PaSSion oF LuV *kriyaaansh* SS ch17 pg138 5'apr - Page 6

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Posted: 13 years ago
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☺️woww...awesome i am dying to read the rest please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!👏👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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*First Kiss continued*


Chapter 2:

im sorry if thr is any spelling or grammer mistaks.. i dint hv tym to check out..


The eagerness the hungerness was all over the two bodies.. kria's mind suddenly got flashed on wat was happening she opened her eyes suddenly.. nd pushed rey slightly they wer still sticked to each other but now the furious angry rey's expression was bac (plzz don't b irritated at tis the next scene has the kiss so releax u will get 2 read kiss in dis updt nly!)

Rey moved a step bac wid anger wid furiousness.. kria was feeling really very sad tat once he failed to understand her!! It seemed tat whole world was against her.. she was luking wid a 'y r u doing dis' expresiion on her face..

Rey looked deep into her eyes nd whispered angrily on her ears.. "tumei maafi chahiye na thn kiss me!!!!"

She was broken at his words.. he turned aside his anger was still persisting..

K: "rey ????? kya ek kiss meri pyaar ko prove karegi??? Is dis the love we share??"

Rey: "muje pata tha u will not do it!! puri din intezaar kia tumare liye!! Jus jus forget it! mei jaa rha hoon! Bye!!!!!!"

Rey had taken jus 3 steps frm her she held his arms..

K: "muje pata hai meri Galti hai!!! lekin mei kya krti shayad universeji b nhi chahthe ki mei yahan aao! Tumne mere liye pura din intezaar kia! Rey im sorry im really sorry par kya muje maaf krne ke liye ek kiss?? Rey tum.."

He was to move she pulled wid all his strength nd placed him against the wall.. stared into his eyes.. rey was surprised at her moves

K: "agar ek kiss se muje maafi miljayegi thn mei peeche nhi hatoongi!!!!! Mujpe sirf aur sirf tumara haq hai aur kisi ka b nhi!!!!! And I trust u more than myself!!!!!!"

She had tears in her eyes.. she held herself as close 2 him as possible.. her face her exp her tears wer engh to get bac the real rey!! He was guilty fr wt he had jus did!!! Her each drop of tears was equal to 1000 knife's wich was stabbing him hard on his heart!!!!! He could nt control but tears rolled down his cheeks..he fell in to ground sat thr ' kria sensed it nd saw him.. he banged his hand hard on the wall!!

He could not forgive himself fr wat he had jus done' neither he was wrong nor she.. neither it was a big fuss to make.. it was jus a kiss! But will the kiss decide the how much one luved each othr???? Rey cud hv let her go! Y did do this? It was his ego! But his love made him realise his mistake the mistake fr wich he may never forgive himself fr forcing her or putting a condition on her.. love is the confortableness wich each share bw each other.. love is trust in each others eyes.. love is the faith in each other wich will bind dem together forevr.. he had proved his pure love to be wrong.. he cud wait fr his baatcutter for whole life nd here it was jus 10 hrs .. neither he listned to her explainations! All this thouts made him go weak nd made him hate himself!! He stood up .. kria was silent she cud nt c rey in tat condition..

K: "rey plz tum'"

Rey held his hands on her cheeks..

R: "kria plz plz muje maaf kardo mei aisa nhi krna chatha tha gusse meine '. Kria plz plz muje maaf kardo! Meine toh tumara trust b thod diya im sorry kria im really sorry kria tum ro mat plzz mei tumare aankon aasun nhi dek skta plz plz kria tum.."

K: "I trust u rey! I trust u completely! Tumei mujse maafi maangne ki koi zaroorat nhi hai..!! muje pata hai tumara gussa! Lekin humara pyaar is gusse is ego is muskilon se kahi badi hai ryt???"

R: "im sorry kria im really sorry aage se aisa nhi hog im sorry"

K: "aage se aisa mei hone b nhi doongi!!! Meri rey ke aankon mei b aansun acche nhi dikte!"

She smile bw her tears nd wipes his tears..

They luk @ each other nd give a tight hug..

Both of them fr once felt they lost each other.. but destiny will nevr let tat happen! Fr dem their destiny was love! The pure genuine luv infront of wich the whole world is jus a 0! Infront of wich evn fate has to bow his head down!!!!

Rey loosend the hug held her hands kissed it nd said..

R: "itz late mei tumei gar chod deta hoon! Aur kal hum date pe jayenge ok..?"

Wid a smiling face..

Nd he continued

R: "but kria plzz ek baar kehdo ki tumne muje maaf krdiya! Plz"

K: "(smiled) haan maafi? Wo itne assaani se nhi milegi! Hmm tumei ek task krna padega!!!"

R: "(laughing) accha teek hai! muje challenge? Bolo kya krna hai! jaan b dedoonga poochkar toh deko'"

At his words she looked deep into his eyes..

K: "agar tum jaan dedoge toh mei b kaha rahoongi! Meri jaan toh tum mei basti hai.. (ahww thse lines! Hayeee kills me!)

They both luked into each others eyes.. wid a smile nd frver being together exp'

Kria bowed her head down..

K: "tumei hmmm tu tumei wo .. w.."

R: "bolo kria meri task kya hai (swweeet voice)"

K: (wid very very very slow tone) kiss!"

Rey's eyes widened'. He was nt sure wat he jus heard..

K: "kya yeh task tum kr skte ho.."

Rey was feeling as though he was luckiest guy in d world to hav a gal wo trust him like anythn.. fr d first he thout he shudnt but both thn realised tat they shud make dis moment more spl! They wer now sure tat they will remmbr tis as the Special momnt of their life nd nt as a mistake or a blunder (ofcourz itz just a kiss fr some but fr some it is KISS?? Both mentality has been shown clearely bw these two..)

