IPK FF:Broken Mirror-Chapter 10 Pg 109 Upd-16/06

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prpk525

@prpk525

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#201

superb... waitin for d next update

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sbk2

@sbk2

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#202

Hiru...

That was a spectacular update. I was lost in those haunting words of yours...

👏 👏 👏

Your words have captured Arnav's and Khushi's pain so well...that I actually imagine all of it in my mind.

Spellbinding!

Along with all the others, I too am waiting patiently for your next update 😃

Do continue 😳

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yanka

@yanka

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#203

Hiru... a fab update. 👏 👏 👏

You write so so well... how well you describe what Arnav is going through... i just hope we get to know soon what happened to Khushi ... though am a bit apprehensive too... waiting for things to start getting calmer and better between them...

and we do not mind the length at all ... hope the next update is longer 😃

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CrazyAbtTV18

@CrazyAbtTV18

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#204

really eager to know what happened? do continue. its interesting..

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shonagudia

@shonagudia

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#205

Hey
I just read your story . Must say it's very intense and emotional. Wondering what had happened which left Khusi and Arnav is such a pain and Khusi hate him so much.
Nk, Shyam all seems mystery here. I can make out that Shyam's truth is out but what he had done before that.

What make Khusi change her decision of going home when now his father wants to take her back ??
Love to be a part of this journey so keep me in your PM list.

Continue soon ..

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kajal

@kajal620

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#206

hey super update...u have portrayed the feelings so well...update soon..its ok if its long..:)

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aura9

@aura9

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#207

Thanks for the update I haven't read full yet.

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aura9

@aura9

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#208

Well, I very well understood that Shyam had been aware of Arnav's feelings towards Khushi. Which forced him to do something drastic, that you have not yet revealed I guess. But, I didn't get the NK case what is it that actually happened to him, why did he just leave his Desi Girl.

Edited by anonymous4444 - 13 years ago

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aura9

@aura9

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#209

Would you please throw some light to the Nk case. Any ways waiting for the next update. Your's FF is really very emotional. I had to cry my heart out while reading it.

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Hiruni

@CDlove

Rocker

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#210

Originally posted by: anonymous4444
Would you please throw some light to the Nk case. Any ways waiting for the next update. Your's FF is really very emotional. I had to cry my heart out while reading it.

Patience my lovely one patience! there is a mystery behind it too and I will let it out when the time comes!! 😉