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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: luv_kash

n ya jawaan soni its 6:30 here
OMG...its gonna be sonifull night...yippee!!!!


ahah a crazy night!! :P
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Posted: 13 years ago

hey girls 🤗

thanks for the sweet comments!

so here it is:

Chapter 4

She felt a strong hand around her waist. Shilpa slowly turned around and looked into two beautiful golden brown eyes. The second her eyes met his. The beautiful golden brown eyes turned into black ones. Armaan gave her a murderous glance and pulled her roughly against him. Anger truly written across his face. He had warned her to not leave his room but no she was too stubborn to listen to him. Armaan wanted to strangle her. In his opinion woman were stupid useless creations. Good for nothing. Shilpa tried to push him away but he was too strong. Armaan looked at her beautiful face. Those green eyes He thought.

"Dadi, doesn't he like green eyes?" she asked me. I looked at her "No dear, green eyes stands for power and DAB loves power" I told her. She smiled and looked at me with her big green eyes. "That means DAB loves me?" she whispered. "He loves you a lot my dear" I answered and stroke her head. She giggled 'DAB loves me' she whispered happily.

Shilpa's green eyes remind DAB of Victoria. She didn't fear anything and anyone. She wasn't just an attractive and beautiful princess, she was a very smart and intelligent lady. That's why Armaan chose her. His sister Aisha was Victoria's best friend. Armaan loved his sister. He did everything for her. After his parents death Aisha became his responsibility, his life. Aisha was a tall and attractive princess. She had long curly red hair, golden brown eyes and a beautiful smile. Armaan hated boys who stared at his sister. One day he almost killed a young man who tried to talk to her. Aisha cried and asked him why he did that. Armaan smirked "You're too good for them princess" he had told her.

Victoria had made a big mistake. She fell in love with DAB and love made her weaker. DAB didn't love her he used her. He killed her! Armaan looked at Catherina for a few seconds. This lady is stronger then Victoria he thought. He didn't know why but he liked Shilpa. She was fearless and full of hate! Shilpa could kill million souls without feeling sorry for them. Armaan shook his head. He almost forgot what happened a few minutes ago. Shilpa raised her eyebrow. 'Why are you staring at me, you devil!' she snapped angrily and tried to get out of his grip. Armaan pulled her closer against him.

He looked at the half broken chain around the big wooden door. He moved closer to Shilpa's ear. "You're in trouble, Cat" he whispered. Shilpa bit her lip nervously. She was definitely in trouble. Why didn't she just listen to him? If Armaan didn't came on time she would have opened the door and who knows who's behind the closed door. Armaan looked at her for a few seconds. This lady is crazy, he thought. He glared at her and pushed her away. Shilpa stumbled back. She felt a sharp pain in her thigh. She looked at her thigh it wasn't bleeding anymore but she could feel the pain.

Shilpa closed her eyes, trying to not attack Armaan and kill him for hurting her so much. 'You devil!' she snapped angrily. Armaan raised his eyebrow. 'Remember sweety nothing hurts' he said with a smirk. 'Don't kill him, don't kill him!' Shilpa told herself. Armaan walked to the locked door. He putted his hand on the wooden door and whispered something. The girl from behind the door screamed in pain. 'Please fratello potente, don't do this to me' she begged him. DAB didn't listen to her. "B-I-H" He whispered. The girl again screamed in pain. "Please stop!' she cried. Armaan glared at the door. 'Things have changed, your tears have no affect on me' he said sadly.

It was quiet for a few seconds. Armaan closed his eyes. "I have to kill your' he whispered. 'Vicky please help me!' the girl yelled. Armaan eyes grew wide. 'Don't you dare to call her name' He snapped angrily. He closed his eyes and whispered an evil spell. 'aaahhh' the girl screamed in pain. 'Vicky, please help me' the girl begged.

Shilpa looked at the door and felt an electric shock through her body. The ring around her finger started glowing. Her eyes opened and grew wide. Her beautiful green eyes turned into dark, bloody red eyes, her soft hands became hot as fire, her face became pale and the veins around her eyes became thick and purple. Shilpa walked to the wall and grabbed the sword. 'I will kill him before he can kill you' She whispered. She threw her sword in the air. The sword circled in the air and she grabbed it before it hit the ground. She blew her hair out of her face and almost run towards DAB, attacking him.

