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Dee-

@Dee-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#51

lyraa..that was so romantic and sad. Gave me goosebumps when I read it. And I love the title too. Update soon ! [Update your other FFs too :P]

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andru_sk

@andru_sk

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Posted: 13 years ago

#52

Gorgeous . Khushi is really dead ...or... is hidden some where in the town or maybe in a hospital in coma... or ...she's having amnesia and live happy but in the same time empty without the love of Arnav ?😕
I'm looking forward.

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Honkytonk

@Honkytonk

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Posted: 13 years ago

#53

Great start to ur new SS...really felt Arnav sorrow, u've written his thoughts so beautifully.

Many thanks for PM

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music1

@music1

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Posted: 13 years ago

#54

Another stunning one from u hon...not bad at all.Keep going.Comming back to the SS.What a way to start.Khushi presumably dead but still lives in Arnav's thoughts.Loved it.U know though it is a tried concept what attracts me to ur works is the way u portray the emotions and also that subtle flow of the story which unveils at its own pace ,keeping readers like me checking my inbox often to see whether u have updated the nest chapter.The concept is not new but I'm pretty sure u are gonna make it into a spectacular one.Good luck to u and as I said will be checking my inbox every now and then to see whether u paid me a visit.😉

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Kuku

@lankan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#55

I really loved this new SS. :) I hope she is still alive.

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Yazzy91

@Yazzy91

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Posted: 13 years ago

#56

Great start! it was touching to see how arnav deep down knows khushi is alive, while anjali thinks his in denial! Thanks for the PM! xx

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meghnas

@meghnas

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Posted: 13 years ago

#57

very emotional n touching...love the way Arnav does whatever Khushi would want him to do 😊
plz let khushi be alive 😭

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hkhb17

@hkhb17

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Posted: 13 years ago

#58

chapter 1 was so beautiful!!! please do continue! very well written!

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fareeha

@pinkpearlz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#59

Lyraa this is superb! The banner reminds me of Harry Porter. Very interesting start. You seem to be a master at tragic love stories, bringing out intense emotions. This whole update had me hooked right till the then (even refused answering my brother, which finally pissed him off). Am also praying that arnav's prayer is answered. Loved it.