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ragini sharma

@-DreamzGirl-

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#51

whata a start Ruch👏👏

and i loved the last paira ...you said it right padte padte hi story ka kuch pata chalega ...

and majan convo ...loved it ...

a 10/10 update ...continue soon

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shria19

@shria19

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#52

amazing update😃

loved it nd sorry my like button is not working

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TheLeo_M

@TheLeo_M

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#53

Superb starting ruchi...
loved the way nupur described her name...its really beautiful..
funny convo between mayank and gunjan...😆 😆

you described all things very beautifully...very appreciative...👏 👏
more eagerly waiting for the next part...
please update it soon...

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kirti123

@kirti123

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#54

wow ruchi fantastic first chapter

could visualize the scenes beautifully written

the way nupur described her name was amazing

waiting to read next part

😊

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arjunratirocks

@arjunratirocks

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#55

wow so cute and nice update

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samira

@-Samira-

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#56

That was such a beautiful start Ruchi 🤗 loved their cute cofo it was awesome,.,,, can't wait to read more hun
please Ruchi can u update Soul Mates ??/

thanks for the pm

love you

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Irum.

@Irum.

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#57

wow! Ruchi it was very beautiful .Especially the description of Palace.

Thnx for pm

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Anila

@-Anila-

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#58

DI...🤗

Awesome update...

loved it to d coreee...

uff!!! kya kahein itna accha likha hain apne...By God!!!

i was actually in my Dreamland...😍sigh😍

loved it lodsss...

i alwaysss like dis kind of stories...

n as i said earlier...i alwaysss wanted to asume MayUr in one of dis kind of stories...

so u fulfilled my wish...so...Thank u DI...🤗

u know...

wen i was reading d first part of dis update whr Mayank saw her eyes...

i was like plzzz i wish ke Nupur kisi White legenge mein hi hoon...as it wud looked actually Breathtaking...n here my DI again fulfilled my wish...

n here is Nupur Standing in White legenga...*hugs*🤗*hugs*

U r my Sweetu DI...🤗

n d way u described abt d palace n d place was mindblowing...

n OMG!!! wah!!! apne Nupur nam ko jaise decribe kiya...i loved dat...

loved it lodsss...

Now plzzz update jaldi...

waiting eagerly for d next part...

love u lodsss DI...🤗🤗🤗

ps: i hope ab tak apka PC thik ho gaya hoga...so yaad rakhna apna wada u said u will update all d 3ffs...in Every week...for once atleast...😳

love u DI...🤗

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tasnim.

@tasnim.

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#59

OMG ruchi it was fabulous fabulous update..
u describe the whole things so beautifully. u know- it seems everything is happening just in front of my eyes.
Majan convo was wonderful. they r really very close friend..loved their cute bonding..
mayurs part was the most beautiful part of this update...
at first i thot nupur is a ghost... 😆😆😆..
loved mayur convo...
very very nice start...Loved it to the core...
plz plz do cont it...

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mayur_eternal

@mayur_eternal

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#60

First chapter was superb Ruchi😃
I was worried that Mayank loves Gunjan.He seems to be a sweet flirt😳
Nupur's intro was amazing and the way she gave him a clue to guess her name..it was so sweet.but she seems to be a sad and caged princess.Hope Mayank breaks the imaginary walls around her and get her soon😳
Update soon😊