aadha ishq,aadha hai aadha ho jayega..!

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

ABI

@ABBY92

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#61

Yahan bhi sad part???...Nvm,atleast it keeps me busy on d weekends...n Pooh,i cant wait for d next part eventhough its gonna b sad!!!

Quote

Palak

@partyprincess16

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#62

Ur choice of song selection is really good... Mere haath mein tera haath ho is an amazing song for them! 😊
But itna choota sa update 😔 please give us a long update next time! I am ready for the sad part... Got tissues, ice cream as well 😊
Thankyou very much fir the PM and please update very soon.. Hopefully TODAY!!! 😃

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

sukanya

@sukanyaa

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#63

superb update...n thanx fr d pm...

Quote

...Pwinch3ss...

@...Pwinch3ss...

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#64

why sad one yr plz yr not the sad one plz...😭

Quote

SugarCubes

@SugarCubes

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#65

Heart breaking??!! Ok, dis was simply amazing nd I luv u fr dis bt nxt part me agar kuch aisa vaisa hua to me luv se hate pe Iyar aaungi! :P matlab agar hate na bhi ho (cz Dats lol difficult) maar to pukka dalungi! :P

Quote

purvi

@-dark.horse-

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#66

another update..!!ready wid tissues..!!

after dinner..!!

guys asking gals to join d dance floor..!!

rey n kriya ask swayam to join dem...n sharon sitting on d bench as she cnt dance..!!

swayam dancing n sharon looking at him constantly..!!

flashback...RDX sir ki party...!!hayeee...!!😍

sharon is lost in her thought...just remembering RDX sir ki party...!!!after dis flashback her feeling get even more strong...she wanted to talk to swayam..!!

swayam's dialogue-tum bht special ho n hamara first kiss b bht special hoga..!!😍

sharon smiling..!!n everybody else busy in dancing..!1

after sumtym every1 cum n circle d sharon...dancing around her she is standing in between..!!moving slowly slowly..!!every1 was der except swayam...he is standing distance away frm der n looking at sharon..!!

suddenly der eyes meet..!!look look hawa hawa..!!!*phela nasha phela khumar*

swayam leave d party n went inside..!!sharon wanna go inside..!!

she break d circle n follow swayam..!!

sharon-swayam swayam swayam..!!

swayam-stop n look back...n saw sharon standing der..!!n he moves on..!!

sharon- swayam wait wanna talk to u..!!!ooouuuccchhh..!!

swayam jaise hi heard d sound of ooouucch he look back..!!sharon is in pain..!!

he go der n den SwaRon walking hand in hand..!!

swayam takes sharon inside..!!n said bolo sharon kya bolna hai..!!

sharon-swayam mujhe tumhe kuch batana hai..!!!

swayam-mujhe sb pata hai..!!

sharon-kya pata hai tumhe swayam..!!

swayam-sharon maine sb dekh liye tha..!!!tum or shivam n started crying..!!

sharon-her hand on her face...!!*shocked*

swayam tum jaise soch rahe ho aaisa kuch nai hai...n mujhe tumhe ye nai kuch aur bolna tha..!!

swayam-mujhe kuch nai suna hai..n bang his hand on d wall..!!!!

blood start cuming..!!

sharon-swayammm..!!!!ye kya kiya tumne..!!

sharon swayam ko bench me baitha kr try to find first aid...!

sharon find it n took swayam's hand in her hand..!!

*flashback* scrapbook scene..!!both of dem looking in each other eyes..n had tears in eyes...!!

swayam took his eyes away n see dat bandage ho gaya hai..!!

he takes his hand ...aansu poch kr he walks away frm der...!!

sharon standing n crying..!!

in d party every1 finding sharon..!!

sharon try to handle herself...cry her heart loud..!!thinking she is lost everything..!!!

n den she suddenly she heard a voice sharonnn..!!

aansu saaf krti hai sharon n walks towards d party..!!!

hopefully will update next update soon..!!😊

Quote

chetna

@crazysky

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#67

waitng 4 ur next update n this is awesome part

Quote

SugarCubes

@SugarCubes

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#68

Pooh! I'm gonna kill u! Apne saath ho sake to doc rakhiyo, u'll need it! Maarne aa rhi hu me! How cn u?! :/ nd agar apni jaan pyari he den chup chap na acha wala (happy wala) update kario nd JALDI!!!! (wich u do) :P

Quote

purvi

@-dark.horse-

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: SugarCubes
Pooh! I'm gonna kill u! Apne saath ho sake to doc rakhiyo, u'll need it! Maarne aa rhi hu me! How cn u?! :/ nd agar apni jaan pyari he den chup chap na acha wala (happy wala) update kario nd JALDI!!!! (wich u do) :P

hahahahaha cum baby cum..!!yaa yaa will update soon..!!