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Posted: 13 years ago
#91
it was Amazing and very sad update
i am feeling really bad for Nupur..she is suffering too much though whatever she did was wrong but she did for her father.Mayank is hurt but he should try to think from her pov too..now his behaviour is too much.
his words are really harsh...
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#92
Hey sujata...
superb story yaar, i just read the whole...i'm reading it continuously from three consecutive nights...🥱
each night i spent 2-3 hrs for reading it and at once i read five parts continuously...it's such a curious story...after each part i wanted to know what happen next so forgetting about the time i used to start reading the next part... too good story yaar...😃
in the initial parts i liked the shy mayank😳 and felt bad whenever his family insulted him in front of others...😡
liked mayur's simple and sweet confession...
nupur's sacrifice, betrayed mayank for her father's happiness...
and now surprised about this totally changed mayank, a man with no feelings...
all is superb...👏👏

and ya one more thing that you come up with a new title with each part and a new siggy...its the unique part of this story...👍🏼

and thanks for the PMs if u didn't i would have missed such a lovely story...so a lots and lots of thanks for that🤗🤗

eagerly waiting for the next part to come so please update soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#93
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Posted: 13 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: drfizaahmed

sigh
yeah mera trademark comment hogaya hai
its painful

but it has always been beautiful
everything is cuming on her face...yes he has changed evry one made him that, he is tired now, hell tired.

loved the way he brushed the box with his finger, there still little enclosed love in his heart for her, tht he has kept safe, i hope she can still see that..beyond wht he is trying to be

there past has always been beautiful so loved filled, evrytime she says she loves him , sumhow made me laugh at her words...
finally she gets his words his anger his pain...

lovly part suja...




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aajkal tu kuch jaida hi trademark comment de rahi hai😆

right ... theres still love in his heart ... bt he is tired and scared ... he was scared to be love someone, specially her ...

i hope u like next part too😳


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Posted: 13 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: 18anila1

Awesome update Suja APU...

loved it lodsss...
bt tumji r koto din ato sad update likhba...
plzzz want to read some happy wala update plzzz...
n for sure i want Mayank too again show some feelings for Nupur...
n want "Romance" must!!!!!!!!!!!
it was such a sad part...
i was feeling so bad for both of dem...
plzzz shob taratari thik kore dao...
i hope now Nupur knew why he has become like dis...
bt plzzz shob thik kore dao...
n want some Romantic moments between MayUr plzzz
loved it lodsss...
love u APU...🤗🤗🤗

ps: sry for d delay...😳



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ami khub sad besi sad update di ... tai na?? 😳 ... ki korbo bolo ... story tar situation tai to eirakam, ki korbo balo??😳

k ... ami try korbo romance add korte, tabe katota parbo jani na

ei situation a ki romantic update deoa jai? tumi balo??

i hope u ll like next part😳

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Posted: 13 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: SamiraARTiMAYUR

UNRES Sujata 🤗

As i told you Suja ur Siggy says everything without reading the update..
this Siggy is realy beautiful both shows how hurt they are..
Mayank's face shows angry at sometime his eyes they're moist u can see how sad n hurt he is..
Oh Nupur now is her time to suffer huh...
Gosh is so hard to hate Mayank for what he's doing to Nupur,,
is so painfull sad, Nupur worrying him where he was,,
and he told his secratry not to tell no one where he's 😭
i so wish Nupur could bear these hurtful words n Mayanks actions
loved as usual their past Mayanks birhday surprise from Nupur 😍..
Suja how much we'll suffer with Mayur?// please make Mayank see sense why Nupur did what she did please huh
other then that the whole update was written Beautifully hun brilliant part
thanks a lot for the update n the pm 🤗



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i m happy sis k aapko sigs pasand aya 😃 ... Thanks once again 😃

right ... this situation is painful for both mayank n nupur as they both suffereing from same pain ...

me too like b'day surprise😳 ... kisse b'day surprise acha nahi lagta😛😆

i hope u ll like next part too😳

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Posted: 13 years ago
#97

Originally posted by: ronojoy_ria

hi

the up is good
so next day when nupur wakes up she became shocked to see herself on the sofa but later when she remmebered the between her and mayank all her confusion wipped out
she is hurt by the behaviour of mayank
but she vow to herself that she will try her lebel best to make maynk like before
she moves towards the kitchen and prepares breakfast for her and mayank
she waited for mayank to come out from the bedroom and have the breakfast but he didnt so nupur had to go in and she got shocked to see the room empty
nupur call in maaynk office to get some info about him but she failed
at last when mayank came in the night
mayank behaved with her badly
poor nupur how much she will bear
plz make mayank understand nupur's feeling and sorrow
plz cont soon and pm me



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right ... theres still love in his heart ... bt he is tired and scared ... he was scared to be love someone, specially her ...

i hope u like next part too😳

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Posted: 13 years ago
#98

Originally posted by: .Divya.

I just wish that things improve between MN 😊



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Posted: 13 years ago
#99

Originally posted by: Auroni.92

Suja apu just lovelyyy part...
But ws sad...Poor nupur...ws so worries for mayank the whole day but he ws being so rude to her...
Par koi baat nahi i know nupur can win him back...
Loved it loads...
Cont soonnn...



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definately nupur can win him back 😃... par thora time lagega ... akhir 5 years ka gap fill hone me time to lagega😳

i hope u like next part too😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: clustersofstar

thanks for pm

beautifully written👏



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