IPK FF:Broken Mirror-Chapter 10 Pg 109 Upd-16/06

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Yellow.

@Yellow.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#631

what a come back update... truly this is so beautiful👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

poor khushi and arnav both are suffering so much... but i still cant forgive him for what he did to khushi .. no women must go through that.😭

hmm so now khushi is going to act normal in front of the family members...

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pikudika

@pikudika

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Posted: 13 years ago

#632

Wow Hiru! Captured both their emotions beautifully. But still cant get over the fact that he would stoop so low!

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rockinggirl5

@rockinggirl5

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#633

I loved it. It was very well written. I was crying while reading this. Amazing!!! I can't wait for the next part. Please continue soon.

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imran78

@imran78

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#634

Finally you are back.
I've been waiting patiently till you updated.
I was an amazing part.You have wonderful described her pain and his regret. I feel so sorry for both.

After your comeback, I hope you update in short intervals. I am dying to read more, what will happens next.

Thanks forPM

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JerryTheMouse

@JerryTheMouse

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#635

I am amazed!

The way ou have captured the darkness, the pain, anguish, and trauma is beautiful!

I shudder to think that Shyam is biding his time...

Thanks for the PM!

Sjm15 / JerryTheMouse

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jenshad

@jenshad

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#636

I Have Read This FF All Over Again 😳

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insanelycrazy

@insanelycrazy

Inactive

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Posted: 13 years ago

#637

welcome back after the hiatus! the emotions u depicted of khushi and arnav were splendid. omg khushi has just shut her self out 😭

and i don't care what arnav's going thru, what he did was unacceptable, irrespective of his views on khushi's so called character. i do kind of feel bad for him but den again he deserves all of it, atleast for the time being. i love how u were trying to explain his state of mind, that he wants to apologize but he can't because he's too ashamed of himself to even try that.

omg this is so sad :( i'm so excited to know wat u've got in store.. absolutely loved loved loved the update hope u update soon :D and the comeback was abolutely awesome 😉

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queenie11

@queenie11

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Posted: 13 years ago

#638

Please don't ever stop writing this story! It's one of my favorites by far! I love the detail and devotion you've put into writing the characters - really really beautiful

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dramebaaz.af

@dramebaaz.af

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#639

Ooh gosh! I'm so glad you decided to update!!! This chapter was brilliantly sketched!

I love whole Khushi's appearance and Arnav really has a long way to go. In true sense, this really is a broken mirror!

Thanks a bunch for the PM