OS: Winner take all (3), pg 19

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fareeha

@pinkpearlz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#41

Awesome! Khushi not asking him to apologize was sweet, and her idea of a moustache was great. Lol, quite out of blue for arnav. Enjoyed every bit of it.

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meenaluma

@meenaluma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#42

arnav and mustache hahaha awesome update

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ashna27

@ashna27

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Posted: 13 years ago

#43

you are an awesoem writer :)

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Mandy

@MrDarcyfan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#44

Loved this OS! Hot and sweet! Naughty Khushi implying she goes around kissing men! Nice one!

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SunriseGreen

@SunriseGreen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#45

OMG that was brilliant! Totally love your writing style!

Loved the way you described Khushi's getup and her dance. I almost worship what Madhuri wore in "Maar Daala" 😆

Akash is so tactful, no? 🤣 Badmash kahin ka 😆

Personally, I think I'd turn to stone if I saw ASR sport a mustache *shudders* Gah... It'd be positively ghastly. 😳 But then again, Barun can make almost anything work... ☺️

Can't wait for the other parts!