KriYaansh FF~Rolling Hearts In Deep#1(#2LinkAdded) - Page 83

Originally posted by: d3_rox

Amazing Anki di...plzzz do continue...don't stop ur FF I really love it...I culd not comment coz I had exams but now pakka waala promise I will comment...plzzz jaldi update karo...I am waiting!!!:):)

Originally posted by: star94

No doubts.. Its absolutely amazing
update the next part fast. Very eager to read more esp. The bachlorette party sequence ;)

Originally posted by: cheersona1

Wowww I am lovig all dat tease...Btw so flowingly u write all the tease...obvioualy coz ur one...he he he

As usual awesome update..i love th song selection and u hav done full justice to the dance moves...if nt very descriptive it very apt...I love th tension dat u creating btw dem...ummm..nice nice...

U know wat i would love to read na...so plz u can do a small dream sequence atleast wth all dat..he he he

Lovely update darling...

Pat on my back as well fr commenting evn though m sua tired...bt u deserve it...hugsss

Originally posted by: SanjArShi-ASR

Wow anky superb...ekdum mast update...rey drooling over kria...and kria ne rey ke isharo pe nach kiya awsome...i liked rey aatitude mast...and congo for 100th page ab jaldi naya thread pe naya update de dena...and awsome update as always...love u...

Originally posted by: 21Neha21

wow...

d update is so beautiful...

kria's dancing on rey's tunes...loved dat,,

love d way u describes everything so beautifully..

n plz dont discontinue it...realy love ur ff..

waiting eagerly for d next part..

Originally posted by: shaffy_arsha

wowww ankhi kya likha h tune...kriya's dance n wo b on rey's tune is lyk a treat yar...i cn imagine dat scene...n rey drooling over his love lyk in d3 he did...kash wo sb wapis mil jaye hme...god!!!!!! i m missing dem so badly...bt dear u always make me smile by ur update
ab nxt update jaldi se kr de...wait ni hota

Originally posted by: aria009hera

<font color="#00cc66" face="Georgia, 'Times New Roman', Times, serif">hehehehe.. shaffs.. tu almost harr ek comment yehi bolkar shuru karti hai!!</font>

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<font color="#00cc66" face="Georgia, 'Times New Roman', Times, serif">Aur ab toh maine hope bhi chodh di hai D3 se KriYansh ko wapis paane ki... leave it.. sab kachra kar dia D3 ne toh!!</font>

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<font color="#00cc66" face="Georgia, 'Times New Roman', Times, serif">Aur mujhe tujhse poochna tha ki my senti updates are not good kya?? u had commented smthng like dat on d ArShi OS!! toh mai tera dimaag khaaying ab!!</font>

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<font color="#00cc66" face="Georgia, 'Times New Roman', Times, serif">Next update depends on the readers of dis FF entirely... I just wanna feel dat ppl want to read dis...😊</font>

Originally posted by: aria009hera

vaishu... thanku thanku sooo much for the comment!!

m glad dat the scene could be imagined so easily!!

aur woh toh suspense hi hai naa poore FF ka ki y she left him in the first place... abhi se bata dungi toh FF khatam ho jaaega.. i promise to unravel it wid d flow.. but if i get enough likes.. and nice comments!! m getting a bit laalchi here.. but as dese r my last few days of freedom and fast updates.. i guess m entitled to being a lil laalchi...

Loved the update...specially the Dance part...

agar Kriya aise hi Rey ko seduce karti rahina...toh...toh pata nahi kya hoga...

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