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TeleFan

@TeleFan

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: zafi
Wow, what a beautifully written story.
Part one was impecable.
Absolutely brilliant. ⭐️
It felt like I was there. The song kabhi kabhi was perfect.
Loved all 3 parts. Just wondering what happened next please continue this.
Thanks.

Thank you. Its been one of my favourite songs and luckily Arhi presented a situation where i could write about it😳.

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TeleFan

@TeleFan

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: zaniax
WOW! WOW! It was sooo intense and beautifully written... loved the poetry .Honestly, This is one of the most amazinggg os ive ever read .😊..But will u be writing another part?? plzzz continue if possible and thnx alot for the PM.😃

Thank you i am so humbled. There are some great stories in this forum and i am glad you guys loved it. As for another part .. i will give it some time and lets see ...if i get some inspiration😉

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laddoo598

@laddoo598

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#73

You have a way with the words..You know how to draw out a varied range of emotions from your readers..I have felt everything from joy, excitement, melancholy, despair while reading this piece..Beautiful work!👏

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meenaluma

@meenaluma

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#74

mindblowing update liked it a lot pls continue if possible

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Angels11

@Angels11

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#75

LIKE button dint work 4 the 1st 2 parts. Really good 1. i liked this a lot!

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#76

awesome update now that was intense loved it perfectly written what everyone expect of arnav totally in character his anger was well written the emotions felt and then when his realizations came it was sweet loved thanks for the pm

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arnshi

@arnshi

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#77

Intense and varied emotions...beautifully written.
Its highly possible that arnav wont believe her initially but later will trust her.
Thanks for the pm.