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Posted: 19 years ago
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Hey - I just read your whole fan fic - it is soooooooooo gdddd! I love it! Like wow - mashallah - ur sooooo talented!!!

Plz make K accept A's apology n dont let anythin happen to Adi - shes soooo coool! N I feel sorry for Josh - i think he was the 4rth part of that group = n if he knew wat A had done -he would marry K in a minute -guessin shes the one he has always loved!


Continue sooooooooooon plz!

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Posted: 19 years ago
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plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz
continue sooooooooooooon
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RECAP:Kripa excells in presentation. angad impressed by her.

TODAY"S UPDATE:

As they were about to leave Swyam blocked their way.
Swyam: I want to know how much u paid these guys to u this contact
Kripa: I don't think so that every1 pays to get some contract.
Swyam: no… not every1 does. But u guys do if not then how can u get every contact u want.
Kripa: because v work 4 it.
Swyam: rubbish. I know u guys. U know what I think that u have promised him something to get the contact.
Kripa: what will that be Swyam?
Swyam: may be to sleep with him. It looks like this to me.
At this point Angad slapped him. He started beating him up. Kripa tried to stop him but was not of use. Angad had beaten him up quiet badly. Some guys from the company were able to stop him.
Guy1: what happened here? Will any1 tell me.
Kripa: Swyam tried to misbehave with me Mr. Shikhar as he had lost the contract. So my husband beat him up.
Shikhar: is it true Mr. Swyam.
Swyam: no she is lying. She just wants to put me in the bad light.
Raj: no Mr. Shikhar. What Kripa is saying is right. I am a witness to all this.
Shikhar: Mr. Swyam, if this repeats again I will have to ban u from he organization.
Hearing this Swyam left the hall immediately.
Shikhar: I am sorry for all this Miss Sharma.
Kripa: I am no longer Miss Sharma, Mr. Shikhar.
Shikhar: meaning…
Raj: meaning she got married to Mr. Angad Khanna from the Khanna Empire.
Shikhar: then I would say u broke many hearts of the business world that day Miss… Mrs. Khanna.
Raj: she certainly has.
Shikhar: (pointing towards Angad) I believe he is ur husband.
Angad: yes I am.
Shikhar: I would like to congratulate u both & Mrs. Khanna I must say he loves u a lot.
Kripa blushed at this complement while Angad felt proud.
Shikhar: now I would like to invite ur team to tonight's party.
Kripa: sorry Shikhar v will not be able to make it tonight.
Shikhar: y is that?
Angad: actually is not well & has been hospitalized so v have to be there.
Shikhar: may I know what happened to her?
Kripa: it is just over exertion & weakness.
Shikhar: I feel sorry 4 her. I understand ur feelings. Give my best wishes to her ok.
They state away went to the hospital to see Adi & give every1 the news about the contract.
By the time they reached hospital Adi had gained conscious & Sujal & Josh were sitting besides her. Kripa was happy to see her alright. She just went & hugged her.
Kripa: u know u scared us all.
Adi: I know. But I loved it.
Sujal: but it was 4 her own good.
Angad: WHAT? How can u say that?
Josh: Sheetal told that it was a side effect of the medicine.
Adi: it proves that the medicines r working & I will be free of cancer soon.
Kripa: u knew u were suffering from cancer but how & since when?
Adi: I knew about it when Sujal told u about it. But I also knew that u guys will at least look happy to keep me happy, hence I pretended all this.
