in in 3hrs. best of luck u 2.
Josh: yes best of luck & win this 4 Adi's sake.
Angad & Kripa left the hospital. By the time they reached home the details of the contract had already been mailed to her. Kripa started preparing for her presentation. Angad had never seen the business woman side of Kripa. He never thought that she could do business.
After some time they got ready to leave. Angad & Kripa were both wearing business suits. Angad had noticed that Kripa had done no make up yet she was looking very beautiful. She had also put up glasses.
Angad: I never knew u had glasses.
Kripa: I have a low no. I don't wear them every time, just while reading or 4 computer.
Angad: ok. Best of luck 4 ur presentation.
Kripa: thanks.
They reached the place in no time. Angad went to park the car as Kripa waited at the entrance. Swyam was the 1st person to notice them.
Swyam: I thought Sujal had said he was not taking part in this contract this contract this year.
Kripa: u r mistaken. He had said he will be not coming. As I am here v don't need Sujal to make u loose.
Swyam: I will not loose to u Kripa as it is u have lost ur touch after ur marriage.
Kripa: v shall see about this later Swyam.
At this point Angad cam & they went inside. Angad was continuously giving a killer look to Swyam which Swyam didn't notice. He just wanted to hit him 4 saying bad about Kripa.
Angad was surprised to see that every1 in the room knew Kripa. Every1 in the room shook hands with her with a same sentence.
Guy1: hello Kripa. How r u?
Kripa: I am fine thank u Mr. Raj.
Guy1: I thought u had left the business after marriage. I was so relieved.(laughingly) I think so that was a rumor.
Kripa: even I think so.
Guy1: by the way who is ur husband.
Kripa: well I have married Mr. Angad Khanna from the Khanna empire & here he is.
Guy1: nice to meet u Mr. Khanna. I must say that u have got a beautiful & an intelligent wife. No1 can beat her in the business world.
Angad: thanks for the information.
Kripa: I will take that as a compliment.
Guy1: it was 1 I believe.
As the company head entered the presentations began. Swyam was the 1st 1 to perform. He did a good presentation. Angad was afraid that Kripa might loose to him as she hadn't done any practice. About 6 more people gave their presentations. Kripa was the last 1 to perform. Angad was surprised to see how focus she was. She knew what she was saying & doing. She could answer all the questions with ease.
Angad: (in his mind) if this is what she does when she has not prepared properly I will love to see what she can do when she is prepared.
With the end of presentation the company head got up & said that the contract had been won by Kripa. Every1 wished her except 4 Swyam.
Guy1: I knew I will lose again as u r back.
Kripa: I guess I didn't disappoint u.
Guy1: u never do. The 3 of u.
Kripa: thank u.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey great part 😉 👏
pls cont soon 😭
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Posted: 19 years ago
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come on i am waiting........................ 😭
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same here man......plz continue soon 😭

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