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Posted: 19 years ago
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This is just some information...Sia is played by

she is a friend of the whole group. She is a person who is a great help to Tushar and aslo his bussiness partner. Her talent is very large and she is older than Sneha. She has a small but important role to play in this fan-fic

Krishi

Edited by shakthi258 - 19 years ago
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After class Karan joins them in the canteen when Mukti is teasing Prem regarding Sakshi thinking she was attracted to Prem. She stops when she sees the look on Karan's face. Prem feels concerned and asks, "You all right brother?"

"Guys…there is something I need to tell you." And finally Karan tells them all about his affair and adds. "Today I met her again…she said she wanted to speak to me about something I am really nervous."

Mukti smiles and says, "Don't be nervous Karan…relax."

Karan smiles at her but still feels nervous. A restaurant is seen, Mukti goes there finds his her sitting there. She looked so different in a sari…he went next to her and she smiled. Slowly the whole truth came out, after that night she recently found she was pregnant. "I want to give birth to this child…tumna hamasha yehi kaha ki you don't have any blood relative I want to give this child to you. Will you accept it?" Karan's joy knew no boundary and he hugged her…after a long night walk on the beach Karan knelt down and proposed marriage to Prakshi, "No I can't…I can't tell you why. This child will be yours and yours alone Karan but jaan promise me just one thing you will be by my side when it is born."

"I promise you jaan." He knees down again and fells his child and listens to its voice from within. Prakshi's face is somehow mixed with happiness and pain…she is hiding something.

A car is driven into the Bajaj house, it is Kuki, who has returned after a long time. "Mom dad I am back," she yells both Prerna and Bajaj hug her…after that she goes to her room because she is very tiered. Prerna follows her to unpack – Kuki is in the bathroom. Inside the baggage Prerna sees a C.D and the singer makes Prerna feels shocked. She thinks, "Hay bagwan Kuki isa kai mili tho nahi?" when Kuki comes out she asks her, "Kuki ya C.D this?"

"Mom I heard this in when I was shopping I loved it so I bought it you have got to listen to her voice it is so nice." Koki went on and played the C.D listening to it Bajaj comes there but feels relived it is seeing the C.D. When both of them got some privacy, Prerna began crying, "I really hope she does not know about her…she would not be able to handle the truth I can't loose my daughter."

Mr. Bajaj consoles her, "Don't worry Prerna she won't."

Avinash is in his office when a knock in hared at the door. "Hai Sakshi come in."

"Avinash baiya there is something I want to talk to you about. The case – there may be some information."

"I really hope we can get some solid information because the whole thing is written in code and worst part – we can't brake it." pointing to some paper they had but could not understand. Sakshi kept staring at it she had seen it some were before…were – o were. "Mirror image." She said suddenly.

"What?" Avinash asked.

"The script is mirror imaged that is why it is so confusing…de code it after you mirror image it, it is the ancient Jewish scrip hear they have written the whole thing in Hebrew. Get an expert to work on it for you brother I think that is it."
Soon they worked on the very same track but the statements presented before them was more than just clear because there seemed to some stuff added to this whole script. The script said,

Respectful friend,

Time to raise the historic fight again…the planets have set themselves in alignment – the lady of the night has spoken. Centuries have passed and man has fought with the sacred beast close to the heart. Manny have passed this time when = brother kills brother. This time unchangeable fight for beliefs lay the core in our gain for more power.

: a happiness passed through Avinash's face they were nailed. The logo below was what disturbed him most, DS set in a five point star.

Everyone was at the Basu House – happy about Karan and Prakshi. Anurag and Sam had adopted Prakshi (unofficially) and she stayed in their house. Them not getting married was completely accepted, only Kamini complained that she could not see their marriage but no pressure. One Week leap summery:

Sakshi did get close to Prem and Mukti but not very, the project was the best and P-M-K leadership was fixed in the class. Sneha and Sharath have to go away for two months, Kamini and Shilandar for five months so Mukti goes and stays at Bajaj's place.

