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Posted: 12 years ago
Will Geet tell the problem to Maan??
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cont soon very nice part
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Both Geet & meera Naraz hain.. Ab unke saiyaan kaise manayenge??
Amazing part..

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amazing update...
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waiting to see how maan pacifies geet...
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romentic dinner say
nice part yah karan hi geet ko blackmail karraha hai naaa😡
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wow great story pl\z update soon
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Part 53

Dev: bro

Maan: hmm

Dev: bro koi tips do

Maan: mein kya do

Yha toh geet khud naraz hai

Geet: aap bhul rhe hai

Mein yhi hu

Aur aap mere baare mein hi kh rhe hai

Maan: wo geet

She turns the face in another direction.

Geet: dev

Dev: hmm

Geet: meera ko jaake mnao

Dev: pr kaise

Geet: apni galati maan lena dil se

Tum usse dil se job hi khonge

To wo maan jayengi'..

Dev: hmm

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He sits near to her, and takes her hand on his.

Maan: geet , wo mein

Geet: mujhe aapse koi baat nhi krni

Maan: jaisi tumhari marzi

Geet: hawww

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She turns the face.

Geet(mummer) : dekha babaji inhe meri koi parwah nhi hai

He stands for leaving the place, but she held her hand.

Maan(think): mujhe pata tha geet , tum mujhe rok longi

Maan: hmm

Kya hua

Tumhe to mujhse koi baat nhi krni

Fir mein yha rhke kya kru

He shocked due to hear geet words.

Geet: jaate waqt door close krke jaana.

Ok

Maan: kya

Geet: oh

Aapko sayad sunai nhi diya

jaate waqt door close krke jaana.

She loosens the grip from his hand.

Maan: hmm

She lightly smiles but unnoticed by maan.

Maan(think) : jyada gussa hai sayad mujhse

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Dev: meera sch mein maine jaanbuzkar kuch nhi kiya

Meera: wo to tum kbhi krte hi nhi ho

Bs sb apne aap ho jaata hai

Dev: hmm

Meera: kya

Dev: nhi

Wo meeting ke baad mein direct bro ko lene chla gya

Phone silent se general pe krna yaad hi nhi rha

Sch mein meera

Maine tumhara phone jhanbuzkar avoid nhi kiya hai

Meera: ho gya

Dev: ha

Meera: to mein jayu

Dev: hmm

Meera(mummer) :- idiot, stupid, duffer

Dev: tumne kuch kha

She denied angrily.

Dev( think):- ye kya abhi bhi gussa hai kya

She takes one step for leaving but his voice stop her.

Dev: ek minute meera

He came front of her and says " tumne mujhe maaf to kr diya hai na"

She not gives any answer.

Dev: kuch bolo to shi

Meera: mere bolne se koi farq pdta hai tumhe

He held both ears and say sorry.

Dev: please

But she is not ready for forgive him.

He pulled her by wrist; in this sudden pull his lips lightly brush her.

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On dinner table

Daadi: I hope aap dono ne abhi tk hmari betiyo se maafi mangli hongi

Dev: hmmm

Daadi: aur apne maan

Maan(mummer): wo to mujhse koi baat hi nhi krna chahti

Daadi: apne kuch kha

Maan: ji nhi

Daadi: to phir kuch khiye

Maafi mangiye

Maan: koi kuch sunana hi nhi chahta ho to

Daadi: kya khehna chahte hai

Geet: daadimaa

Dinner ready hai

Mein serve kr deti hu

Daadi: bte aap dono bhi baith jaiye hmare pass

Meera: ji

Meera sit with dev and geet goes near meera , but maan said "geet yha baith jayo"

She come sit near to him.

Maan(mummer) thanks to geet babaji, ab isne kuch nhi kaha

Geet: kuch kha aapne

Maan : ha

Geet: kya

Maan: mujhe wo sbzi pass krna

Geet: hmm

Her spoon fall down on the floor, she bends for picking the spoon. At this time, maan held her hand'

She gritted her teeth and says "leave my hand"

He denied.

Maan: phle promise kro'''mujhse baat krongi

Geet: nhi

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Bilkul nhi

Maan: baat to tum ab bhi mujhse kr rhi ho

Fir mna kyun kr rhi ho

Geet: nhi sunani aapki koi baat

Maan: to thik hai

Mein bhi hath nhi chodunga

Geet: dust danav

Maan: dust hi shi

Jaisa bhi hu''tumhara hu

She smiles, she realize, she is angry with him, so she make again angry face.

Maan: geet hsne mein koi burai nhi hai

Jitna hasna hai has lo

Geet: mein nhi hs rhi hu

Maan: maine abhi dekha tumko

Daadi: wha kya khusr fusr ho rhi hai

Maan: kuch nhi daadimaa

Geet tum khana kyun nhi kha rhi

Daadi: kya huya beta aur kuch khane ka mann hai

To hume btaiye

Meera: ha geet

Mein abhi bna lati hu

Geet: nhi

Mein khana kha rhi hu

Acha bna hai

Meera : hmm

Maan: to mere samne khayo

Geet(mummer) : ravaan

He smiles.

