IPK FF:Broken Mirror-Chapter 10 Pg 109 Upd-16/06

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Flame.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#381

I really don't know who is at fault here. Arnav did this because he felt Khushi was reason his sister was dying and everyone know's how much he loves Anjali but what happened with Khushi was horrible.

Whatever the case is, a woman doesn't deserve to be treated like this. Jeez it was intense and you did an amazing job. Very well written. Eagerly waiting for the next part and now can very well understand Khushi's current condition. My poor doll :(

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Yellow.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#382

OMG that was so heart wrenching update😭😭😭
while reading i was having tears i could imagine how difficult it is for u to write that.. kudos to u 👏👏
seriously no women must go through such torture.. poor khushi she is all broken... v can blame arnav must also because he loves and dies for his di.. so him taking such a step in rage is 😔 cant wait to read next part... please pm me when u update.. i didnt get for this one😭... but was stalking 😃

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SillyPepper

@SillyPepper

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Posted: 13 years ago

#383

Ouch! Poor Khushi...She did not deserve this treatment...
but yeah! I won't Arnav (u too!) for this...
Loved the update...Continue soon dear

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Siham

@sihu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#384

You cant just stop it there...the suspense is just killing...Fantastic writing...Continue soon please.

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asumi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#385

Emotional!

Arnav's behaviour- ya as you said he will do anything for his sister- a mother figure in his life. so when he thought Khushi ruined his sister's life, he was beyond rage and anger.

Shyam- DIE YOU A#($#*$#*

When Anjali told it was Shyam- that was when i started breathing again!

beautifully written- kudos to you! it is really not so easy to write these emotions ! brilliant!

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smileyhug7679

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Posted: 13 years ago

#386

Ooh my god he is brutal...

Doesn't even think it thru ...

Smthismis why she hate's himm

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Aisha

@asha...

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Posted: 13 years ago

#387

That was heartbreaking!!!...yet you wrote it really well...👏

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shraddska

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Posted: 13 years ago

#388

Completely agree wide u... u have done a great job n arnav is capable no doubt if enraged... waiting for the next chapter though didn't get a pm for this one and I can understand why...

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adeeti10

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Posted: 13 years ago

#389

I think it's well written... what comes out is the anguish, and his intent to humiliate and overpower her - he commits the worst act possible, would like to see how this proceeds... keep writing.