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Posted: 13 years ago
#41
hey guys
nice cs n intro
would love 2 read it
so pm me when u post 1st part
see yaaa =)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#42
Great intro loved it pm me when u update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey...nyc intro...plz cntinue...amazng stry...n plz plz add me 2 d pm list...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow... nice intro... I loved it... pls update soon and send me pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice one neetu di,upasna n ankita nice ork...plzz PM me ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46
Loved the intro !!!!!!Pls update soon.Eagerly waiting for ur update!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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okay ppl.. so here is d update... pls no joote and chappal coz dis is my first attempt at writing.. aur agar yeh upasna ne dimaag nahi khaaya hota toh i never would hv even tried..!! honest reviews appreciated!! and kriyansh still dont meet in dis chapter!! so be patient!! 😊

CHAPTER 1

"HEY SHARON!!" said kriya, overjoyed at seeing her best friend, "where's Swayam??" she asked. On hearing even Swayam's name, Sharon instantly started blushing, "He and the others are waiting for u downstairs" said Sharon.

"Wow!!" Kria thought to herself, " I cant believe Sharon is blushing so hard, guess LOVE really does change u!!" Lost deep in her thoughts, she made her way downstairs, jahaan pe Swayam, Rinni, Amar,Vishakha, Bharat and Simmi were waiting for her. She hugged them one by one. She was extremely happy to see her friends again after all these years, she couldn't believe she had missed all of dem soo much. All of dem were thrilled to see Kria as well..

"Hey Kria!! Missed u a Lot", said Swayam in his cute, caring tone.

"Hey Kria, tumhe aaj ki saari dishes chakhni padegi!! No dieting!! Aaj ki catering maine sambhaali hai!!" said Amar.

"Kria doll u have to do a fashion show wid me!! I will base my next collection solely on u" said Rinni.

"Kria dude yeh ab chodho.. tell me how u hv been!!" said Vishaakha in her usual cool tomboy attitude.

Kria suddenly felt so overwhelmed wid all d love she had missed out on in d past years!! But still something was missing, something still felt incomplete… and she very well knew what or more approriately WHO that something was!!! She suddenly applied brakes to her chain of thought, and asked calmly, " Where are Vicky, Neha and Nil??"

"ohh haaan.. I forgot to inform Vicky and Nil dat u are back!! I don't think dey even kno about d party!! Dey r at their band practice I guess.." Swayam told Kria.

"and Neha??" Kria was getting impatient to meet her cute bubbly broken English bolne wali bachpan ki friend!! Suddenly her head jerked upon hearing Neha's voice.. and she couldn't believe her eyes at wat she saw.

" This is Neha reporting live from the welcome party of the Dazzlingly beautiful supermodel and scintillating dancer!! The perfect PACKAGE!! Miss Kriya Ghai!!! We will be updating u on d HOT TOPICS of discussion in this party!"

As soon as the camera went off, Neha came running to a very flabbergasted Kria and hugged her tight!!

"I missed u sooo much!! M sooo glad u are back!!" said Neha.

Kria still shocked at the outpour of fluent english for Neha's mouth, struggled to bring herself to her senses!!
" I missed you tooo Neha! But yeh kab hua?? Kaise hua?? Mujhe kyun pata nahi chala?? Tu reporter kab se ban gayi Neha??"

"Arre baba woh sab chodh!! Jab kisi cheez ke liye passion ho jaaye dil mei toh nobody can really stop u from achieving the impossible! Correct??"
Kria smiled at her cute friend's bhaari bharkam dialogue! Chaahe English or No english, Neha was just as filmy as she was back then!!


