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😃amazing please please please update soon and please can you pm me 😊
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okay.. so first some ranting frm my side.. i personally hate this chapter sooo much.. coz it took like ages to write.. due to mera stupid brain block.. and aur bhi bahot saari musibatein.. bt still if u guys like it thoda sa bhi.. den pls comment.. aur agar u hate it.. den also comment.. hehehe.. another thing.. some references to greek mythology has been made.. as now i ll inform u abt my nerdy sa obsession wid diff mythologies.. i love reading abt gods and diff cultures.. *yes i m a nerd* *sigh* soo.. ZEUS= the god of thunder.. the king of all d gods.. and ruled Mount olympus.. ADONIS = legend goes that he was the most handsome man to ever walk on earth.. APOLLO=God of Sun and light.. and wherever in dis chapter rey addresses kria as love.. its jst to tease her.. mny ppl do dat.. jst wanted to make it clear.. one last thing.. i hope this chapter is long enuf.. it literally took all my will power to write dis one.. aarghh.. so here goes..



CHAPTER 3

Kria could only see red!! God!! She could picture murdering Sharon and Neha.. and enjoying it!!! How she hated being embarrased! And that too.. of all the people in the world.. by Reyaansh Singhania!! How she could bury herself deep in some hole for her reaction at seeing him!! Why?? Ohh why did she react that way?? She knew the answer to that question.. He was heavenly!! He was as majestic as The Great Zeus himself'!! He was a reincarnation of Adonis! If Adonis came anywhere near to how handsome Reyaansh Singhania was.. His walk.. it was soo Regal.. and he seemed to emit the radiance of Apollo the god of sun.. like he knew that the world actually did revolve around him.. She had actually thought of surrendering herself to him then and there only.. The way his almost green with a tinge of brown hazel eyes smouldered.. with all the pride and confidence in the world.. Surrendering to him wasn't even an option at that time.. it was need.. pure acute NEED!!

And then, like the insolent bratty prince he was.. and always had been.. he opened his wretched mouth and ruined everything.. IDIOT!! MORON!! But his laugh.. they had sent electric currents up and down her spine.. Even though he was laughing at her, why did she feel so ecstatic watching him laugh his heart out.. His voice was husky yet absolutely seductive. He never really laughed in any of his concerts.. Atleast not in the ones Kria had seen.. and she had seen quite a few.. His silken voice caused reactions in her body that she had never experienced before.. And why the hell did he hold her so possessively?? No.. Actually how dare he held her so possessively? But the way he held her was the reason why she had immediately gone to heaven.. He didn't need to shut her up back then with his hand.. coz his touch had already done that.. She had melted in his strong hold.. her insides were on fire.. yet her body had goosebumps all over.. And a feeling of belonging in those arms arose in her.. *BAMMM* Her thought process came to an abrupt halt as she bumped into someone head first..

Kria: Aaarrgh.. Dekh kar chalne mei pareshaani hai kya??

Sharon: Sorry.. Sooo Sorry Kria.. tum thik toh ho naa..

Just as Kria saw Sharon she remembered all about their stupid plan.. and erupted like a volcano..

Kria: Sharon.. tumhe toh mai chodungi hi nahi.. tumhari wajah se uss Idiotic moron ne..

Just then Swayam came running to them.. sensing the atmosphere, he made some damage control' hiding Sharon behind him..

Swayam: Kya hua Kria?? Kaun idiot?? Kaun moron?? Kisi ne tumse badtameezi ki kya?? Abhi bataao mujhe.. mai handle karta hu.. kiski itni himmat hui..?

As soon as Swayam started wid all dese questions, Kria came back to her senses.. She couldn't tell anyone what had happened wid Rey.. that would only lead to more teasing..

Kria: Woh swayam.. wohh.. woh ek waiter ne mujhpe kuch gira dia tha.. haan juice gira dia tha..

Swayam chuckled inwardly at d pathetic excuse she came up with.. But still maintained his calm on d outside..

Swayam: Haan toh par Kria.. isme meri Sharon ki kahaan galti hui?? Tum isko kyun kaccha khaane jaa rahi thi??

