FF ArSh: Devil's Bride..!! NOTE pg 88 - Page 40

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: luv_kash


double ok...LOL...I want to read it in my full senses:P
K gud nt...tc!!!


okay good night and sweet dreams!

TC
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Amadora


ey meisje ga geen dure woorden gebruiken

die kunnen we niet betalen hea?


heeheh omg.. ur rite 😆

btw, comment edited !!!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Beautiful, can't wait for the next update, make it fast 😆🤗













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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow, that was amazing! This story just keeps getting more and more intriguing. DAB is so dark and dangerous, but that's all part of his appeal. Thanks for filling in more details about Victoria. I'm interested to know how exactly he killed her and I'm wondering, is that Aisha that is behind that door? You've got me gripped with this one. Can't wait to find out what happens next. Thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 13 years ago
I'm not surprised you love writing mysterious stories; you rock at them! you really have a knack for this genre, Sonu.

So many twists and turns here. Your revealing mysteries little by little and its such a clever way to keep us hooked to the secrets. Riddhima does seem to have gone into a possessed trance and it happened after the strange glow from her ring and the woman behind the door called out for help. So is that some sort of link..? is Riddhima linked to Victoria? i'm quite puzzled if i'm honest. i'm guessing you were intending that hehe
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: bebosallu4eva

Beautiful, can't wait for the next update, make it fast 😆🤗















thanks dear :D
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: DulceAmor

Wow, that was amazing! This story just keeps getting more and more intriguing. DAB is so dark and dangerous, but that's all part of his appeal. Thanks for filling in more details about Victoria. I'm interested to know how exactly he killed her and I'm wondering, is that Aisha that is behind that door? You've got me gripped with this one. Can't wait to find out what happens next. Thanks for the PM.


thank you so much!

I'm glad you like it!😃

will update soon


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -Aliya-

I'm not surprised you love writing mysterious stories; you rock at them! you really have a knack for this genre, Sonu.

So many twists and turns here. Your revealing mysteries little by little and its such a clever way to keep us hooked to the secrets. Riddhima does seem to have gone into a possessed trance and it happened after the strange glow from her ring and the woman behind the door called out for help. So is that some sort of link..? is Riddhima linked to Victoria? i'm quite puzzled if i'm honest. i'm guessing you were intending that hehe


Thank you aliya you're so sweet!!

This FF is full of secrets sweety :p and yes Shilpa is linked to Victoria..

Victoria and aisha were not just friends they loved each other like sisters.

when Aisha heard about Victoria's death she got angry and did something very bad..

...after a few chapters you will get the know what she did.. :P

btw I'm glad you like my FF and again thanks for the sweet comment :D

TC
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: DarkDove

omg... soni... im in awe of your writing and your creativity and your fantasy !!!!!


this update was short but beautifully written...

omg... it was kinda scary ...hhhmmm dab was chanting some spell to kill the creepy woman behind the door... it that woman his sister ???

aahhh! victoria possessed cat again...
AAAHHH!!!!! that stupid princess !!!!! she stabbed DAB!!???? seriously...DAB!!!!!
iieeuuwww she drank his blood...
wat did he do?? put a black small bag with powder against her forehead...!!

wow.. nice... you went back to the 'future'... for a while... with dadi telling her granddaughter about her dark story... which has more to it than just a love story...

hhmm interesting... you told us more about dab's past ...
hhmm he must be a very strong warlock, because looks like he is immortal...!!! and thats how he connects with victoria !!!!!! he used her and seduced her with his fake love to gain something... but what???
his sisters was victoria's best friend... interesting...

omg soni!!!!!! ur driving me crazy !!!!!

LOVE YOU !!!!!!


THANK YOU SWEETY!!

ahahah yes she is stupid! areh she drank his blood in a sexy way :P
yes black magic! but babes can you imagine our hot DAB lying on the ground..
my favorite color (red) on his chest. muahahah

yes dadi is crazy! uhmm love story?

yes he seduced her and then killed her! ( do you still like him ?)

LOVE YOU MORE!!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Amadora


THANK YOU SWEETY!!

ahahah yes she is stupid! areh she drank his blood in a sexy way :P
yes black magic! but babes can you imagine our hot DAB lying on the ground..
my favorite color (red) on his chest. muahahah

yes dadi is crazy! uhmm love story?

yes he seduced her and then killed her! ( do you still like him ?)

LOVE YOU MORE!!


dont thank me woman !!!!!!
heheh she did drank it in a sexy way ur rite 😉
cool... black magic...yes i can totally imagine him lying on the floor...aahh!!! sooo hawt... im melting...
duh! its my fav color too.. red.. and black of course !!!

yes luv story... it will come rite !!!????

ehheeh he seduced and killed her... shut up!!!! i dont still LIKE him...
i used to love him.. but now... I LOVE HIM MORE AD MORE AND SUPERMORE!!!
*sighs*...my dark and evil hubby...
Edited by DarkDove - 13 years ago

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