SwaRon FF - WHEN CUPID STRIKES - Page 22

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...Pwinch3ss... thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update plz do pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved it Abi di... It was just awesome... Swayam and Sharon are sooo cute...just so adorable...loved the update...but you left it on another cliffhanger di... well just loved it... waiting for the next update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Going awesome Abi di :D I cant believe we wrote This :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awww . . . Wow!! Ur FF is definitely out of d world . . . . . Its rocking... Both wants to be wid each other,,, acting same like a couple who r forced to get separated... Nd dey r still nt accepting d fact dat dey have fallen 4 each other,, pata nhi D3 me ye sab kab dekhne ko milega...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow! awsum gng..u all hav written fantastically...! evrythin is gng so smooth!! 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Chapter 17

SH: what ..why do u want to tell him

SW: Cz he keeps asking me again and again and i dnt like it...cz even u get

bothered when he ask the same question in front of everyone

SH: But,, what will he think

SW: That what i feel...

SH: and what is that

SW: That ur special for me...v special

SH: am i really that special for you swayam

SW: SO u think I am stupid to let every other girl use my shoulder as her head rest

and watch entire movie holding her hand

SH: blushes...i need to leave now bye

SW: Stops her and kiss her forehead...

SH: *Shocked* What was that for

SW: Nothing ..just like tht...

They next day in college Swayam hunts for rey as he wants to tell him about the

locket

R: Hey swayam

SW: Oh good u're here...want to tell u something

R: ya ..what is it?

SW: U remember the locket sharon got ...on her bday..well i gifted her the same

R: What u did and y ??

SW: Just like that..cz now we are frndz and it was her bday so i thought i should

make her feel special

R: Special...How come sharon is such a special frns that too all of sudden

SW: Well nothing like tht...it was her bday

R: Bday toh mera bhi hai ...mujhe kya dene wala hai tu

SW: I will get u a tape to close ur mouth...so that u can stop asking me so many

questions and thn swayam leaves from dere

Everyone is sitting in canteen and talking..sharon and swayam look at each other

and swayam informs sharon that he already informed rey abt the locket thing

Rey notices Swayam whispering sumthin to Sharon...

Rey: Sharon!!!

Sh: Huh??...* a little startled tat Rey suddenly said her name n tat too so loudly*

Rey: Tumne aaj woh "S" wala locket nehi pehna kya??...*smiles at Swayam...then

Sharon*

Sharon puts her hands on d locket tat was hidden underneath her top...Truth b

told...Sharon never removed d locket since d day Swayam made her wear it bac

in d locker room...

Sw: Rey...Plz dnt start...

Sh: Y r u askin me tis suddenly???

Rey: Jus wonderin...its a very beautiful locket...u shuld wear it more often...

Sh: Haan...i will...

Swayam notices Sharon's hand on her neck...He undastood tat she was still wearin

d necklace...He smiled at her..n then went near her to whisper sumthin...

Sw: Thanx...

Sh: Huh??...Y suddenly???

Sw: For still wearin d locket i gave u...

Sh: U noticed???

Sw: I notice everything bout u...

Sharon blushes when she hears tat...

Sh: Swayam...

Sw: Haan...

Sh: I promise i'll always wear tis locket...

Sw: Par kyu???...*smiles at her*

Sh: Cus its like havin u wit me all d time...

Swayam blushes...

Sh: oooyyee hooyee.. U look so cute when u blush...

Sw: ab ye blushing blushing khatam ho gaya toh kuch serious discuss kare...

Sh: yeah ok.. U're so boring...

Sw: thnk u... I said so.. Mene kaha tha.. I want sum1 boring for myself jaisa ki me

hu... And listen i think we will need kriyaansh ka help for RiMar and bharKha...

Dono ko aaj hi confession ho jana chahiye...

Sh: okk... Tum rey se baat karo i'll talk to kria...

Sw: jaisa aap kahe... *winks*

sharon blushes... And tells to herself... Yeh swayam bhi na...

Sw: rey muje tujhse kuch urgent baat karni hei chalna mere saath...

Ni: tum dono normal ho na... Me bol raha hu do ladko ka itna saath rehna thik

nai...

Si: nil... Tum pagal ho... Harr baat pe bromance...

Ni: sory baby...now all i'll think is of romance...

Vi: aae bhai dono sambhalke..

Sw: vicky jus shut up...

And they both go to the locker room...

Sh: kria i need to talk to u... Kuch discuss karna hei.. As u're the AGS...

And they both go to the girl's locker room...

Sw: rey dekh we have very less time hume aaj kaise bhi karke RiMar aur BharKha

ke paas se confess karana hi hei...

Re: par dude.. Sirf hum dono kaise...

Sw: dat u dun worry... Sharon is talking to kria hum chaar log enuf hei...

Re: dude tuje nai lagta tu aaj kal bahot sharon sharon kar raha hei...

Sw: rey phirse nai pleaseee...

Re: k fine... Lets go to them and make a plan...

Rey calls kria...

K: haan rey? Bolo...

R: phone speaker main rakho...

Sw: acha saath mein discussion...

R: nahi isliye kyunki mujhe ghana sunna hai...

