IPK FF:Broken Mirror-Chapter 10 Pg 109 Upd-16/06

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catalyst

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Posted: 13 years ago

#211

amazing really nyc do pm ven u update !!!!!!!:-)

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tina_1234

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Posted: 13 years ago

#212

amazin story..loved alld three parts

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meluhan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#213

Wow, that is one great start, read all 3 chapters in one go. Please continue, it is really good.

Want to know what happened. My heart goes out to both Khushi and Arnav.

Pls PM me, i have added you to my Buddy list.

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soni_md

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Posted: 13 years ago

#214

Brill, love! Keep going ... the pace, the story line, length, no need to say sorry for any of it, love. Your FF, your rules ... we follow, biting our nails in anticipation!

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Yellow.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#215

omggg this is so heart breaking... poor arnav and khushi both are suffering a lot of pain... what exactly happened between arnav and khushi in the past that she is not letting him near her also..cant wait how flashback unfolds.

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meenaluma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#216

fabulous update pls continue soon

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BarunSobtiLover

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Posted: 13 years ago

#217

Fantastic writing!!! Read it in a go! You're a great, great writer - which is SUCH a huge understatement!!!!!! Need to sleep now, hence a short comment. But you truly are gifted!! :) Loved the story so far, love the way you're keeping the past in suspense to an extent, and revealing bits of it chapter by chapter!!! Once again, amazing piece of writing this is!! Update soon! ;)

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Posted: 13 years ago

#218

awsome

loved it

update soon!!!!

i liked dis babuji idea...gud it was

hope evrything bet arshi will be ok...do make it soon

byeee

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..Damsel..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#219

great update...waiting for the next part...

thanks for the pm

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Marybarton

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Posted: 13 years ago

#220

Fantastic piece. I heart raced and ached. I felt the pain. You are such a talented writer. I am a little worried that Arnav forced himself upon her, I wanted to do that in my fic but stop just short of the actual wrongdoing. There's no going back if you commit that crime. Love just can't happen. That's how I see it, so I am still debating it. But this is just my guess. Whatever you are planning, looks great.