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Posted: 13 years ago
#71
OMG!!! Rids pov ws fab!! Her feelings to Armaans actions wr intrstng!! It will take sometime 4 her to believe him. Its natural!! Armaans father caught her!!! Ohhh i hate him more & more! Poor ridhima ; DEATHs words weakens her!! Hope nthng bad will hpn to her & Armaan will save her! Update soon. Brilliant job dear! Thnks alot 4 d pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#72
Good job
First i want to say sorry for late reply.
update was awesome i love it but i m very angry at ridhima who told her to use her brain now she is in trouble but it's not her fault the way arman treated her before she could not believe him i hope she trust arman .she is brave and real fighter in her vulnerable state she still fight for her life that's the beauty of her character and i love her for this and u portrait her character very beautifully. i hope arman be on time to save ridhima's life.
Thanks 4 pm and great update waiting for more once again sorry for late reply .
i know i m late laatif but


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Posted: 13 years ago
#73
congratz for a new thread!
i loved the update it's a very gripping story
keep it up :)
thanks for the pm
tc
xoxo
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Posted: 13 years ago
#74
Congratulations for the new Thread!!!!
loved the update!!!!!
good, arman found riddhima.
please continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#75
Hi dear, First of all congo on da new thread!! Hoping for many more in future...You totally deserve it!!!
And now da update was great as usual... Feeling very soorry for Riddhima... Hope Armaan will save her...
I really cant wait to read further... Plz do PM wen u update...
tc 😊
*Zahra*
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Posted: 13 years ago
#76
Just a doubdt.The guy who said ridz was weak was armaan or his father
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Posted: 13 years ago
#77
hey Pri! congrats 4 new thread! u deserve it!
very nice part!
Armaan's father caught
Ridz! i hope Armaan will b able 2 save her!
cont soon
thnx 4 pm
luv
Sunita:)
Edited by hotKaJen - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#78
Hey Prii...Where r u yaar...?waiting for an update😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#79
It was a very instinct based update - the instinct to survive a bit longer. In the previous one, I'd thought Riddhima had started to believe in Armaan but now I realise it was her survival instinct. She grabbed the chance she was given with both hands.

Riddhima's awareness that she is going to die sooner or later has made it all the more interesting and exciting. On one hand, when she is contemplating in the beginning that if she is capable of using a gun - I went into my action-movie-mode and almost screamed out "girl, can't you see he aint going to kill you" and then laughed at myself for my strange reaction..😆..I understand that Riddhima considers Armaan to be her death but sometimes I feel frustrated because I know he is her life - her saviour. He is that flickering fire of a candle which will try to burn until the last of its wax melts, not caring if the hot wax scalds her skin as long as it is lightning up the darkness..

I gambled my life and believed the death who said he's saving me from DEATH. Reminds me of the solitaire game on my PC when I trade my cards in the beginning not knowing if I have better cards than others but sure that I will manage somehow.

Because you liked it. And she is falling..falling in love..😊

Riddhima is a beautiful lady, who has survived hardships and knows that may be her survival isn't for long but accepts it and is willing to do everything to defy it. She is weak but every time she falls, she tries to get up without someone else's hand pulling her. She understands that she is alone and believes that she'll never really have someone else to band-aid her bruises. May be that is why Armaan seems different to her because he is trying to be her healer. However, the picture that Malik has painted makes her refuse in accepting Armaan as a healing. She cannot differentiate between the blue eyes of Malik and Armaan. When she looks into Armaan's eyes she is reminded that he is DEATH's son and Armaan's pretense in the beginning does nothing to help her opinion and belief. And may be that is why her thoughts about Armaan are jumbled and every time she tries to solve them she comes to only one solution - blue eyes is death.

The chase through the forest is very real and with every word and every step I expect Malik to turn up with a dagger in his hands and push it into Riddhima. I can feel the blood pumping and heart fluttering as if it belonged to a bird. I can feel Riddhima's terror when she wants to look back yet knows that she must not.

I am telling you in no uncertain terms I abhor Malik - he needs to be throttled and thrown from the roof of the twin towers (had they been existing) into the Atlantic..😡

Malik is the root cause of why every time some one falls weak - Tanya, Armaan and then, Riddhima. He is a butcher wanting a sacrficial human every now and then just to please himself, his POWER and his terrorist-arial ways...He's a very good manipulator. That's what he does every time he meets Riddhima. He changes her mind and governs her thoughts and opinions. First he makes her believe that Armaan is going to kill her and now that she is not strong enough to stand up to him and fight.

And you think I am going to follow YOUR orders...Why was I so weak? The former sentence made my heart soar high and the latter broke it. The former is roaring confidence and will but the latter reminds me of a prisoner. For once, when Riddhima answers back, I see a powerful girl who is strong enough to enforce her right to survive but then, I see the glass shattering and a girl staggering on her feet and then falling onto the ground.

When Riddhima took the chance she always meant to lose but all she wanted was a delay. She didn't take the risk for a beneficial cause instead she knew she was going to lose, she just hoped it would just be later...

Love
Dee😊

P.S - This reply is delayed because every day I logged in to reply and then logged out in two mins and you aren't there to threaten me..Be back soon.😊

P.S.S - It's been long since I sang..so..


Na bole tum na maine
kuch kaha
Magar na jaane aisa kyun
laga..
Ke dhoop mein khila hain
chand aur
din mein raat hogayi..
😆




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Posted: 13 years ago
#80
comment updated on page 11😊...sorry for the delay...

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