Kria: haan woh.. woh isliye.. isliye kyunki isne mujhe kahaa tha dress ke baare mei.. dats y I was in a hurry.. so bumped into dat stupid waiter!!!

Swayam: Ohhh accha aisa hai kyaa?? But Kria ab toh tumne juice saaf kar lia hai naa??

Kria: Juice?? Accha haan.. saaf kar lia maine..!!

Swayam: Toh gussa thook do baba.. and go ahead and enjoy your Welcome party.. aaj ki star ho tum.. and everyone is looking for u..

Kria: ohhkk.. alrite.. I ll meet up with u guys later den..

Saying dis she went on to address other guests' Leaving Sharon and Swayam there only..

Swayam: Mujhe pata hai tumhe mujhse chipakna kitna pasand hai, but ab Junior Jhansi ki Rani chali gayi hai.. toh tum mere peeche chipna band kar sakti ho jaan..

Sharon: *blushing* Rehne do.. Koi chipakna pasand nahi hai mujhe tumse..

Swayam gripped both her hands and pulled her close to him..

Swayam: Accha?? Nahi hai pasand??

And Swaron LOOK LOOK HAWA HAWA started!!

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Rey stood there brooding.. God.. She was even more angelic dan he had imagined in his dreams.. Dreams.. which came every nite.. And still she had managed to surpass all of his imaginations.. Her brown orbs still glistened and pulled him towards herself like opposite poles of a magnet.. He just couldn't stop himself from holding her.. And how he loved the way she fit into his arm perfectly.. Like she was made to belong there.. How he wanted her to belong to him.. Forever.. But again.. again he had screwed up big tym.. What was with him!!! What was his problem..?? Why the hell did he have to bully her?? When he cared so much for her in his heart, then why did teasing her please him soo much?? He knew the answer to that question.. Teasing her was the only way he could get her attention to him.. And he would even kill for her attention.. *Sigh* He let out a cold sigh.. and started walking back towards the party.. He spotted Vicky near the food counter *as usual* and went to him..

Vicky saw Rey walking towards him,and he instantly knew he had met Kria.. It was written all over his face.. he was back in his brooding mode.. And it was gonna take Vicky all his energy to lift up his mood!! How he wished he had Swayam for back up.. But Swayam was busy with his queen!!

Rey: Vicky saale!! Tune mujhe bataaya kyun nahi ki yeh kiski party hai?

Vicky: bata deta toh tu aata kya?? Mil lia naa usse??

Rey: tujhe kaise pata??

Vicky: Aise third class sawaal poochna band karega?? Bhool jata hai kya kisse baat kar raha hai?? tere chehre pe likha hai BOLD letters mei.. ki KRIA NE MERI BAJAA DAALI!! Bol.. bajaa daali naa?

Rey: Haan yaar.. Par galti meri bhi hai.. Maine hi chedha tha.. Toh woh kahaan se chup rehti?? Temper queen ho gayi hai ab poori!!

Vicky: Abe toh ab damage control kaise karega??

Rey: Pata nahi kaise karunga!! Abhi uske saamne bhi gaya toh zinda jala degi!! Par mujhe usse manaana hi hai kuch bhi karke.. Zinda nahi reh sakta mai uske bina.. Marr jaaunga uske bina..

Vicky: Chupp saale.. Bas bahot ho gaya.. Party mei aaya hai.. aur tabse bas rona roye jaa raha hai!! Aisa Reyaansh Singhania kisi ko pata chal gaya naa.. toh tera image salvation mere bas ki baat bhi nahi hai.. chal baaki sab ke paas..

And they went on to join the rest of the group.. Just then Swayam and Sharon also joined dem..

Sharon: Rey, tumhari tabiyat thik nahi hai kya?? Yeh ukhda ukhda sa muuh lekar kyun ghoom rahe ho??

Before Rey could even answer her question, Swayam chipped in..

Swayam: Haan haan Sharon, Rey ki tabiyat thik nahi hai.. tum jaao Rey ki Dawaai ko lekar aao..

Swayam winked to Sharon to go get Kria.

