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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part1
(Its not the beggining)
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it was a beautiful morning a girl 28 year old was standing in the balcony lost in deep thoughts suddenly a boy comes and hugs her from back
n-yeh koi waqt hain utne ka
k-mom aap aur dad ko military school main trainer banana chahiye jab dekho discipline yaar main koi employee nahin hun
she was silent
k-kya baat hain lagta hain mrs sharma mr sharma ko miss kar rahi hain
n-tujhe mana kiya tha na mujhe mrs sharma bulaane je liye main sirf aur sirf nupur bushan hun mujhe us insaan se judi kisi bhi baat se nafrat hain
k-mom main bhi toh unhi ka beta hun
n-teri baat alag hain tu mera laadla beta hain
k-main aap dono ka beta hun ek baat bataiye aap dad se itne naaraz kyun hain woh itne bure toh nahin hain
n-agar woh itna hi acha hain toh usike paas ja mere paas kyun hain
k-aapka gussa bhi na naak pe hota hain main apne mom ko chod kar kahin nahin jaane waala
n-tere bina main bhi nahin reh paongi
k-acha yeh sab chodiye aur smile kijiye
n-subah subah uska naam leta hain aur hasne ke liye kehta hain
k-aapse baat karna bekaar hain yeh sab chodiye breakfast karne chalte hain aapke breakfast ka time hogaya hain
he was leaving
n-ek minute ruk
she kisses his forehead
n-tu nahin hota toh pata nahin kya karti akeli pad jaati
k-nupur bushan aur centi pata nahin suraj kahaan se nikla hain
she smiles and catches his ear
n-mera taang keech raha hain
k-sorry
n-chal breakfast karenge
they were sitting two 4.5 year old kids come and hug krish
both-goodmorning bhaiya
k-aaj aapke school ka first day hain na tension mat lena agar teacher ne gussa kiya toh mujhe bata dena main unhein dekhloonga
n-imdono ko bigad kyun raha hain waise tera bhi toh college main first day hain
k-meri baat alag hain is shehar se mera puraana rishta hain waise maine kabhi nahin expect kiya aap yehaan aane ke liye itne aasaani se maan jaayegi
n-main yehaan aayi hun toh sirf tere liye mujhe koi haq nahin hain tujhe tere dad se alag karne ka
k-yeh haq pranav anjali ko bhi hain
n-use inke baare main bilkul bhi nahin pata
k-agar pata chala toh
n-tu batayega tujhe jo karna hain kar par main uske life main kabhi nahin jaongi
at the car
k-drive main karoonga
n-tu bacha hain tu drive nahin karega
k-main bacha nahin hum
n-mujhe gussa mat dila chup chap bait
he is krish 17 year old mayurs son he is the only one in her life who stays with her he us the one who can make her smile or cry
itne bade bete ka chakkar baad main pata chalega she leaves pranav and anjali they reach his college seeing the college tears roll down her cheek
k-kya hua mom aap teek hain
n-rehne de tu nahin samjega
k-mujhe sham ko aane main late hoga dad se milkar aaonga
n-teri marzi
he hugs her
k-love you mom
n-all the best
in the evening a man enters his cabin
voice-andar aate waqt door knock karte hain itna bhi nahin pata
m-yeh bolne waale tum hote kaun
k-is company ka future chairman
he turns leaving mayank suprised
m-tu kab aaya agar pehle pata chalta toh
k-aap mujhe pick karne airport aate
m-tu akele aata toh zaroor pick kane aata
k-mera saath mom hi thi koi aur nahin hain
m-isiliye toh nahin aaya mere paas unimportant logo ke liye waqt nahin hain
k-woh aapki wife hain unse itna gussa kyun hain
m-uska naam kaafi hain gussa karne ke liye usne pehle tujhe mujhse itne saal dur kiya woh yehi chahti hain ki main usse maafi maangoon par aisa kabhi nahin hoga tujhe koi aur baat karni hain toh kar warna main busy hun
k-mujhse baat karne ke liye busy ho
he hugs his dad
k-i missed you dad
m-maine bhi tujhe bahut miss kiyaitne saalo main bahut bada hogaya hain
k-par aap waise hi hain handsome
m- yeh sab chod aur yeh bata kahaan join hua hai agar admission main problem hui toh mujhe bata main tujhe city ke top college main join karoonga
k-maine excel join kiya hain
m-excel
his face changes
k- kya hua excel ka naam lete hi itna pareshan ho rahe hain kya baat hain
m-rehne de tu nahin samjega
k-mom bhiyehi kehte hain please bataiye na hua kya aap dono ek dusre se itna nafrat kyun karte hain
m-mujhe abhi kaam hain main baad main miloonga
he leaves
k-mujhe nahin pata aap dono ek dusre se itna nafrat kyun karte hain par main aap dono ko phir se milaoga its my promise
Edited by --unknown-- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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precap
mayur face to face
Edited by --unknown-- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#24
mayank and nupur ka.. kuch zayeda bada.. boy nahi hain...


well very very nice.. loved the first part
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Posted: 13 years ago
#25
nice start.

so mayur son onw in college ... means he is big.

nyways ... waiting fro next update

continue oson

thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#26
great part..
waiting for the next...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#27
nice start
cont soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#28
beautiful start
Mayur hate each other too much- why ??????????
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Posted: 13 years ago
#29
nic update
thanks 4 the pm
may god bless u
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30
loved the first part...

amazing starting...
will like to read more

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