OS: Kabhi Kabhi

molten_lava

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Posted: 13 years ago

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AWESOME!⭐️

I simply loved it! The way Arnav reacted when he came to know of the truth, the way Khushi reacted after seeing his reaction was the best part.

Beautifully described! In certain parts even I was astonished as to why I couldn't describe something this beautifully.

Is there a next part? If not It was ended on a good note. If yes, then I will be eagerly waiting😃

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N0306

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Posted: 13 years ago

#62

oh my god... that was mind blowing... just amazing...

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Neemsundari

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Posted: 13 years ago

#63

Powerful. This is so totally in character...but I guess it is too intense to be shown at 8pm...but we have your OS instead.

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TeleFan

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: molten_lava
AWESOME!⭐️
I simply loved it! The way Arnav reacted when he came to know of the truth, the way Khushi reacted after seeing his reaction was the best part.
Beautifully described! In certain parts even I was astonished as to why I couldn't describe something this beautifully.

Is there a next part? If not It was ended on a good note. If yes, then I will be eagerly waiting😃

Thanks buddy i am not sure if i want to do a next part ... i wanted to keep it open ended its hard to carry this intensity. its only bliss coz its brief. I might venture into another OS later right now too psyched about this sangeet dance and sort of kiss hehe. But next time i write will definitely PM you guys.😊

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TeleFan

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: Neemsundari
Powerful. This is so totally in character...but I guess it is too intense to be shown at 8pm...but we have your OS instead.

I know but i just had to dream it, but i did share it though!😉

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zafi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#66

Wow, what a beautifully written story.

Part one was impecable.

Absolutely brilliant. 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

It felt like I was there. The song kabhi kabhi was perfect.

Loved all 3 parts. Just wondering what happened next please continue this.

Thanks.

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suadvani

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Bravo - the intensity, the setting, the emotions all spot on.. please do continue :)

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Zania

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Posted: 13 years ago

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WOW! WOW! It was sooo intense and beautifully written... loved the poetry .Honestly, This is one of the most amazinggg os ive ever read .😊..But will u be writing another part?? plzzz continue if possible and thnx alot for the PM.😃

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