Shilpa and Armaan fell both on the ground. Shilpa lay on top of him. 'You want to kill my best friend my sister, I will kill you!' she snapped angrily. She grabbed the sword and hit it through his chest. She didn't stop hitting him. Her dress was red with blood. Armaan felt a sharp pain in his chest. He tried to stop her but it seemed like she was possessed. She hit the sword through his chest again and again. She stopped for a few seconds. 'Blood of a magician makes you stronger, right?' Shilpa asked with a smirk. Armaan just nodded.

Shilpa bent her head and licked the blood from his chest hungrily. Armaan felt weak and tired. 'Your blood makes me feel alive my little devil' she whispered. Armaan took a piece of cloth out of his pocket and took the black powder out of the cloth. 'I'm sorry sweety' he whispered and pushed the black powder against her forehead. Shilpa screamed in pain. It felt like her soul was burning.


hope you like it!

comment and let me know what you think! :D

ps. I know this chapter is short but I will try to make it longer tomorrow

Edited by Amadora - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
This is the ultimate thing!!!!
Finally soni you have quenched my thirst.
I love mysteries n I have read so many of them but I always wanted to read one on arsh...n this is surely my fav.I have no words to tell you how much I m loving this.
This part has surely
broken all records of fantasy and fear,and I
know this is just the beginning...there is much more than this.
So the secret of Victoria is out,not the whole.
She was in one sided love with DAB, who the hell can stay unaffected by his charms :P.
But DAB
being DAB, used her * for what??* and killed her and Aisha came to know about this so he locked her in that room :0. How can he do this with her own beloved sister??
I m sure
this story is not as light,there must be a more stronger reason behind the DAB's actions.


OH MY GOD!!!!!! after this part I m
loving both the characters more and more.

Shilpa's character has turned into a bold
and strong...she is a girl who has been
consumed by the desire for revenge and
though she tries to control herself a lot,every
move she makes is guided by that desire.

That little convo between shilpa and
Victoria has left me with countless questions
:0

And now the last scene, first of all
it was too HOT!!!!!! shilpa stabbing DAB's
chest and those sexy remarks...eekkss.I knw it
was a bit scary ...shilpa drinking his blood as
if it was some sort of drug for her but for
me it was just sexy :P and I think through
that black powder DAB was trying to remove
Victoria's
spell from her.
soni I want
to write much more but i think its enough
for now.:P

LOVE YA :)

PS- I LOVE DAB :D
Edited by luv_kash - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
soni update third one fasty -fasty, i m sleepy-sleepy :|
i ll edit my comments later :)
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: luv_kash

soni update third one fasty -fasty, i m sleepy-sleepy :|
i ll edit my comments later :)


the last king?
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Posted: 13 years ago

yup...or ur plans have changed?
Edited by luv_kash - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Urvi go to sleep sweety
I will post the last king tomorrow

okay?
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Posted: 13 years ago
omg... soni... im in awe of your writing and your creativity and your fantasy !!!!!

this update was short but beautifully written...

omg... it was kinda scary ...hhhmmm dab was chanting some spell to kill the creepy woman behind the door... it that woman his sister ???

aahhh! victoria possessed cat again...
AAAHHH!!!!! that stupid princess !!!!! she stabbed DAB!!???? seriously...DAB!!!!!
iieeuuwww she drank his blood...
wat did he do?? put a black small bag with powder against her forehead...!!

wow.. nice... you went back to the 'future'... for a while... with dadi telling her granddaughter about her dark story... which has more to it than just a love story...

hhmm interesting... you told us more about dab's past ...
hhmm he must be a very strong warlock, because looks like he is immortal...!!! and thats how he connects with victoria !!!!!! he used her and seduced her with his fake love to gain something... but what???
his sisters was victoria's best friend... interesting...

omg soni!!!!!! ur driving me crazy !!!!!

LOVE YOU !!!!!!
Edited by DarkDove - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

ey meisje ga geen dure woorden gebruiken

die kunnen we niet betalen hea?
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Amadora

Urvi go to sleep sweety

I will post the last king tomorrow

[DIV]okay?[
/DIV]


double ok...LOL...I want to read it in my full senses:P
K gud nt...tc!!!

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