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Posted: 13 years ago
#71
Thank you so much to all who liked previous updates...🤗and I am sorry I could not reply to all this time because I wanted to update is right now...hope you won't mind.😳

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Edited by --Ruchi-- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#72
Chapter-2

"The lonely Princess..."

In the midest of night,he was changing sides...whenever he tried to sleep,her innocent face flashed in front of his eyes...

"God!Let me sleep!"he got up in annoyance and rubbed his eyes roughly.

"I don't think...i would be able to sleep..."thinking so he wore his footwear and sweat shirt and came out of his room.His room was situated exactly at the northest corner of palace.According to Ranawat it was one of his son's room who had died early in childhood.Mayank glanced at the garden which was just close to his lobby...actually that portion of palace is almost separated with main part with this garden and that's why Ranawat uses it as a guest house.

"Guest house!"he chuckled and while investigating his building ,"Its more like a huanted house!"

He stepped towards gunjan's room which was at some distance in the same lobby.He knocked the door 2-3 times but of no use...

GirlFriend is in deep sleep...ahh!"with a disappointment he stepped towards garden and started walking unreasonably...he could not get over of her thoughts...princess...!Ahh..you are so beautiful!"he thought and suddenly he decided something in his mind and ran towards the main building.

After crossing the huge garden,he entered in the building through back door...and carefully stepped in so that their so called 'Azars' could not find him...his heartbeats were so frequent in nervousness...


"Mayank you would be breakfast of their hungry and wild lions..if they catch you!" the fearful thought frightened him and his forehead was all wet due to sweat in that cold night.

He carefully entered in second big lobby and entered into a neglected staircase which leads to basement old memory room...he slowly stepped down without making any sound and entered in the big hall.It was all dark and he could'nt see anything except darkness. He took his cell phone and on the torch...and started moving slowly in the perimeter of light...in between he was looking the walls,painting of their ancestors hangging on wall by arising the light on them...when he reached at a corner,he colloided with something,something wooden and hard...he focused mobile on it...It was some old,wooden corner of a huge mirror...Mayank uplifted his head...and could not found its end...it was large..larger than his imagination and bigger than his thoughts...He was looking at it with large eyes when he sensed someone stepping down.

His heartbeat sinked and breath stopped for a while...his throat dried due to fear...he hided himself quickly behind an old wooden almirah...

He tried to listen the sound with bated breath,and as it came near his fear started vanishing...it was the same sound of anklet,he could recognize it very clearly...after all this sound and the face did not let him to sleep.

The sound stopped and he peeped behind the almira...princess was standing in front of the mirror with a lamp in her hand...he could see her back...she was standing quietly and looking continuosly at it...

It was confusing for him..."why she is looking at this mirror like this?? It was strange!"

He gathered all his courage and came in front of her..and her eyes braodened to see him..she was about to scream but he closed her mouth with his palm tightly...

"Shhh!!!"he said putting his finger on lip..."Plz do not shout!Your Azars would bake me like toast!"he requested.
She became relaxed so he removed his palm.

"What are you doing here?"she huffed.

"walking after dinner!"he chuckled.

She passed a glare..."Then you should have chosen garden!This is not a place to walk!"

"But I like adventures!so chosen this place"he winked

"Wrong choice!"she said "and by the way fighting with hungry lions will make your morning more adventerous!"she bited her lower lip and smiled.

"My choice would never be wrong!"he came closer to her and she stepped back.

Mayank caught her in his hand...and coming closer to her face he husked..."As you say Princess!"he was directly looking into her eyes...she became sensual and he came more closer to her face...gazing on her soft lips...his intense gaze made her more sensuous...she started breathing fast and glanced his tough chest...both were feeling heat...

"C'mon call your Azars!!!"said Mayank stepping back and leaving her.

She was looking down and her cheeks have been turned red.Mayank smiled...

"by the way...is it your passion to admire yourself in mirror at midnight and that too so far from your room?"he asked naughtily.

She stole her eyes..."N-No..aa..ctually...I was just..."she stammered.

"Just...what??"he raised his brows.

She closed her eyes for a while and said,"I am lonely in this world and this mirror is my only companion.

She said and holding her lamp turned to go.

Mayank was flabberguasted...and when he came back in reality she was on stairs..

"Nupur!"he called

She turned and smiled..."I got your name right!"he smiled too.

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So that's all for now...hope u all liked it.Press Like tab if so.😊
Edited by --Ruchi-- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#73
Reserved...
Haha Ani Im 1st...😆

Edited:

So sorry ruch for unresing it after ages...Dont know how i forgot abt it...
Anyways the update ws really beautiful...
And wah just one meeting isnt letting mayank sleep ha..😆.Hmm what can he do when our Princess is so beautiful...😍
Loved the convo bw MN..And the eye-lock also...It ws beautifully written...
And the last line ws so cute...Mayank is soo intelligent...😆
Loved it loads ruch..
Update soon...🤗
Edited by Auroni.92 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#74
DI...🤗
hayyy...😍😍😍
kya update likha hain apne...By God!!!😍😍😍
its Awesome...😍😍
i was literally feeling like i was watching any Movie or like a Serial...n at d end i was like yaar phir kitna wait karna parega next part ke liye...😆😳😆
ufff!!!!apne meri khwahish puri kardi MayUr dat too in a Royal Story...😍
ok...d Mirror part is actually a mystery...🤔
bt hayyy...m sooo loving dis ff.😳
Beautifully written n described everything...😳
i jst loved it to d coreee...😍❤️😍
its Mindblowinggg...😍😳😍
i m already in love wid dis ff...😳
n d last line...😍😍😍
SubhanALLAH...kya khub likha hain apne...😍😳😍
i jst loved it lodsss d way Mayank Called her name n she turned n smiled...😳
n his last line...""i got ur name right""...😍⭐️😍
loved it to d coreee...
will b eagerly waiting for d next update...
plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz update soon...
love u DI...🤗🤗🤗

ps: le...abhi edit kar rahi hoon meri DI...😳 bt ap jaldi update kariyo ok...🤗
Edited by 18anila1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#75

tu ja pahle soulmates me unres kar jaake😛
mayuloveu thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#76
wow. so beautiful. mayank will be her companion now right?
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Posted: 13 years ago
#77
nice update...😊
but itna chota...
anyways,...it was an amazing update...to iss mirror ki entry bhi ho hi gayi...but how it become a companion as nupur said...
waiting for the next update
continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#78
fantastic updt ruchi
waiting for the next updt
cont soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#79
I want to read the updates of this FF frequently.. I loved Nupur as Princess.. and Mayank's way of finding out her name 😊 😊 😊
Nicely written 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#80
That's an amazing.. update..
very well written

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