Sharon: ohhh accha thik hai.. abhi laati hu Rey ki sab bimariyon ka ilaaj..!!

Saying this she ran off to get Kria.. leaving Rey completely dumbfounded!! Kria on the other hand was busy giving interviews.. Sharon literally pulled her away from there..

Kria: Sharon.. Ab kya ho gaya hai?? Itni jaldi kahaan jaane ki hai?? Aise kaunse VIP se milwaana hai tumhe mujhe??

Sharon: VIP nahi VVVIP se milwana hai tumko.. ab chalo bhi naa.. itne sawaal kyun poochti ho?? *waise bhi sabke saamne milogi tab toh atleast jhagda nahi karogi usse* Sharon thought to herself..

And as soon as they reached' Kria realised who the VIP was.. Indeed he was a VIP.. As soon as she saw him everything around her disappeared.. Her senses all went into a frenzy.. and she could not take her eyes off of him.. His green-brown hazel eyes locked on her.. and again she felt like a prey ready to be devoured.. On the other hand.. Rey was already in heaven.. His personal heaven.. those dark brown eyes invited him that it was almost maddening not to be near her.. (IN SHORT PPL.. LOOK LOOK HAWA HAWA CHALING.. I HOPE U LIKED MY PERSONAL DESCRIPTION OF LOOK LOOK HAWA HAWA)

Sharon: Umm Kria.. U remember Rey naa..

Sharon interrupted.. Bringing Kria back to her senses as she realised she had forgotten to breath the whole tym.. And Swayam lightly nudged Rey with his shoulder.. bringing him back to earth as well..

Kria: Rey.. Kaun Rey?? *returned to full attitude avatar*

Rey chuckled internally at dis.. ohh how he loved his gussail baatcutter..

Sharon: Arre Reyaansh Singhania.. Tumhe yaad nahi hai.. Tum dono toh ekdum inseparable the naa.. ab tumhe kaise yaad nahi??

Kria *blushed when Sharon mentioned inseparable* : Accha haan yaad aaya.. tum toh poora tym mere aage peeche ghoomte rehte the naa..!!

Rey(in a very low tone): Abhi bhi ghoomne ko taiyyar hun jaan.. tum hukum toh karo..

Kria: WHATTT???

Rey: Ahem.. Kuch nahi.. Ur looking gorgeous Kria.. This Dress looks amazing on u..

Kria*full on blushing now* : Th..Thank you' even u look OKAY!!

Rey: Okay huh??? (hmm baatcutter.. ab toh tumhe asli Reyaansh Singhania dikhaana hi padega)

Just then Vicky, sensing another fight on d verge.. stepped in..

Vicky: Arre Rey.. Lets hit the dance floor naa' Kitne dino baad toh party kar rahe hai.. Tu dance nahi karega toh kaise chalega mere bhai..

Kria: Isko dance karna bhi aata hai kya?? Patthar jaisi toh body bana rakhi hai.. yeh kya dance karega?

Rey: U just wait and watch love.. Ki mujhe dance karna aata bhi hai ya nahi..

Vicky (to himself) : Shaabash.. Mai manaata thak jau.. kabhi dance floor pe nahi utarta.. yahaan maharani ji ne ek taunt kya maar dia.. chala majnu prove karne khud ko.. accha ungliyon pe nachaati hai kria!!

Rey entered the dance floor and signalled d DJ.. d whole crowd went berserk to see Reyaansh Singhania perform.. Girls were going mad and screaming and squealing.. just then Rey saw Kria's face from afar.. She was still in her full on attitude mode.. and all d odr girls screaming for Rey had just added to her bad mood!! Rey smirked at her reactions.. nd just then the song started playing..

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=y_SI2EDM6Lo&feature=g-hist&context=G22c7dd1AHTxVYNAAA

(okay.. so firstly pls pls pls listen to the song.. and headphones compulsory.. I literally searched for a 100 songs.. and finally selected dis one.. coz dis one dripped of attitude.. and I hope u like dis song as well)

Woah Woah

Now listen to me baby
Before i love and leave you
They call me heart breaker
I don't wanna deceive you

If you fall for me
I'm not easy to please
I'mma tear you apart
Told you from the start, baby from the start.

