MN FF *Intezaar*#2* Last part..update on pg101 - Page 16

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Posted: 13 years ago
sueprb upate

loved the way Mayank said her he had nothing for Piya
waiting for next update

continue soon

thaks for the pm.

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Posted: 13 years ago
mindblowing update
finally Mayank confessed about his past
i loved it
continue soon
-Samina- thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
fantastic update
beautifully written
loved it..
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Posted: 13 years ago
Replying Late :( Busy with college schedules! Cudnt Like post as m doin i-f thru mah cel nw..
As of the Update..Marz its very beautifully written...Doing 'Intezaar' for mayank's confession!!
Love u..
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Posted: 13 years ago
AMAZING,... UPDATE..
MAYANK IS OPENING.. UP INFRON TOF NUPUR...
I THINK THIS WOULD SURELY STRENGTHEN THEIR BOND...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Waiting 4 update.Plz updte soon and plz also updte play with fire.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Writer Note

Thank u so much everyone for ur beautiful responce and comments🤗🤗means a lot to me🤗🤗
keep reading the story.🤗i hope u ll liked the coming parts.
Maria...remember me in ur prayers🤗

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Posted: 13 years ago

Intezaar'.

"She had been gone mad for me at that extant she could do anything for me"

Mayank'eyes burned with fear and Nupur felt his body was shivering. She pressed her palm on his shoulder. The warmth of her hand resting on his shoulder held him more securely than before, he looked down at her face, and her loved filled, and concern conveying eyes giving him strength to break that barrier which he had been wrapped around him, the barrier of regret. His heart had been completely thawing in her love. He pressed his hand on her and smiled slightly nodding his head he was fine. She knew he was so strong person, yet he needed her.

"Time was passing with it momentum, I had started to ovoid her as I was not able to accept the fact my best friend was in love with me that too deeply, madly. I was the only child of my parents, my parents had seen lots of dream about my future after my father death Maa had been totally broken now it was my turn to give her support and try to fulfill my all duties and so I did the same. I wanted to be a good son whom she could proud.

I just wanted to concentrate on my future, my studies while Piya wanted me to love her back with the same passion and amount of love but it was not possible.

After completing Graduation I had applied for job in multi-national company as I wanted to do job so I could had manage the expenditure of my further studies. I did not want to put burden on Maa.

I was trying to mend everything between two of us. I wanted my same old friend Back as I had needed her support, her few words of consolation but." He sigh deeply inhaling air inside him.

"But I had been lost my friend."

She felt helplessness in his voice. She could feel his pain as after listeing about Piya she had realized Mayank had needed a friend, Best friend who could have understand him, his unspoken words and Piya was that person but Piya's feelings from him had snatched that only friend from him.

"ap ne Maa ko Piya ke bare main kyun nahi bataya?" His gaze snapped to her face and he tightly held her hands in his

"bataya tha per us waqt kafi der ho gaye..i had thought everything would had fine soon but it did not happen.Piya had taken my silent in wrong way she thought I loved him but could not say her and she told about us her parents. wo Maa ke pas aye aur hum dono ki shaadi ki baat ki.Maa ne bhi haan ker di ye hi soch ker ke main bhi piya se'"he looked down at Nupur face and she slightly nodded her head to signal him to say further without any hesitation..

"Maa thought I too loved her so she said "yes" to this marriage as she thought I was feeling hesitant to talk to her about us.

Piya's just one misunderstanding suddenly had messed my entire life,I was o angry on her, how could had she take decision of my life without my permission.?

I was so frustrated. I tried to make her understand that I don't love her but she was not ready to accept reality.

Neither I could see my shatter dreams nor did I want to hurt my friend, my best friend. I knew I had nothing in my heart for her, how could have we spent entire life together. I could never accept her as my wife.

It would have "a forceful relation". so I did what I thought good for both of us..i knew my decision had hurt her a lot but I did not want her to live with that person who could have seen her in just one Relation and that was "friend"."

"I had refused to marry with Piya"Mayank squeezed her eyes tightly and some tears slipped down on her cheek.

"We had fought as I was so angry at her. I wished Nupur..i wished. I would not have said those words to her"

She instantly understood something had happened wrong after that. The way his shoulders were tense, his eyelids were squeezed tightly..

"aisa kya hua tha?"she said in chocking voice trying her best to compose herself after seeing him in that state..

"Mayank please don't go" Mayank was about to stepped out from the door when Piya ran behind him and hugged him from behind.

Mayank swung around jerking her away..

"stop it Piya 'your stupid,childish behaviour getting on my nerves"Mayank shouted on the top of his lung and for a moment she got froze to see that rage, anger in his eyes for her ,in those eyes which always had showed concern for her.but then she composed herself and tried to close him when Mayank again pushed her away.

"Don't try to close to me."Mayank waved his hand in front of her and she had stopped there..

"You know you are mad. I was dumb as I always considered you my best friend. I thought Piya you do care for me, my dreams, my emotions, I always considered you my best friend whom I could say what is in my heart, whom I could share my secrets ..But you messed up my life because of your childish, mad love"

"Mayank my love for you is true''.."He cut her almost shouting on her and she had stopped.

"stop it Piya..i am fed up listening your stupid talks again and again now I want peace. I want to live my life the way I want please let me live my life"

He saw tears tricked down her cheeks as she was hurt..his words had hurt her badly but Mayank turned away his eyes.

"Why could not you feel my love for you Mayank?am I that much bad you even cant to look at my face"her broken voice had hurt him too but he did not look at her.

"You made my life hell piya,you have hurt me,you have made fun of our relation.."Mayank finally turned around and looked at her..

"I am sorry Mayank to bother you,for making your life hell"tears slipped down on her cheeks and Mayank felt pang of hurt to see tears in her eyes.she was his friend and he knew today he had hurt her badly..

"I will never bother you again and I promise you Mayank,you will never see my face again"Piya said and looking at his face last time ran inside the house '

Tears gushing down from his cheeks and Nupur held her breath'

"Mayank'."she tried to speak something when he cut her..

"Nupur she fulfilled her promise. She committed suicide..she had fulfilled her promise.i could not see her face again"

Mayank said, flinging herself down on her lap and cried out while tears tricked down Nupur's eyes.she wrapped her arms around him pulling him close to her.

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here is next part...i hope u ll liked it😳

Edited by Maria. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

mayank ka past bahut sad hai hope ki age sab theek ho jaye

nice update
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Posted: 13 years ago
mayank's past was so painfull...

hope he overcome from his guilt soon...

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