Monday morning: Mukti's first day at Bajaj's

Six thirty, Mukti stretches out awake and says, "Babi – coffee." Mukti who was used to being given coffee when she came after her bath went away. It was when she came out for her dress was when she realized were she was. "My god..I have to get ready for jogging."

Mukti meets everyone down only in time for breakfast, she and Prem hurries through it and is about to leave when Prerna calls her back. "Mukti juice."

"Nai chahia choti ma." Prerna knew this was coming she pulled Mukti towards her and force feeds it to her. "Snaha was right." Prerna thought thinking of all the instructions Snaha had given her. "Mama make sure she drinks her juice with out ice during breakfast. She never does and also don't let her get away with a half eaten breakfast make sure she switches of her phone this girl keeps talking. Also give her some snakes after she returns from jogging."

How true Sneha's words were Prerna understood when Mukti's mobile rang. "Hello?"

"Morning Mukti this is Danny it is just that Sanjivi want some dizziness and I wanted you to just finalize the one to send."

"All right when is the presentation?" she asked.

"Tommorow." The manager told her.

"Can you show me at lunch time?" Mukti asked.

"Yes mam." Danny answer and cut the line.

"Prem," Mukti turned to him.

"I may miss our class after lunch all right cover the stuff for me." Mukti instructed him picking up her bag.

"Yes mam." Prem answered as they rushed out.

Krishi
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Mukti is busy in her office, looking at some dizziness and giving instructions to the manager. Clearly she is trying to rush through it munching away her meal bar with a can of coke. A smile crept on her face at the thought of what Sneha would have said when she found out about this. Mukti was called only for the biggest of projects that could be one with her talent. Though she was not 'in office' she did take care of a large part of the work with Prem. This particular project was always her pet project and was always taken care of by her for the year that she had taken over the business. "What time is the presentation Danny?"

"Ma am it starts at 10." Mukti thought for a few minutes and saw what were the classes she had and decided she could afford to bunk collage for a day and go for the project. Once she gets to their favourite hang out she looks for her buddies, they were in the canteen. Karan was busy in work so she did not disturb him Prem was flirting. Rolling her eyes, she went and ordered a latt and donut, Prem joined her at the couch. "Hay there sweet heart." Mukti gave him a look as though he was going to murder him. Prem smiled even bigger, "I am doing that presentation tomorrow," she declared.

"Good, it is a very large project – nearly 8 cores I was going to suggest that to you." Prem replied. "I will cover all our classes tomorrow we have like what a whole hour free and some extra activates so there is only two classes both lectures you can relax."

"Thanks a lot." Mukti finally smiled. That smile always made Prem feel strange from within. It struck in her eyes and healed his with hers, her face softened completely with that smile. He stretched his hands and touched her face and removed the hair from her eyes. Softly she placed her head on his shoulder his arm went around her and hugged her for some time as she closed her eyes. The stress was slowly getting to her…Karan came and sat next to them. "She asleep?" Prem nodded. Just then Mukti's mobile rings Prem takes it out of her pocket and gives it to Karan who moves away a bit.

"Babi?" Karan asks.

"Karan, Mukti kaha hai?" it was Snaha. "So rahi hai? Phir sa kaam over load ho raha hai?"

"Babi rehna do na. You know Mukti. Were is biya?" Karan asked.

"Biya is in the bathroom I only called to check on Mukti. I have got to go by."

"By take care."

Sharath came out of the bathroom asked Sneha, "Who was that?"

"Karan I tried to call Mukti…she is sleeping." Sneha informed him. The expression on Sharath's face changes. "Kya hua what happened?"

"Sneha I am worried about both Karan and Mukti." Sharath said.

"Why?" Snaha searched his eyes.

"You know how much Karan takes care of Mukti. After this child well…" Sharath hesitated and then continued, "I really hope he does not pay less attention to Mukti."