Sujal: u know u scared us all.
Adi: hey u guys r not that big scared pose. So tell me about the meeting Kripa.
Kripa: I have a good news 4 all.
Sujal: what? U r pregnant. (shaking hands with Angad & Kripa) Congratulations to both of u.
Kripa hits Sujal playfully on this arms while Angad blushed.
Kripa: not that dummy. V have won the contract again but most importantly v have made Swyam loose to us.
Adi: did I miss some thing when I was here.
Sujal: yes u did.
He tells her the whole episode that took place at the hospital.
Adi: he has not changed a bit. Let me get out of the hospital I will show him what is the relation between u 2. he will regret say all this to u 2.
Josh: relax sister. U need to rest not to beat some1 ok.
Angad: he is right. I have already taught him a lesson as he repeated the same mistake at the presentation.
He tells them about the event at the meeting.
Kripa: now let us forget about all this. When is Sheetal going to discharge u from here?
Sujal: she will be under observation tonight. If every thing goes well v will be home by afternoon.
Josh: u guys go home & rest, I will stay here.
Kripa: no u guys go, I will be here.
Sujal: no u go home, I will stay here as it is I will not be able to rest at home.
They stared fighting like kids about this. After some time when Sheetal entered the room she sat with Adi enjoying this scene.
After a lot of discussion it was decided that Sujal will stay at the hospital while the rest will go home.
They went home & got fresh. After some time their neighbor aunty (Mrs. Pam) came to meet them.
Pam: come on u lazy bones come to my house to eat the dinner.
Kripa: but aunty…
Pam: no buts. I know Adi is in the hospital but that doesn't mean that u guys should stop eating. The both of u come fast or else I will hit u with rod as I did at the time of ur exams.
Kripa: but aunty there r 3 of us.
Pam: 3??
Kripa: yes aunty. My husband has also come here.
At this point Angad comes in with phone in this hand.
Angad: Kripa where is Josh?
Pam: aren't u the 1 who came to know about Kripa that day?
Kripa gives him a puzzled look.
Angad: yes. I couldn't locate the house so I had come to enquire about them.
Pam: yes. So Kripa get that flirt josh & ur husband fast. I have made ur fav pav bhaji. So be fast.
Kripa: yummy. I am on my way.
She finds josh o the terrace crying. She goes near him.
Kripa: josh what happened? Y r u crying?
Josh: I just cant see her like this Kripa?
Kripa: who Josh?
Josh: I cant see Adi like this.
Kripa: (trying to cheer him up) hey, she is going to be alright. Sheetal told that she is improving. She is going to be just fine.
Josh: I was afraid today when she fainted. I was afraid to loose her. She is all that I have left in a family. I don't want to loose her. I have lost my parents, I don't want to loose her.
Kripa: v will not loose her. She is a fighter, she will fight against this.
Josh: when mom dad died v took care of each other, but now I don't know what to do?
Kripa: listen to me, u just relax. V all r there 4 u. nothing is going to happen to her.
Josh: I hope so to.
Kripa: u hope so, I know so.
At this point josh hugged her. Kripa comforted him.
May it be Angad's bad luck or god's punishment 4 him, Angad entered at this point. He was shocked to see Kripa hugging Josh.
Josh: thanks Kripa.
Kripa: thanks 4 what?
Josh: just 4 being here with me. 4 helping me.
Kripa: hey what else I am here 4?
Josh: thank u. I have missed u a lot.
Hearing this, Angad left as quietly as he had come.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: Chandini