Meanwhile, In a studio in other part of city.. the Band was having a private jamming session..
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dHtwZ07N1ic&feature=g-hist&context=G2bb1ef3AHTwn0bwAAA ( this is a link of the song Rey is singing.. please imagine Chester as Rey and Nilesh behind on d keyboard in place of Mike. And Vicky in d background on acoustic guitar.. I know this song is not an acoustic version but I really wanted to post the LP version) ( P.S. this is like one of my most fav songs and I almost died d day LP did dis cover coz I hv been a diehard LP fan for now like 8 yrs or so.. I find Chester's voice the most soulful as well as d most awesomely rocking!! Its like he is GIFTED!!)
the scars of your love remind me of us

they keep me thinking that we almost had it all…

the scars of your love, they leave me breathless

i can't help feeling

we could have had it all…

rolling in the deep

you had my heart inside of your hand

and you played it to the beat…

'NOT THIS SONG AGAIN!!' this was the thought going in vicky's mind while his fingers strummed the guitar strings effortlessly.. ofcourse he didn't need to apply any effort to remember the chords, they had played this song almost a thousand times in there practice sessions, but never once in a public performance. Well… the reason for that was too clear to everyone in the band.. Rey was the one who was hurting the whole tym he sang that song.. and everyone knew the reason for his pain.. but nobody dared to open their mouth and take the forbidden name!! sometimes Vicky himself didn't understand how a teenage crush could be so intense that it would lead such lasting scars which would hurt even today.. He could never understand a love full of pain.. For him, love was the most beautiful, heart warming, ticklish sensation.. for him, love was his CUTE si NEHA.. ADORABLE si NEHA.. NEHA.. NEHA.. and the song came to an end.. and he was still lost in his NEHA dreams wen every1 looked at him as he was still strumming the strings of his guitar!!

"VICKY!! Kahaan khoo gaya hai???" screamed a voice which was rough as a raw diamond as well as smooth like liquid gold at the same tym, for not paying attention.

"Arre maii.. wohh maii.. mai yeh soch raha tha Rey.. ki agar tu yeh ganaa ek baar crowd ke saamne perform kar de.. toh ladkiyaan toh tujhpe hi ROLL karne lagengi naa!?!" Vicky blurted.

"Teri bakwaas khatam ho gayi ho toh hum practice continue karein?? Aur mujhe pata hai tu kiske sapno mei ROLL kar raha tha!! Tere chehre ki GOOFY GRIN bata rahi hai!! Neha ke khyaalon mei khoya tha naa??" Nilesh accused him.

"Tu toh chup hi reh.. Teri wali tere ko ghaans nahi daalti isiliye tu itnaa sada sada saa rehta hai!! Dusron ko toh khushi ke khwaab pirone de.." Vicky said going back to his NEHA DREAMLAND.. NEHA.. NEHA.. NEHAAA.. AAAH!!! NEHA KO MAINE DO GHANTE SE FONE NAHI KIA!!! MAAR DALEGI MUJHE!!!! Just den he took out his cell phone.. nd saw 18 missed calls of NEHA!!!

Vicky started running around d studio in panic… "Leave it to Vicky to make any situation Hilarious" thought Rey to himself.. Why can't I be so light-hearted all the tym… Why do i always keep brooding about u?? Why do I still dream about u every nyt?? Even after all dese years.. Even after u moved to london without even thinking once about me.. Why does this teenage love of mine never end for u… God agar poori duniya ko pata chal gaya, ki India ke itne bade ROCK Band ka lead singer.. Heart throb of millions of girls.. Ek teenage crush ke liye aaj bhi majnu bana gaane gaata hai.. toh meri IMAGE ki toh DHAJJIYAN udh jaaengi!! Tch.. tchh.. Kria!! Kyaa haalat bana ke rakh di hai tumne meri!!

PRECAP: The big bang reaches Kria's party! Rey and Kria meet for the first tym after 10 years!! expect a LOOK LOOK HAWA HAWA on d way.. 😉😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow miss cc u v roak <3
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow !!! ankita !! damn awsum update !!!! hahaha !!! loved it !!!!

especially the precap !! hehehe !!! jaldi updating !!! hehehe !!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: cuteupasna

wow miss cc u v roak <3


meko toh darr lag raha tha!! ki kahin chapter padhte hi joote padhenge!!

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