SS: Lost Love LAST Update 5 pg16 - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
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i will definitely need more than that plz continue and pm me when u do that 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Amazing start...Look forward to reading more

seems very interesting
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Interesting
I Loved it :)
Please Continue
Edited by Angel-Girl - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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that was intense loved it can't wait to read more
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Very different than usual
Pls update and let us know
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Posted: 13 years ago
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lovely dear...thanks for the PM
continue soon...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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That ws beautifully written...
Update soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Lost Love

Her knees were shaking in fear. Every step she took she managed to turn around and see if the monster was behind her,seeking near by to attack on her poor defenseless..Kushi was heart broken realizing what happened.Who could he not believe me,more importantly he didn't even turn around and ask me whats the truth kushi what's your side of the story.She weeped across the crowed city of Delhi.

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He tightened his fist, repeatedly say to himself.
'forget her Arnav,don't be foolish"
Suddenly a knock at the door came surprising him at what the time it was.he quickly rearranged his shattered heart and gave the courage to stand and make his way down in the empty whole ways of RM mansion.

He opened the door gently expecting his sister to greet him from her early trip back.But he scaled and what his eyes gazed upon.
It was her...

Arnav please listen to me it wasn't my- before she could explain anything, his strong hand pulled her in.

How can u even show your face here in front of me, miss kushi kumare Gupta he yelled with his broken voice.What do you think you have the right to break my sisters house, her hopes and dreams are going to be shattered. I'm not that surprised on your low class behavior but i never new you could go this Far..you have no limitations do u Kushi. you can break my heart but not anajlis do you Understand that DAMMIT!
his eyes said a million things, but his hurtful words spat on her flesh.he tightened his grip on her shoulder not caring how much the pain affected her skin,compared to his bruised heart it was nothing.

What do u think Mr Arnav Singh raizada, that I would play with my own sisters husbands sister?.I'm not that shallow or that neech sumhji app she exclaimed.Shyam was the one who came in to My live and destroyed every happy moment.setting my family up in a low character,giving me hope and breaking that trust in moments?. U no me well Arnav I'm a low class girl from Lucknow.But this does Not mean that I have such a low class character.
her voice was strong but still Arnav could feel that she was heart broken,as her voice trailed off echoing in the hall.arnavs ears were bleeding in horror but
Arnav was silent desolving every word that scram out of her mouth.he losned his grip.closing his eyes as a tears fell gently.

I no I am just another girl for u Arnav...but u mean the world to me..she closed her eyes to let the pain unleash and throw every word she had swallowed for the past 2 weeks.and don't worry my face will never appear in front of u again.

she whispered before she could burst out of tears..her numb eyes made way across Arnavs face for that last time.sucking out every joyful lov and magical moment in his arms,and unleashing a shallow monstrous side of him. Making her soft and delicate heart hard and cold.she made exist.before realizing were her tired feet took her she collapsed on the floor.the last words that remand in her head after that incident were a loud Scream of Arnav KUSHI!


Precap: Arnav barred his face In to kushis neck were her hollow gap layed.I didn't mean to hurt u u no I never do please wake up Please.I would kill my myself if anything would happen to you.the pain is to much kushi wake up his cracking voices whispered in her ears.
Kushi Still half awake but will conscious.Arnav slammed his head against the wall in agony and pain Kushi wake up for my sake he Scram !...
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NOTES!

its tense as I mentioned it before Up coming part is the second last part hopefully depending later on.Comment comment and Comment I am thinking on making mother SS but totally different compared to Lost Love...do tell how u enjoyed it:) PLUS DO note the sentence tht are in running writting. Arnav and kushi DO care for each other,they say many things to hide there feelings, but the heart can never hold on long, so Note the Running writing. this is not only in my SS but in the real show, hiding among some fake words but ALWAYS manage to slip some words out. :)

NOTE TO READERS: PLEASE PLEASE i beg of you can u comment if you would like a pm or just if you want to tell me how it was because i have gotten many peoples request , people leave comments in my Inbox and my Scrapbook, it gets very un easy for me to then go back and forth on Pm's ..and if you have read my story on the 1 UPDATE then do comment.. it gets hard for me to deliver the messages for next Update so MY PERSONAL REQUEST to you Readers all. and i no the other STORY WRITTERS would agree with me as well .thank u hope you enjoyed it XOXOXO ALSO IF WONT PM..PLS PM ME SO I CAN ADD U


Hira ( next part COMING SOON!)
Edited by HiraHasan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i'm all for intensity babes but pkzzz make it a happy ending plzzz or warn me in advance..😉 (sad endings leave me depressed)😭
neway the update was awesome... do continue
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Posted: 13 years ago
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AWESOME story and very well written👏

The precap seems sooo intense..update soon.

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