"Sharath you are mental - Tum bachi ka bara mai bath kar raha ho. My brother and my davar take care of Mukti only when she wants them to other wise she takes care of them. As far as Karan's child is concerned she will take care of the mother, father and child if given a little space. She acts like a kid only with you and me, not even with mama papa." Sharath nodded he too knew but he preferred it when Mukti acted like a kid with him. Snaha continued, "Patha hai Sharath Prerna mama was telling me today morning Mukti was going to office for some important work during collage hours."

"She is bunking collage?" Sharath looked very angry, picked up the phone.

"Are chod do na yar. She did not miss anything important waisa it is very good she is doing like this knowing her priority and don't worry she promised that she will make sure that she does not have too many days absent." Sharath smiles and pulls her into a hug.

Krishi

Next part big twist (Kuki)
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Posted: 19 years ago
#44
dat was great plz update soon n i can't wait 2 find out wat da big twist is 😉 peace
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Koki comes out of her bathroom after taking a shower. She is still in a pink bathrobe when she picks up her coffee and paper. Browsing through the pages she finds something that makes her very happy. Dressing in record time she runs out of the room…the camera focuses upon an advertisement announcing the concert of Karnatic music singer Padma Mahaswari giving a concert. "I don't believe this the woman whose music I enjoy is coming to the very place I am staying in – Mumbi. I can't miss this golden opportunity I am going to meet her some how." Down Koki came skipping down and dashed out after grabbing some toast.

When she goes to the shop and buys the ticket, "Do you have any of her albums? I want to take a look at them." They did and Koki buys, seven of the albums out of the ten that were available in the shop. The sales person joked, "You seem to like her music a lot."

"Yes I really love her music." Koki answered and continued, "I am hopping to meet her."

"Then you're wish has come true." Says a voice behind her, Koki turns around and there stands Padma Mahashwari (played by Shabana Azmi) "Good Morning." She is dressed in a classical fawn cotton sari, neatly pined…the only jewellery she wore were a chain, with some bangles that matched her dress, a watch and small earrings. Her bindi was set with a round red sticker…small but detectable, the smile that could win any heart. "Namastha madam. I am Koki, a pop music singer, there is so much I want to talk to you about."

"I am familiar with you. Why don't you come to my home we will speak in the comfort." Koki immediately agreed. When Koki entered she found her self in a beautiful house, a room filled with many books on poetry and prose. "Come I will make us some tea." Koki sat on the kitchen slab and watched as Padma made tea. The care with witch is set the water to boil and then adding the tea powder, letting them simmer on. On another she placed some milk and warmed them but took it off before it boiled and poured it into a tea mug of a china tea set. When the tea was 'ready' she transferred filtered the contents into a tea pot, placing some cakes took the whole tray and lead Koki to the balcony were she had set a table and some chairs made in bamoo. A large view of nature was available. The fresh wind blew through Kuki's hair, as she observed her host. "You have a great western influence in you're habits."

"You observed – yes I had a very close English friend. Milk or lime with sugar or honey?"

"Milk and sugar please." Koki answered as she gratefully accepted the tea and cake she was offered. "Home made." She declared tasting it.

"Yes help you're self as much as you want. I can see you really enjoy it." Padma sat back crossed leg with her own tea. "What is it you wanted to talk to me about?"

"I don't know were to start – it is just that I happened to stumble on you're song and well I really liked it…so much that I became you're fan." Koki tried to explain. "Actually when I hared you're song I felt some thing pass through me…"

"Darling music has that effect on everyone, it kindlers all the old emotions in a new way, when you sing or listen to music there is always a magic that is set around it. Singing is one thing, listening is another but talking about that pleasure is something completely different. A friend of mine once said, music does not control the wild beast, it destroys it." After this statement for nearly two hours Koki and Padma talk until Koki has to leave. "I will await you today evening." Padma says as she hugs Koki good by. After she left Padma cries a bit and then goes away sadly inside the house. "It is good she does not know – for now."