Sh: kisi ko baat bhi karna hai?

R: toh chalo... Pehle rimar ka sochte hain...

Sh: pehle rinni thodi na kahegi...

Sw: amar hero hai hero woh bolega...

Sh: haan jaise ke tum zero...

K: lol.. Theek kaha...

R: huh? Kya bol rahe ho tum ladkiyan?

Sw: yeh girls always like this only...

Sh: haan aur aap ladkon?

K: ab yeh sab chodo... Concentrate...

Sw: toh pehle un dono ko akele le jana hai...

Sh: aur?

Sw: mujhe nahi pata...

K: tum logon kuch kaam ke hi nahi hai...

Sw: hello?! Toh tum aur rey, viha aur nimmi ko kaun bhoot me saath laye the?

R: chill yaar.. Ab socho.?

Sh: idea!!!

R: Sharon please tum rehne do ...

SH: What do mean ...dnt u dare underestimate me rey

SW: Yes...rey how dare you say this for sharon...she helped me in getting u two

togethr

R: Swayam tu sharon ka bodygaurd kab se ban gaya

SW: Wo wo whatever...but i think we should listen to what sharon has to say..

SH: Thank you swayam

SW: Anytime ba...he then stops and says Sharon

SW: Ok so as we all know rinni loves shopping so let amar take her for shopping

along with me and kria ..and u guys can come along..when we are busy

shopping...we will leave them alone and let amar take care of rinni..and probably

by tat she will get impressed and alone time will give them chance to talk

SW: Excellent...dekha sharon ka superb idea

R: Oh hello hero..bas haan itna mat khush ho

K: rey i think its a superb idea..mujhe bhi shopping karni hai

R: Ye lo...kria sweety..we are going to help RiMar get together shopping ke liye

nahin

K: So saath main agar shopping ho jaayegi toh problme kya hai

SW: Kria yeh tumhara BF bekaar hai ..miser of the highest order...dnt worry main

hoon na...both of us will do shopping

R: Looks at swayam...accha ..u will take kria for shopping

SH: Guys concentrate...me and kria will leave right now and ask rimmi to join us

for shopping..both of u leave and ask amar to join u

SW: Aye aye Captain

Six of them reach market and start shopping...sharon and kria forget abt th eplan

and instead indulge themselves in shopping along with rinni

R: happy with your beloved sharon ka plan now

SW: Its ok hum hain na...waise i never knew sharon and kria are so mad about

shopping

R: Yeh toh given hai ..they are girls shopping ke liye always ready and all cz of u

aaj mera diwaala nikelaga

SW: Thinks...i wonder sharon mera kya haal karegi

R: I know what ur thinking abt..sharon is crazy when it comes to shopping

SW: Who said i was talking abt sharon

R: Stop it i know...what u're thinking abt

A: Yaar yeh rinni bhi itni shopping karti hai kya

SW: Dnt worry...btw amar i want to know...do u like rinni...

A: Smiles and then say yes..i do but i am scared what if she rejects me

Sw: Dnt be scared...Y dnt u try impressing her first???...Help her out wit d

shoppin...

Rey: Haan,then tel her hw u feel...cus i think she likes u too...

Am: Sachi???

Sw: Haan yaar...nw go...

Amar goes towards Rinni n asks her if she needs any help...Rinni asks him to help

her choose which dress to buy...N they actually start gettin comfortable around

each otha...Swayam n Rey decide its time for them to leave nw...So,they go to get

Sharon n Kria...

Sw: Sharon,lets go...

Sh: Wat??...But i'm not done yet...

Rey: Hum yahan shoppin ke liye nehi aaye...remember???

Kr: Par...aab shoppin start kar liye...toh plz...

Swayam n Rey look at each otha n say...*GIRLSSS*...n smile...

Sw: Sharon,i'll take u shoppin anotha day...

Rey: Kria,i aso promise to take u shoppin anotha day...rite nw v hav to go be4

Rinni n Amar come bac...

Sh: Promise???

Sw: Haan baba...nw lets go...

They all leave n Rinni hu was so busy shoppin wit Amar didnt even notice them

leavin...She really felt gud bein wit Amar...Amar too was slowly startin to feel

brave enuf to confess his feelings to Rinni...

Am: Rinni...

Ri: Haan???

Edited by ABBY92 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
hahahaha swayam rey k liye bday gift me tape lane wala hai..LOL🤣😆
n awww...dat locket wala thing...super cute..!😳
haye sharon n swayam blushing...i cn imagine dat..!☺️☺️
n yee gals r gals n guys hamesha pareshan rehte hai shopping se..!😆
n again u stop at suspense point???naaa..!😒
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice part abi.. really cute post n thanks for PM dr..
n i like shopping part in that SWAYAM thinking about SHARON future mei aise hi sharon ne shopping ki tho swayam ka haal kya hoga yaaar?
OMG.. its k pls tuesday jal se jal update karna hum waiting karte hei...
pls PM me dr..
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Posted: 13 years ago
atleast confess toh kar dete na yr ...ok next update...loved this...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome yaar... But how m gonna wait till tuesday... 😔 ... Btw great job.. Nd thanx for the pm...

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