IPK FF:Broken Mirror-Chapter 10 Pg 109 Upd-16/06

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Honkytonk

@Honkytonk

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#621

Poor Khushi, having to go thru such a traumatic experience, no wonder she reacted like that to Arnav!!! How is he ever gonna make things right with his wife????? Truely sad time for everyone in the Raizada family

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ChocoBloc_12

@ChocoBloc_12

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#622

OMG noo you can't shut this down... this just too good to let go...

It was a brilliant update ... i was on the edge of my bed whilst i was reading this... but it was heart-breakingly sad...her fear and loathing towards Arnav gave me goosebumps!! You portrayed their emotions so vividly that i swear i felt like my heart was beating 100mph lol

I can't get over what he did though... i mean the way Khushi just brought herself out of the nightmare at the end amazed me... i don't know how she's ever going to get her old free spirited self back... but i'm just so eager how you continue with this..

Flawlessly written update, felt every emotion every pain... Thanks for the PM :)

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tinsel

@tinsel

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#623

A Very tearful update! Poor Khushi suffering

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Bajaj.rb

@Bajaj.rb

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#624

I'm so happy you updated this one and plz don't stop... I really want to see Arnav do everything in his power to make things right with Khushi love her and care for her that she is able to overcome what he did he has his work cut out for him... And I know you will make it amazing cause it has been so far:) and I have complete faith in you so plz do continue

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Mira

@kyunki_iloveu

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#625

wowww...soo emotionall...ughh wonder wht shyam will do now..:)

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littlemoi

@littlemoi

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#626

Chapter 8 was so damn intense and so good!!

Love the way you wrote Arnav and Khushi's thoughts and miseries!!

Please continue soon!!

Thank you so much for the pm!!

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arshia

@ashvez

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#627

Martial Rape is horrendous...I do agree.

But, as of now I don't see any window for Arnav's remorse to get through Khushi.What would be the point where Arnav will be able to convince Khushi? Arnav is also suffering ...as he is self loathing himself.But, could Khushi be ale to get a glimpse of what he is going through? I know, it is almost impossible for Khushi to come out of the nightmarish reality...if she doesn't even talk to him...then where is the glimmer of hope? Should there be someone where Arnav confides to,if not in the family then an outside professional help( Psychologist) to make Khushi come out of the trauma...because at this rate she would not even be able to see him let alone forgive him.

This is a toughie, Hiru!!!But very well presented.

Ash.