Rey came forward as kria had already held her hands on his cheeks.

He held her neck in both the hands nd strtd moving further.. nd futher fr wich she was moving bac nd bac to get the support of the wall.. she rested her bac aginst the wall..

Rey kissed again near her cheeks (jus mms away frm lips like in haye rama seq) nd thn caressed her cheeks getting her seduced by his actions..

They looked deep in her eyes nd was ready fr d kiss.. she gave a blushing smile nd closed her eyes nd tilted her face a little..

Rey came forward nd placed his lips on her.. he slowly kissed her upper lip (or tasted in more brief).. kria felt the sensation wich burnt nd wich melted her completely widin him..

He again kissed her upper lip fr wich she responded by kissing his lover lips.. it was lip lock kiss (more frankly).. (not French kiss)

They maked out enjoying the moment wich made them spl every sec.. they kissed nd kissed getting their hunger filled nd bringing their love into the next level of passion..

Aftr few mins of long special intense romantic kiss of the two.. rey broke the kiss nd kissed her forhead..

Kria was still trying to grasp the air by breathing fast..

R: "kria im d most luckiest man the world! Coz angel is wid me frver my life..!"

At his words kria was touched nd she cud all say is tat

K: "I love u rey.."

Rey hearing dis words.. "love u too baatcutter"

They smiled nd hugged..


~this was how their FIRST KISS was~


Flashback over..


Present:


there was the sounds of call bell..

She broke her chain of thouts nd wondered who may hav come tis late!

She knew its nt rey as she had her convo wid him in d mrng nd he said he may b cumin next day..

She took the buk nd kept it near the lamp frnt of her foto frame..

She ran downstairs opened the door, nd was soo surprised to c NEHA in red saree..

K: "tum????"

N: "haan! Mee! Hw u r??? muje tumse baat krni thi toh vicky ne yahan chod diya aur wo office chala gaya! Kya mei andar aa sakti hoon?"

K: "array aaona!!"

K: "kya kaha vicky delhi se wapas agaya??"

N: "haan abi abi!"

K: "(in mind- toh rey? Rey kaha hai wo kyun nhi aye?)"

N: "kya hua kaha kho gayi madam!!"

K: "kuch nhi! Tu bata achanak kaise! Kal toh waise b milna tha!"

N: "wo .. wo kya hena mere deewane ne kaha ki d d date.. (sharmaate hue)"

Kria laughs!

K: "date??? Aur tu aaj b waise sharmaa rhi hai jaise pehle date pe sharmaa ayi thi! Tu bina!"

Neha smile

N: "neha getting nervous!"

K: "kya? Tu na pagal hai!!!! array ab toh wo tumari husband! Abi b nervous??"

N: "pati hai toh kya hua!! Hai toh wahi ki wahi deewaane na!!"

Neha blush

K: "accha meri maa teek hai but ismei mei kya karu??"

N: "tu meri saat shopping chal!!"

K: "kya??? Raat ki 9 baje tuje shopping krni hai?"

N: "haan meine deka hai vicky ne kuch gift laya hai mere liye! Ab muje b use kuch dena soo u coming wid neha now!!"

K: "okk teek hai! chalo.."

They go a mall nd neha purchases a ring fr vicky.. while kria's eyes fall on a chain set (there wer 2 chains.. one ladies nd one males.. wid a comn pendent wich cn b split into 2 pieces!)

She sees the chain.. it was very beautiful silver colored chair wid a pendent of a guy nd gal in a dancing position.. (ok I think I saw d same pendent in some ff also im sorry if the respective writer has a prob I jus wanted 2 add it.. jus temme ur name I cn giv u d credit also as I don't remmbr wich ff it was) nd pendent cn b separated ..

Neha pulled her out of the mall wer her mind was still in tat two chains.. it read the life of kriyaansh!!!

That's all fr 2day'

Precap: flashback of a Date..

Present- Rey coming bac nd surprising kria..


previous chapter: page1

next chapter part1: page14

Edited by nams_arsha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#53
awsam tu great h yr m *DEAD*
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Posted: 13 years ago
#54
naaams u r gr8👏!!!what an update...woh bhi do ff's...kamal kar diyaa...such a romantic one...loved it..thnx for the pm and plzzz update soon(waise tum karthi rahthi ho..phir bhi)😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
#55
nams di why do u always kill me by ur updates n leave me in the want for more...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#56
Grt update!!!!! Loved it!!!! Thanks for the pm!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#57
hey nams RES hahahhaa tadpofy now khe khe *EDIT*
😆😆😆
mai aayi
mai aayi
mai ayyi
lol...nams
pehle to *hugs*
awww i love u...kyu??
arre u already know that jhalli
but chalo time to raise u up the channa jhaad 😆
kya likhti hai tu nams
awesome ...mazza aagya
its very different from d3 and completely speaks of ur wings wali imagination😆
its superbeautiful...
u are a gem...its actually lovely
very light hearted..no much drama..just a simple tale with its own elegance
love the way...they are weaving the love basket together😳
kriyaansh already are a big part of my life and all this makes me all the more ecstatsic...all in a new form..beyond the bounds of my imagination for sure
u have written it in a very charismatic way...a fan way which makes it very special also
and yeah hehe keep asking me for songs
i love to suggest songs😆
and thanku so much for writing this...its brilliant😳👏
Edited by kajen - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#58
i'm 🤢!
let me cm bak 2 lyf n den comment!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#59
aww is was really nice Part update soon next one !
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Posted: 13 years ago
#60
nams !!!! this was mindblasting !!! tumhare paas itne saare ff's likhne ka

tym hota hai ??? btW LOVED IT !!!

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