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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice start
wanna read it more
do cont. it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice part is really intresting dono mai sai koi bhi har mana wala nai hai dono apna gusse mai ara wah hai yah kaha ego mai lets see ab krish kya karta hai
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Posted: 13 years ago
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If small issues are not taken care on time they lead to wars which can bury many lifes
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Krish catches his head after seeing mayurs reactions this was already expected but still he feels sad
his locket falls on his hand.it has mayurs photo which mayank presented krish on his 12th birday his last birday with mayank.he remembers his past memories with mayur
krish-mom dad aap kyun alag hogaye i need you both mujhse jyada pranav aur anjali ko kahin unke saath bhi woh sab na ho jo mere saath hua hain mere liye toh aap dono the mere angels par unka kya i think unki angel mujhe khud banna padega.par kya karoon dinner krish tu soch kya raha hain woh dono ek saath dinner nahin ek dusre ka murder karlenge
mayank enters cabin
m-akele akele kisse baat kar raha hain
krish-dad aaj sham aap free hain
m-kyun kya kaam hain
arranging his files
krish-itne din baad mile socha saath main dinner karenge
m-idea acha hain par tu aayega kya
krish-zaroor aaonga dad(to himself)sirf main nahin koi aur bhi aayega
m-ok sharp 9 ek minute bhi late hua toh jaanta hain na kya hoga
krish-dad ek doubt hain clarify karenge
m-pooch agar mere paas answer hain toh dunga
krish-aap aur mom bilkul ek jaise smart intelligent gussewale strict thode gamandi bhi hain itne saare qualities match karte hain fir dono saath kyun nahin hain
he was leaving
krish-kya hua dad no reply aise kyun jaa rahe hain
m-maine pehle kahaan tha agar iska amswer mere paas hoga toh hi dunga
he goes to door again turns
m-waise gusse aur gamand main tumhari mom ko koi competition nahin de sakta
krish-om bhi aapke baare main yehi kehti hain
m-agar nupur kumari tareef karegi toh chaukne waali baat hain warna its common
mayu leaves
krish-pata nahin aaj kya hoga
he leaves home nupur was in kitchen he hugs her from back
krish-kya kar rahi ho nupur kumari
n-lagta hain aapka ghumna pura ho gaya warna wahaan ka hawaa yeha nahin aata
krish-dad toh aapke bina devdas ban gaye hain mujhe unpar taras aaraha hain
n-jooth bolke kisko tasalli de raha hain woh kabhi nahin badlega
krish-aapko dad ki har baat yaad hain
n-chah kar bhi kuch baatein bula nahin saktein
krish-iski wajah hain boring ghar ki environment kyun na aaj dinner pe baahar chale
n-achanak dinner ka idea
krish-aapko cid main hona chahiye har baat pe shaq
n-acha baba chalenge
krish-love you mom
he hugs nupur
krish-hey bhagwan please mujhe bachalena
in the night at restaurant
krish-aap andar chaliye main aata hun
n-gaadi tu kaise park karega
krish-mom please i can
she goes inside with pranav and anjali she doesnt notice him as she was busy listening to pranav and anjali.he was checking the menu suddenly his eyes fall over her but he was little bit suprised to see two kids with her
he was staring at her she reaches the table and sees him both stand still looking at each other they have lot of things left unsorted
pranav-yeh uncle hamaale table pe kyun baite hain
n-uncle nahin tumhare papa hain
with lot of anger in her eyes
mayur talk with eyes
m-papa isne mujhe itne din is sach se dur rakha ki mere khud ke bache hain i wont leave you for this i will make you suffer for what you have done to me
n-tumne jo sajaa paanch saal pehle diya hain woh aaj bhi bhugat rahi hun ab aur kya sajaa doge
m-tumhein koi kaise sazaa de sakta hain usmein toh tum expert ho isiliye mujhse sab kuch chin liya paanch saal mujhe mere bacho se dur rakha
n-yeh tumhare nahin sirf aur sirf mere bache hain inhe tum kya koi mujhse alag nahin kar sakta
m-yeh tumhara waham hain jo bahut jaldi tutega
waiter comes mayur sit in their seats
waiter-sir order
m-two plates paneer
pranav-mujhe paneel nahin khana
mayank smiles and calls pranav near him with eyes pranav goes to him he makes him sit on lap
moving hands in pranavs hairs with proud look at nupur
m-my son
she gives i dont care look mayu completes his order
pranav was sitting whole time on mayus lap he felt like he got all the happiness in world he kisses his cheek and hugs him to his heart.
Anjali was feeling bad
m-kya hua beta
in anger
anjali-kuch nahin
m-giving naughty smile apne maa ka namm roshan karogi
she stares at him in anger even today her angry looks make him silent
m-waise aap bhi yeha aa sakti hain
she smiles jumps from nupsis lap and runs to her father
he gives winning look to her
he hugs her and kisses her also he forgot all his worries in those few moments with them
he was busy chatting with them nupur was hell irritated
after sometime as planned krish enters
n-kahaan tha tu ab tak i think agar tera stupid plan pura ho gaya toh ghar chale
krish-meri dinner
n-sirf 10 minute hain tere paas
he waited for another 10 minutes expecting mayur to talk but stones ko thodna itna aasaan nahin hain jitna krish samajta hain
after dinner
krish hugs mayu
k-bye dad apna khayal rakhna
m-tujhse yeh baat kehne ki zaroorat nahin hain
looking at nupur he knows krish is safe in her hands
anjali and pranav hug mayu and say bye
m-bye beta tum dono jyada din apne dad se dur nahin rahoge
looking with anger at nupur
he bids bye to anjali nd pranav with great difficulty
krish was full worried about nupurs response
Edited by --unknown-- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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My Comments
nupur is abussiness woman so she always wears sarees and leaves hair open right from past to present if anytime she changes her style i will specify
reason for mayur sitting silently at dinner mayur behave decent in public places they dont like to make there fun in public because both are from high society they hate such things which krish knows very well that was the reason behind his plan
Edited by --unknown-- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#36
very very nice update di...

loved it..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#37
great update bechara krish woa yeh nai janta kah yeh mayur hai inki jb ek dusra sa larai huti hai tu dono mai sai koi har nai manta mayu meet his children wao that was really gud nice update cont soon and do pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38
nice update.

so mayank didnt knw abt pranav n anjali.

n now he going to send lawer notice.

waiting forn ext update

continue soon

thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39
beautiful update

Krish is very sweet and intelligent

hey what happened b/w mayur
why they hate each other
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Posted: 13 years ago
#40
nice updt
thanks for the pm

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