OS: Khushi's Broken Bed

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raii

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Posted: 13 years ago

#81

OMG!! The end is hilarious...the start was touching and the middle is romantic... 👏

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nature-lover

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Posted: 13 years ago

#82

So heart touching OS and thanks for the PM 😃

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Sona

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Posted: 13 years ago

#83

loved the OS...very emotional...& just @ end 🤣

-Sona

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Sanchari

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Posted: 13 years ago

#84

your last lines are just brilliant touches dude🤣

Do you have a pm list, what should I do to get included in that holy list?

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coolie001

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Posted: 13 years ago

#85

DO PM ME 4 ANY WORKS

NICE WORK

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soni_md

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Posted: 13 years ago

#86

🤣 What fault is it of theirs, that the bed is so weak? Loved the emotion, and that he couldn't control himself around her ...

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goguma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#87

why doesn't this scene happen on TV? 😉

this is too good! loved it!

and pls continue to PM me on your future work...tks!

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asumi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#88

you know every thing was sooo cute - khushi's fear of loosing him- arnav holding on to her tightly... i was like "awww what a cute OS"

then akash's line- ROFL!!!! tooo good !!!! 🤣

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arhi_maneet

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Posted: 13 years ago

#89

Nice os. Can u plz pm me from next time?

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667300

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Posted: 13 years ago

#90

Loved Arnav's possessiveness and Khushi's fear at hearing about her getting married and I wish that's how it would have happened :(

The broken bed was great, if only they'd actually done something to break it :P

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