She tries to eat food from right hand.

Maan: geet tum sidhe hath se khana kyun kha rhi ho

Tum to left se khati ho na

Daadi: bte kya huya dusre hath ko

Geet: kuch nhi daadimaa

Ek dust kide ne kaat liya

Meera: dust kida

Khi swelling to nhi aa gyi

Geet: nhi meera

Bs katne wala tha

Usse phle maine usse maar diya

She pinches on his hand tightly.

Maan: oouch

Daadi: ab aapko kya huya

Maan : kuch nhi daadimaa

Galati se apni ugli kha gya

Daadi: aap khana khaiye

Hmara ho gya

Geet: mera bhi

Meera: geet mein bhi chalti hu tumhare sath

Geet: hmm

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Dev: bro sb thik ho gya

Maan: kuch thik nhi huya

Geet to mujhse baat hi nhi krna chahti

Dev: aur meera to mujhe dekh ke bhi andekha kr rhi hai

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Geet: kya huya meera

Tum khush si lag rhi ho

Meera: asa kuch nhi hai

Geet: kuch to huya hai

Mujhe nhi btayongi

Meera: aaj humara rishta ''.ek kadam aage bd gya geet

Majboori mein jude rishte mein ''.dosti se aage bdkar''..ek nye ehsaas ko phli baar mahsoos kiya

Geet: meera is rishte ko majburi ka naam mt do

Tum to shuru se hi '''dev ke liye kuch mahsoos krti thin a

Aaj tumhari baton se lagta''.us pyaar ki tapis ko dev ne aaj mahsoos kiya

Meera: hmm

Shuru se bhut pasand krti thi dev ko

Na jane kb dosti se jyada mere liye maann mein pyaar ka ehsaas aa gya

Pr dev to naintara se pyaar krta tha

Mein un dono ke beech nhi aana chahti thi

Isliye apne papa ki khushi ke liye kissi aur se shaadi tk krne ke liye tyaar ho gyi

Geet: mein smjh sakti hu meera

Maine bhi to maan se shaadi daadimaa ke liye kit hi

Aur maan bhi mujhse shaadi unhi ke liye ki

Meera: aur dev ne daadimaa ke khnepe

Jb phere ko waqt us insaan kitni asani se mere character pe ugli utha di

Sirf isliye''..maine tute huye dev ko smbhala

Naintara ne jb dev se shaadi ke liye mna kr diya

Aur kissi aur se shaadi kr li

Usne bs apni bhen sameera ki baton pe yakeen tha

Dev ke baare mein ek baar bhi unse nhi socha

Wo tut gya tha

Usse miane ek dost ke naate smbhale

Aur us insaan ne is baat se mere character pe ugli utha di

Tb dev ne mera hath thama''.daadimaa se manjoori leke

Geet: jb daadimaa ne maan ko saaf saaf mna kr diya

Wo sameera se unki shaadi nhi kra sakti

Wo unke liye ek schi humsafar kbhi nhi ban payengi

Tb maan is baat ko manana hi nhi chahte the

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Geet: maine khurana construction join sirf ek contest ki fees brne ke liye join kiya tha

us din mein bhut khush thi'..mein contest jeet gyi thi''..mujhe 1st prize mila tha''aur usse bhi interesting baat ''..maan wha ke chief guest the with magazine owner.

Unhone mujhe gift diya''.apne dost ke hatho se gift leke mujhe bhut acha laga''

Wha sameera bhi thi'..maan ke sath aayi thi

Na jane mujhe un dono ki closeness achi nhi lagi'''sayad isliye maan ke life mein sbse imp, thi ek waqt''aaj kissi aur ko itne karib dekha'''..

Maan ussi din sameera ko daadimaa se milana chahte the'..

Sayad daadimaa ne uss din sameera ki kuch baatein sunli thi''.wo kissi se baat kr rhi thi phone pe''.

Tb daadimaa ne ye fasla le liya''.wo maan ki shaadi asi ladki se nhi hone dengi'..jiske liye maan bs ek siddi hai uchaiyo tk puchne tk''.

Isliye daadimaa ne maan ko mna kr diya''pr karan nhi btaya''maan karan janana chahte the''..issi bhs mein daadimaa ko heartattack aa gya'''

Daadimaa ne mujhse maan se shaadi krne ko kha''.mujhe kuch smjh nhi aa rha tha mein kya jwab du''.

Ha kh diya'..to''.khi mera dost mujhe galat na smjhle

Na mein kh nhi sakti thi'''''

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Meera: mein smjh sakti hu geet

Jb papa ne mujhse shaadi ke liye kha tha

Mujhe bhi asa hi laga tha

Ha kaise kh du

Mera dil to bs Dev ko chahta hai''..

Aur mere papa mera ghar bsta dekhna chahte the'''

Pta nhi geet ye kaisa pyaar hai'''aaj jisse phli manzil milli'''''.

Both pass the smiles.

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Edited by maaneetpriyanka - 12 years ago
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