I'm only gonna break break ya break break ya heart.

Theres no point trying to hide it
No point trying to erase me
I know i got a problem
By doing this behavour

If you fall for me
I'm not easy to please
I'mma tear you apart
Told you from the start, baby from the start.

I'm only gonna break break ya break break ya heart...

(plss imagine Reyansh's performance in d first episode.. to the song nahi tere jeha hor disda.. haayyee.. it was soo hot)

How dare he.. Kria thought to herself.. How could someone soo burly, move so fluidly.. His moves were actually physically impossible.. How dare he.. How dare dis guy even defy the laws of physics.. Kria was burning wid anger.. His every move was like a slap on her face for taunting him just now..

*Snap* She came out of her thoughts as he snapped his fingers in front of her face..( remember like he did in d new yrs party??)

Rey: Fir se kho gayi naa baatcutter?? Ab bolo kaun dance kar sakta hai?? Rey whispered in her ears..

Kria: Tumhe duur rehna nahi aata kya?? Itna chipakte kyun ho?? Kria fumbled..

Rey: Tumhari aankhen kheenchti hai mujhe tumhare paas.. unko mana kyun nahi karti?? He smirked..

Kria: Aaargh.. Tumhe dharti pe mera dimaag khaane hi bheja hai kya universeji ne??

Rey: huhh.. uske liye toh dimaag hona chaahiye naa' *he said with full on puppy dog eyes..*

One look into those eyes and she lost her train of thought.. How she could look into them forever.. How they smouldered with all the intensity in the world.. *Snap* Again.. he snapped his fingers in front of her.. God this was beginning to get irritating.. Why the hell did she have such reactions to him..

Rey: M gonna go now.. Party tumhari hai naa.. m not gonna be ur show stealer love.. Go and have fun and enjoy ur limelight..

He turned around.. leaving her spellbound.. everytime he addressed her as love.. she felt all d butterflies in the world fluttering about in her stomach.. her heart leapt into sommersaults.. and she forgot to breathe every single freaking tym..!!

As he moved to some distance, he turned around, gave a flying kiss.. and smirked, " Do miss me, love.." and walked away wid all the pride in the world..

Dat flying kiss was enough to stop all her internal organs from functioning.. She now needed support to even stand.. coz she knew very well her knees had turned into jelly.. Ohh how she hated him with all her might for doing this to her.. "REYAANSH SINGHANIA I HATE YOU" Kria cursed him out aloud dis tym.. taking the support of a chair near her.. and catching up on all d breaths she had forgotten to take..


PRECAP: Kria's dance performance.. And a fashion show as kriyaansh being d showstoppers..


Edited by aria009hera - 13 years ago
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Edited by cuteupasna - 13 years ago
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AWSEOME...it was really mindblowing...luv it sooo much wen rey calls kriya LOVE...n thnxx for the pm...
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amazing amazing..just loved it
next part jaldi update karna
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On the other hand.. Rey was already in heaven.. His personal heaven.. those dark brown eyes invited him that it was almost maddening not to be near her.. (IN SHORT PPL.. LOOK LOOK HAWA HAWA CHALING.. I HOPE U LIKED MY PERSONAL DESCRIPTION OF LOOK LOOK HAWA HAWA)...of course i loved it...awesome update..thanks for the pm and plzzz update soon...😊
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awee that was awesome part👏
dont know from where to start

ok first kria talking to her self and complementing rey all the time gosh thats sooo sweet😉

swaron romance and the way swayam defended sharon was sooo adorable😍

then reys thought it was freakingly amazing👍🏼
and his dialogue "bhi bhi ghoomne ko taiyyar hun jaan.. tum hukum toh karo.." awee i am dead🤢he is sooo adorable😍

then vickys dialgue " kria ne meri bajaa dali"🤣🤣🤣
then the majnu dialogue 🤣🤣🤣

reys dance and the awesome song

rey adresses kria as "LOVE" hayeee *faint*🤢
and the flying kiss part was awesome😍

just loved this part❤️...it was complete entertainment package👏
please continue soon cant wait for the next part😍

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