That evening:

Koki entered the large hall were everything is ready, she walks confidently towards the front row and seated her self and spent a whole evening immerged in the music.

In the mean time Mukti was sitting in Mahash's room and working on her presentation for the next day. When she works Mahash comes in with a plate of food and says, "Mukti beta, jab tum kaam karo I will feed you. Now open you're mouth." Mukti opens he feeds her a spoon. Mukti is typing away and Mahash is feeding her. Vishaka comes to ask him something and sees this seen and smiles, "Chahu you take such good care of Mukti, in this rate you will want her to always be with you."

"Her job is like that she needs to place extra effort in her work. That is why she needs to be fed, she already missed a meal." Mahash explains to her. The smile on Vishaka's face tightens but she stays silent. "You know she is working for a very large project and for this she had a meal bar. Another today and Snaha will have my blood. Babi would be excused because she has all of you to take care of but me no, never, you know how Snaha is." Vishaka only nods.

"Chacu bass I can't eat more." Mukti says – clearly she does not want to eat but Mahash forces her fondly.

"Thoda aur beta, thoda aur." Mahash persuades her and Vishaka leaves the place.

Krishi
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Posted: 19 years ago
#46
how cum u haven't continued plz update soon 😭
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Next day, a room is slowly being filled with people for making a presentation. One in particular seems to have a great hold on everything, Mukti Guptha. Slowly the people start giving their presentation, and then Mukti came up, "Good morning Ladies and Gentlemen, I am Mukti Guptha and I will be representing Seema Creations. Seema has a reputation for creativity," Mukti began and after that practically swept away everyone with her presentation. At the end everyone was very impressed. A brake was called when Mukti was rooming around aimlessly outside when she saw a woman with Kuki having lunch, she approached them but was called back because the results were to be announced. "Ladies and gentlemen the presentations were very well but the contract goes to the best, Seema Creations – Ms. Mukti Guptha." Everyone congratulated Mukti, and they left. When Mukti came out the lady and Kuki were gone. "Patha nai kaun tha jo Kuki ka saath tha – I will ask her at dinner." Mukti too walked away.

In her car, she called Prem and informed him that they had bagged the 8 core contract. "Good work champ, hay what do you say we celebrate it?"

"At the party were the contract is go be sighed." Mukti completed.

"I will be ready, saath mai chalanga." Prem told her.

"Sure." Mukti cut the line and called Sharath. "Baiya I got the contract."

"Great job chotu – hay can I call you back I have to go for a meeting." Sharath asked.

"Sure – by." Mukti cut the line. When Mukti reached home she heard Kuki play the piano. The tune was mesmerizing and she stood there listening to it till Prerna came and shook her thoughts, "Ara Mukti beta tum yaha kya kar raha ho? By the way congratulations on you're contract."

"Thanks choti ma. I was just listening to the tune…" Mukti answered. Kuki came up to them and congratulated Mukti. Taking the opportunity Mukti asked her, "Di, I saw you with a lady today when I came out after the presentation who was she?"

"She is a singer." Kuki began, but Mukti interrupted her.

"O all right, I really won't understand then." She smiled, that was what Mukti was all about, frankly spoke when she felt lost. "I liked her sari though, a nice shade of blue in cotton." Mukti continued, "Choti ma I am hungry."

"Come I will get you something to eat." Prerna takes her away.

Kuki looks on, "Mom I know how everyone is proud of Mukti and her talents, she is brilliant. I could never do well in business like her, I really wish – still." She thinks sadly. In the mean time we see Shilandar sitting on a swing deep in thought, a flashback is seen were Mukti comes and takes a sip of coffee from Sharath at the breakfast table. They way Snaha had made him change his dress for a campaign and always insisted that they have a good breakfast with out phone calls. Kamini comes with a tray of tea, (it is two in the afternoon) "Aap kaunsa soch ma duub gai gai?"