Hey - I just read your whole fan fic - it is soooooooooo gdddd! I love it! Like wow - mashallah - ur sooooo talented!!!

Plz make K accept A's apology n dont let anythin happen to Adi - shes soooo coool! N I feel sorry for Josh - i think he was the 4rth part of that group = n if he knew wat A had done -he would marry K in a minute -guessin shes the one he has always loved!


Continue sooooooooooon plz!

Chandini (",)

i have something else in my mind.

plz read my fic further i am sure u will love it.

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Posted: 19 years ago
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awwwwwwwwwwwwww poor angad 😭 anyways i just read the entire fan fic rite now n it is amazing! 😛 ur such a talaned writter 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awesum part!!!! plzzz dont let angad and kripa have a misunderstanding 😉 cont soon
himani 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
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RECAP: swyam Angad fight. Angad sees kripa with josh & is jelous.

TODAY"S UPDATE:

After some time Kripa & Josh came down. Angad pretended that he had been busy watching tv.
Kripa: Angad come on v have to go to Pam Aunt's house 4 dinner.
Angad: I don't feel like eating u guys go.
Kripa asks josh to leave.
Kripa: don't give me any excuses. V have to go or she will feel bad.
Angad: I told u I don't want to eat. U go. JOSH will be waiting 4 u.
Kripa: I don't take no 4 an answer so just come along 4 company sake.
Angad: fine.
He goes with her. When he reaches the house he sees the house looks the same as SAK. Josh was already eating.
Kripa: look the humpty dumpy has already started eating. U didn't even wait 4 us.
Josh: aunty makes such a lovely food I can't wait to eat it.
Pam: come on u 2 also start eating.
Kripa: yes aunty.
Angad: I am sorry but I am not hungry.
Pam: I don't take no 4 an answer. Just eat.
Kripa: (whispers) listen to me. If u don't eat now aunty will not let us eat peacefully.
Angad: ok. But I am not hungry.
Kripa: just take a plate & sit.
Angad: ok.
He takes a plate & sits down to eat. He takes 1 bite & loves the food. He starts eating quickly.
After they finish Pam gives a Tiffin box to Josh.
Josh: is this 4 me to take home.
Pam: no it is Sujal & Adi.
Josh: what is in this?
Pam: there is Pav bhaji 4 Sujal & Soup 4 Adi. I know they hate that hospital food. They don't want to miss this. Now go fast & give it to them.
Josh: y should I go?
Pam: then should I send Kripa at this time of night?
Josh: no I will go.
He goes to the hospital while Kripa & Angad head home.
At this point Angad gets Aaliya's call on his cell. He asks Kripa to go home as he wanted to talk to Aaliya alone.
Aaliya: hi brother! What's up?
Angad: nothing.
Aaliya: what happened? Did u talk to Kripa?
Angad: no I did not.
Aaliya: y?
Angad: because now I am sure that she doesn't love me.
Aaliya: how can u say that?
Angad: because I saw her hugging some1 else.
Aaliya: so what don't v hug our friends?
Angad: but it was different.
Aaliya: how can u be so sure?
Angad: because I feel it that way.
Aaliya: nothing doing. Just talk to her.
Angad: I don't have that many guts.
Aaliya: fine chicken. I am coming there.
Angad: 4 what?
Aaliya: to encourage u & talk to Kripa about this.
Angad: what will u say when u r here?
Aaliya: I will say that Kavvya brother wants to expand his business here so he wants to buy a house here & I have come here to give u that file.
Angad: fine. See u then.
Aaliya: bye.
Angad: bye.
Then Angad hear some1 screaming.
Angad: KRIPA…..
He rushed to her. He saw 2 goons with a mask on their face trying to hurt her. They had knives in their hand. Angad came to her rescue. He was able to make them run away but in the process hurt his hand.
When the goons left Kripa just hugged Angad. He noticed that she was very much scared. He tried to comfort her. After some time she gained her composure. She saw that he had hurt his hand. She hurried him inside to put medicines on his hand. She also called up Pam aunty as she was scared 4 Angad's hand.
When she went to her room she was surprised to see double bed inside. She went outside with a disturbed look.
Pam: don't be tensed it is just a small cut he will be alright tom.
Kripa: it is not that.
Pam: then what is it child?
Kripa: in the morning there was only 1 bed in my room & now it is a double bed. I am thinking who did it? V were not at home the whole day then?
Pam: well I did this.
Kripa: aunty… but u??
Pam: well Sujal had called me up. He told that u guys will not eat proper today because of Adi… so to make dinner 4 u 3 & also to shit a double bed into ur room 4 Angad & u.
Kripa: ok aunty.
Pam: u r welcome beta. Now take care of each other. That includes u 2 Angad.
Angad: yes aunty.
Kripa was afraid ton share a room with Angad again but then she couldn't help it. After some time josh returned he was surprised to see a bandage hand of Angad.
Josh: when I left ur hand was alright. Now in rags. What did u do?
Angad: well while returning home some goons tried to hurt Kripa so this is the result of that fight.
Josh: but who were they?
Kripa: I have no idea.
Josh: I think I should call the cops.
Angad: no. it will lead to complications. As it is v have no clue about them.
Josh: may be u r right. Now u guys go to sleep. Good night.
Angad & Kripa: goodnight.
Josh went to his room. Angad went to Kripa's room & changed. Kripa had been sitting in the living room thinking about Angad & her relationship. After some time she went in her room. By this time Angad had fallen asleep (pretending to be asleep).
She changed into her night dress & went to her study table. For sometime she was writing something & then she took her pillow & left the room.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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RECAP:u can read it above

TODAY"S UPDATE:

Angad presumed that she didn't wish to be in a room with him. after what he had done to her he couldn't even expect her to be with him. he got up to see what she was doing. He removed the book she had kept in the drawer & began reading it. It was her diary. She had been writing everything what had happened with her during the day & also her true feelings about the incidence. She had shared everything with the diary. Angad began reading it from where she had mentioned about their marriage.

DIARY…
I got married to Angad today. I cant believe I got married to this play boy. I know my parents will be sad to know this hence I must continue this marriage. if only I had met him or just looked at him before the marriage I would have stopped this marriage. but I cant do anything now. When ever I see him I just remember what he had done on the disco that day. If Sujal & Adi would have been here I could have talked to them. They would have surely found out some way out of this mess but they r in London as Veena Aunty (Sujal's Mom) is not feeling well. I don't know how long I can carry this relationship.

Angad turned the page to read about the next day.