"Bacho ka bara mai soch raha tha." Kamini smiles.

"Muja bi unki bahuth yaad ahti hai. Let us complete this campaign and then we can go back." Just them her mobile rang, "Snaha beta we were talking about the three of you."

"Mama Mukti bagged another contract a large one 8 cores this time." Kamini smiled.

"That is very good beta. How is you're work going?" Kamini enquired.

"Mama kam tho ho raha hai. It would take some time but hopefully it would be over soon, three months I don't know how bachi is managing. I really miss her mama." Snaha complained.

"Beta relax…she will be fine. I spoke to Prerna today morning. She told me that she woke up calling for you." Kamini Shilandar and Snaha laughed.

Shilandar got up, "Beta I have got to go, take care." And left. Kamini and Snaha spoke for some more time.

That evening Prem is yelling for Mukti when she comes down dressed in a,



and she also has , and

She does not look up because she is busy putting on her watch, "Arahi hoon ha baba, there." Standing in front of Prem, "Agai…enough? Chala?" Prem was stating at her, an innocent beauty was spreading through her like a warm chocolate drink. "Yes let's go."

Edited by shakthi258 - 19 years ago
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Nice update!!!!!!
...but I can't see the first and last pic, plz post them again
Plz cont soon!
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Guys after today's episode, 🤢 (witch I totally hated and I am never seeing KZK again in my life) Sharath is completely opposite and he believes in women rights very deeply, why that will come in a latter part of the story. I wanted to make this statement.
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A couple is seen watching Mukti and Prem face the media happily, it is Raj and Reema. They switch it of and Reema say, "They are so happy after all they have done…I wish we could do something to spoil this."

"I know…even – we can do something, yes we can do something." Raj's eyes gleamed with a feverish glint. The camera left the room and goes to a disco, everyone is dancing for Fithna Dill, moving around the dancers who seemed to have been drugged…the camera closes upon one couple. The girl is in a

and he is in a and
With black jeans and leather jacket, he moves a bit more closer to her, and places his hands on her waist. She smiled at her husband as he pulled her closer. Many women were eyeing her enviously she knew, many men were eyeing him enviously he knew. At the end of the song, both of them went to the bar, just when Sharath was about to order his drink Raj came and ordered the same. Both of them laughed, Sharath placed his hand in front first, "Hay Sharath Guptha."

"Raj Manhothra." Both of them shook hands. Suddenly a woman wearing a ... comes and shuts his eyes from the back. "I know it is you…" Raj pulls Reema in front as Snaha comes and sits on Sharath's lap, when Reema went back and placed her arms around his neck. "Sharath this is Reema my wife." Both of them shake hands, "This is Snaha my wife, so I guess you ladies also got to know each other." Sharath adds as Snaha sakes hands with Raj and Reema.

"Mrs. Guptha, you seem to be a great dancer, I noticed you." Reema began.

"First of all it is Snaha, come on ab bi umar hai guys. As far as dance is concerned…well…the compliment goes to Sharath." He kisses her on her temple.

"So Sharath do you stay hear in Puna?" Reema asked.

"No we are from Mumbi but came for establishing the business." Snaha replied.

"Strange so are we, we came hear for a holiday." Reema explained they were falling for the act. Soon they found time flew and they had to get to their rooms. In their room, Snaha showed and stood there in a beautiful baby blue night dress with wet hair. Sharath comes out from the shower after her, wearing a towel. With a naught look goes and tickles her, she tried to avoid him but falls on the bed and Sharath on top of her. Slowly they start looking into each other eyes…the lights go of.

Next day morning, both Sharath and Snaha wake up to the phone ringing. "Hello." Both of them say together, two voices shot from the other end, "Happy Anniversary." Both of them get shocked… "O my gosh!" Snaha was all smiles.

"Thanks choti, thanks sala." Sharath said…both of them kept looking at each other…a flashback of their wedding…

Edited by shakthi258 - 19 years ago

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