Angad is not that bad guy after all. He has promised that he will never come near me until I wish. Hope he sticks to his promise.

Angad kept on reading the diary. All of them now contained his praises. He was impressed how good his acting had been. But there was also guilt. It also contained lines saying that Kripa had started falling in love with him.

Then Angad read the diary of the day after Karva chauth.
Kripa had written in it all that had happened… Angad not picking up her phone… Suraj's call… seeing Angad with Mishthi… how she felt about it… Sujal's call… her arrival at Delhi…
It had every thing.
DIARY
I had thought that today will be the happiest day of my life. But it was not so. I thought that Angad loved me but it was all false. He was just playing with my feelings to teach me a lesson for the slap I had given to him. I am completely shattered with all this but I know I have to be strong. I am going to Delhi. Sujal has called me up. Adi is in the hospital. He told me that she is suffering from cancer but it is in the initial stages. The doctors are sure that it can be treated with chemo therapy. Hope it works out. I will be staying here 4 some time. It will also help Sujal & Adi also I want to stay away form Angad. I don't know what I will do to him when I see him. only Summi & Manshree know what has happened there with me. I don't want to tell Adi & Sujal about it as they r already tensed. I don't want to tense them further. But 1 thing is 4 sure I WILL TEACH ANGAD KHANNA A LESSON FOR SURE. He will have to pay 4 playing with my feelings.

Angad was sorry to see how much he had hurt her. He decided to read further. All the pages till the day he had come consisted of how she & Sujal were trying to keep Adi happy &how she would plan a revenge on Angad. The day he came was something different.
It consisted of her confused feeling of love & hate 4 Angad. She was not sure if she hated him or not. She was still attracted to him.
Angad(in his mind): there still seems hope 4 us Kripa.
He read today's page. Kripa had admitted that she was scared a lot 4 Adi. But she knew that she should not break. She had written that because Angad was there with her she could give the presentation that good. She also said that she was jealous of Adi as she wished that she had a Loving brother like Josh.
Angad: so she thinks Angad to be her brother. God. Good i still have a chance. I will talk to her in the morning. Hope he turns out good. After what i have done i hope she forgives me.
Angad decided to go to bed but was not able to sleep the whole night. He was eagerly wating 4 the morning. It was 7am when he left his room 2 search 4 Kripa. He found her in the guest room sleeping peacefully with a pink color teddy in her hand.
A(thinking): she looks so beautiful… like an angel… how could I hurt her… make her weep so much… now what should I do… yes coffee.
He goes & makes 2 cups of coffee(he only knows to make coffee).
He goes & wakes up Kripa. Kripa gets shocked seeing him. he was the last person on earth she expected to wake her up…
K: what r u doing here?
A: I woke up but u were not in the room so I decided to find u?
K: y find me?
A: I don't think so u will like anybody here to know that v sleep in different rooms…
K: Adi & Sujal r not here & Josh doesn't wake up before 8… so no problem…
A: fine… have this coffee…
K: thanks…
They have the coffee quietly… Kripa is about to leave the room.
A: Kripa y did u leave ur room & go?
K: Angad I cant stand u with me in a room… once I have gone through the pain of sharing with u… I don't want it to happen again…
A: listen… I …I am sorry 4 what I did…
K: I have heard that before… & I have regretted believing it…
A: but this time I really am sorry…
One side of Kripa wanted to believe him but the other didn't…
K: I need time to think about it…
A: that will be fine with me… but can v be friends… just friends…
K: ok… by the way nice coffee…
A: thanks…
Kripa left the room to freshen up… she made breakfast… & was about to leave 4 the hospital when Josh called her back…
J: where r u going?
K: to met Sujal & Adi…
A: I am going with her…
J: no… both of u be here…
K: y??
J: because Sujal had called when u were in shower they r coming home so chill… sis has got discharge…
K: gr8
They started up tidying the place. When they were finished Sujal & Adi came in…
A: its gr8 both of u r back
AD: I am so glad to b back home…
K: r u ok…
S: she is feeling ok… but I have an important announcement to make…
J: what is it?
S: well Sheetal has advised us to go to US 4 further treatment…
AD: so v will be away 4 a month in US.
K: what's the announce?
A: yes???
S: well u guys have to stay here & take care of the business here…
A: that's nothing to ask 4…
K: no need to tell us that…
J: now both of u go & take rest…
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Posted: 19 years ago
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i just read the whole thing its reallllllly good continue writing pz
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awesome parts plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon 😛

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